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Kooljay

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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • Convince a criminal to confess
  • Torture a suspect
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 11/9/25
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/mianmen-028.755845/post-22153626

Additional information: N/a

Mission passed. No artifact has been awarded. - Sinthorius
 
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • Do some moderate meditation to improve focus
  • Deal with a traumatic event from your past"
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 11/10/25
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/mianmen-028.755845/page-3#post-22153646

Additional information: Traumatic past even is stated in the bio as well.


Mission passed. No artifact has been awarded.

This mission felt bordedline. I was tempted to lower it to C rank, as it felt lacking in the content. Try to build on your mission more going forwards please. - Sinthorius
 
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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
  • Try to protect the community that Angel help prosper
  • fight a group larger then yourself
  • Fight an opponent stronger then yourself
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 8/11/25/-13/11/25
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Mission passed. No artifact has been awarded. - Sinthorius
 
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Antares

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Mission Rank A-Rank
Story elements chosen Custom Element - Escape at any cost
Date of beginning & date of conclusion 1/11/25 -> 15/11/25 (Base Time)
Relevant mission links
Additional information Delegate Mission

Mission passed. No artifact has been awarded. - Sinthorius
 
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Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: Secure lodging for the night during travels
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 17/11/25
Relevant mission links: Mission Link
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Mission passed. No artifact has been awarded. - Sinthorius
 
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Mission Rank A-Rank
Story elements chosen (Custom) Let off some steam
Date of beginning & date of conclusion 17/11/25 (Base time)
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Mission passed. No artifact has been awarded. - Sinthorius
 
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Mission Rank: D - Rank
Story elements chosen: Engage in self reflection (1)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 7/11/25
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Additional information: N/A

Mission passed. No artifact for you. - Sinthorius
 
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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
  • Explore the Landmark (C-rank)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 19/11/25
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/the-necropolis-a.778855/page-2#post-22153854
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Mission downgraded to D-rank. This read like a short, philosophical stroll than an exploration of the landmark and all it had to offer. Perhaps if the mission objective were "Contemplate the moral implications of the Underworld" this would have been a better fit. No VIA has been awarded (75). - Zaphkiel
 
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • Explore the Necropolis beneath Irkalla and confront the truth behind the riddle, and behind yourself (B-rank)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 19/11/25
Relevant mission links: Additional information:

Mission passed. A VIA has been awarded. - Zaphkiel

(Mukō: Kenkō Chūnyū) – Void: Healthy Infusion
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: C
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Whenever the user heals themselves successfully for at least 40 health in a single turn they have a 75% chance to gain a single Void Infusion.
 
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Mission Rank C
Story elements chosen Confront a group of bandits
Date of beginning & date of conclusion 20/11/25
Relevant mission links Mission Link
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Mission passed. No VIA has been awarded (88). - Zaphkiel
 
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Kudamon

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Mission Rank D
Story elements chosen Reflect on a past action
Date of beginning & date of conclusion 20/11/25
Relevant mission links Mission Link
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Mission passed. Nice read, that was. No VIA has been awarded. - Zaphkiel
 
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Mission Rank D
Story elements chosen Defend yourself from a wild beast
Date of beginning & date of conclusion 20/11/25
Relevant mission links Mission Link
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Mission passed. No VIA has been awarded. - Zaphkiel
 
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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Deal with the failure and deflect by completing a task for an organization.
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 21/1125
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/tsuchi-heihō-103.756116/post-22153913

Mission downgraded to B-rank. Though it was a good execution, your bio was never in a situation of considerable distress or danger at any point in this episode. I suggest more tangible consequences for failure, and more obstacles for success. No VIA has been awarded (78). - Zaphkiel
 
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