Story Im writing.
- Thread starter KillerbYo
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Sapiens Sequax Sex Semita
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not bad.
writing style could use some work hard to read cause i'm constantly thinking how it would sound if the words were slightly rearranged or swapped out with more appropriate ones, probably just me tho. also the fact that the first chapter is at the bottom bothers me.
writing style could use some work hard to read cause i'm constantly thinking how it would sound if the words were slightly rearranged or swapped out with more appropriate ones, probably just me tho. also the fact that the first chapter is at the bottom bothers me.