Storyboard Mission Submission

Gobi Gobletsson

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Players involved: Gobi Gobletsson
Mission Rank: B(A?)
Story elements chosen:
  • B-rank: Gathering raw materials for the smith Marzan x1
  • B-rank: Deal with a traumatic event from the past
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 12-02-2023
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/upper-barrens-087.755905/#post-22122249
Additional information: N/A

Approved by Imperfect.
No Artifact awarded.
 
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Kirikoe

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Players involved: Kirikoe
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:

C - Perform a moderate workout routine
C - Defend yourself from wild beasts
B - Deal with a traumatic event from your past
S - Experiment with very advanced ninjutsu
S - Survive a near-death situation

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 13/02/23
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/thousand-needles-077.755894/post-22122258
Additional information: N/A

-Mission passed- Knocking this down to B rank. While this was a good mission, you placed too many mission criteria together which devalued others. You should of split this into several missions and you would have been awarded multiple amounts of kumi. Build the story over several missions. There wasn't enough for the highest criteria. No artefact awarded
 
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • Convince a criminal to confess
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 02/13
Relevant mission links: x
Additional information: N/A

-Mission Passed- Daddy would be proud, no artefact awarded.
 
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Kirikoe

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Players involved: Kirikoe
Mission Rank: B(A?)
Story elements chosen:
Custom (B?) - Gather special Medicinal herbs
D - Run an errand for someone
S - Win a fight without your ninjutsu

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 14/02/23
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/thousand-needles-077.755894/post-22122342
Additional information: N/A

-Mission passed- This is a B rank pass. The effort you put in to gather medical supplies was great but the fight without nin was lacking, as for the run an errand that kind of blended in to the gathering of herbs. You can use less plot points there's no extra reward for doing a bunch together and it dilutes your story. No artefact awarded
 
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Players involved: Kirikoe
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
B - Gather information from a suspect! through just or unjust means
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 20/02/23
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/thousand-needles-077.755894/post-22122633
Additional information: N/A

-Mission Passed- Artefact awarded

(Mukō: Yūryō) – Void: Charged
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: B
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: A Void Infused modification that does not act as an Accumulator or Spender; rather, it passively increases the user’s maximum Void Infusion cap by 1. This can be stacked with other Charged Void Infused Artifacts, including itself if the user owns multiple copies.
 
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Players involved: Sinthorus
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Learn to use the chakra arms.
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 23/02/23
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/bone-fields-078.755896/post-22122707
Additional information: Bijuu mission (Spoke to Imp about my posts auto merging even after not posting for 2 days)
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Players involved: Sinthorus
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
- Overcome the Bijuu's weakness
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 24/02/23
Relevant mission links: Additional information: Bijuu mission

Both Missions Passed
 
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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:

  • Infiltrate an enemy's organization
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 02/25
Relevant mission links: x
Additional information: N/A


Mission Passed
 
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Players involved: Sinthorus
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
- Understand the curse of the bijuu (A rank)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/03/23
Relevant mission links:
Additional information: Bijuu mission

Mission Passed
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Players involved: Sinthorus
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Escape before the bijuu hunters find you.
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 06/04/23
Relevant mission links:
Additional information: Bijuu mission

Mission Passed: You have been awarded a C-Rank artifact for the completion of this mission.

(Mukō: Meisō) – Void: Meditation
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: C
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Remaining within a single landmark and meditating for three turns (or three posts separated by 45 minutes) grants the user a 75% chance to gain a single Void Infusion.


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Players involved: Sinthorus
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
- Unlock a new bijuu skill
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 07/04/23
Relevant mission links:
Additional information: Bijuu mission

Mission Passed
 
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Players involved: Kirikoe
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
S - Choose between what is right and what is easy
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 08/4/23
Relevant mission links: Additional information: Going for S rank on this story element due to the nature of the decision made

Mission Passed
 
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Players involved: Sinthorus
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
- Fight an enemy stronger than yourself to save your bijuu (S)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 09/04/23
Relevant mission links:
Additional information: Bijuu mission

Mission Passed: You have been awarded an A-Rank artifact for the completion of this mission

(Mukō: Hogosha Seishin) – Void: Guardian Spirit
Type: Void Infused Artifact
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Whenever the user’s familiars, defined as Elemental Familiars, Summonings (excluding unique summonings like the Gedo Mazou and Statue of Hamura), Aburame bugs, or Inuzuka Ninken suffer 50 or more damage in a single instance this Void Infused Artifact has a 50% chance of activating. Upon activation the user will gain a single Void Infusion and their familiar, as defined within this Void Infused Artifact, will be healed for 40 Health Points.
 
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