Storyboard Mission Submission

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
Tobusekai: Take The Power Back

Rank: A
Description: Your mission is a simple one, though may be dangerous. Claim land in Tobusekai. By any means necessary. Spread the name of Tsumigakure, and take what belongs to us. To pass this mission you will need to face some form of violent resistance be it bandits, undead, or other beasts. You are to clear out a landmark and claim it for Tsumigakure.
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 23/3 2020
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/tenjin’s-cathedral-128.756141/page-2#post-21988667
Additional information: Just fighting uraniumnazis and claiming a landmark.

Mission Failed. This isn't in Tobusekai. Apologies but I mentioned this on discord. That mission is for claiming land in Tobusekai. I realized you put in a lot of work, and I know a decline for being in the wrong place is going to feel bad, but if you want to use that mission you have to do it in Tobusekai or it doesn't meet the requirements of the mission. There are two options for the future and you can talk to me about them on discord if you want. 1. You can use a custom element. 2. I can write a village mission for claiming normal landmarks. Either way, we'll get you on track because the roleplay was fine.

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Players Involved: @Red-Robin
Mission Rank: B-rank
Story Elements Chosen:
Investigate the mysterious illness ( 3 )
Date of Beginning & Date of Conclusion: 3/22/2020 - 3/23/2020
Relevant Mission Links: ( First Post ) , ( Final Post )
Additional Information: First mission using the new arc storyboard elements. ✌

Mission Passed. Good work.

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Mission Rank: D-Rank
Story elements chosen:
  • Run an errand for someone
  • Do a good deed
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 23/03/2020 [AB Time]
Relevant mission links: Mission Link
Additional information: Nothing additional to add that hasn't been mention already.

Mission Passed.

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Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen: Take measures to avoid further infection (1) | Hear rumors about the virus origins (1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 03/23/20 - 03/23/20
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: Kōtetsu catches up to the men who set fire to the forest. After hearing the reason they did it and learning about the rumors of a mysterious virus and it's origins, he quickly disposes of them the avoid further infection. Additionally, he sends his ninken to hunt down the wolves they had encountered earlier and dispose of them.

- 25% Ryo Increase
- 50% Kumi Increase
- 2x Artifact Gain Chance

Mission Passed. Nice +50%

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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen: Capture live specimens of Undead (5) Defeat a huge horde of the Undead. (5)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 24/03/20
Relevant mission links: Additional information:

Mission Passed. Close to failing. Try to add in a bit more detail in the future.

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Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
-Get a new member to join the Clan.
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 03/24/20 - 03/24/20
Relevant mission links:
[Mission Start]
[Post]
[Post]
[Post]
[Mission End]
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed. You satisfy the element but this almost didn't make it for a C-rank.

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Mission Rank: C
Storyboard Elements Chosen:
  • Facilitate an agreement with an important figure. [Custom C-Rank Element]
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 24/03/2020 [AB Time]
Relevant Mission Links:
Mission Link - Start
Mission Link - One
Mission Link - Two
Mission Link - Three
Mission Link - End
Additional Information: N/A

Mission Passed. I had the same issue as with Serpent above, it satisfied the element barely but could use more roleplay next time.

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Mission Rank: D Rank
Story elements chosen: Explore an infected location
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 24/03/20
Relevant mission links: >>> Click <<<
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed. You win a D-rank artifact. Can be submitted in the Custom Artifact Thread or redeemed for ryo.

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- Find a way to contain the virus / Enforce it (Custom)

Date of beginning & Date of conclusion: 24/03/2020
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/south-west-kinai-island-146.756159/post-21989113
Additional info: Time to impose martial law in the lands, adding a bit of the RL situation to the nw one. What better reason for a second creation right? Right?

Mission Passed.

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: Help a large group of people to prevent the spread of infection (4) | Diagnose a local populace (3)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 03/24/20 - 03/24/20
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: With knowledge of the current epidemic, Kōtetsu returns to the Inuzuka clan in order to help prevent the spread of infection and diagnoses his clan members before heading off in search of a potential cure.

- 25% Ryo Increase
- 50% Kumi Increase
- 2x Artifact Gain Chance

Mission Passed. You win an A-rank artifact. Can submit it in the Custom Artifact Submission Thread or redeem it for ryo.

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Mission Rank: S-class
Story elements chosen:
1. Prevent the spread of infection anyway you can (5)
2. Character development/ growth (5)
Date of beginning & Date of conclusion: 24/03/2020
Relevant mission links: [
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Additional info: Empty Island. Void of NPC.


Mission Failed. This was good character development but I have to fail to for a few reasons. 1. You didn't put your biography in enough danger, or tension for an S-rank. 2. Character development/growth is overestimated in this element. I feel it would be a C-B rank at most which would lower the rank of the mission. Which if brought down to an A-rank would have most likely passed, but on a side note, you're wilding trying to make a "mobile island" on the grounds of "it not being battle-related."

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Mission Rank: C
Story Elements Chosen:
-Collect Medical Herbs (1)
-Defeat undead friends(3)
Date of Beginning and Date of Completion: 3/23/2020-3/24/2020
Relevant links: [1] [2]
Other Information:
Second element is a custom element for the arc
25% increase due to Arc 13 story board elements

Mission Passed.

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Mission Rank: C
  • Defeat a lingering undead
Date Of Beginning & Conclusion: 3/24/20-3/24/20
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Mission Failed. Wut? No. First off, read the Storyboard Missions Criteria. This is nowhere near a C-rank or even a D-rank.

This would have failed even as a D-rank. The effort and work and time aren't there to be paid for. Do better.

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Players Involved: @Red-Robin
Mission Rank: A-rank
Story Elements Chosen:
Help a large group of people to prevent the spread of infection. ( 4 )
Obtain firsthand experience of the severe effects of the virus. ( 4 )
Date of Beginning & Date of Conclusion: 3/23/2020 - 3/24/2020
Relevant Links: ( First Post ) , ( Final Post )
Other Information: Medical supplies mentioned were provided by @Mirai and herbs mentioned brought by @Crane__ , both respective to their quotes in the final post.

Mission Passed. Reading through your missions a second-time @[email protected] I can feel myself forgetting everything already.

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