[CJ] Step 1 in plan [Murder Lili-Chwan One Day]

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*dropkicks out of one of the taverns into you*

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Now, due to injury, I won't be able to perform the jutsus u-u

( Ninjutsu: Ryousei Kanshou ) Ninja Arts: Amphibian Intervention
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Based on the principle of friction and microscopic texture. While some materials may seem smooth to the naked eye, in the nano-scale, they're comprised of multiple irregularities and rough textures. When two materials drag on eachother, the inherited friction increases exponentially, superior than it would happen case the materials were virtually smooth. Applying the teachings of the basic Tree/Water Walking techniques, the user is able to create a thin layer of chakra across any surface of his/her own body. The chakra is thus able to cover or enhance the microscopic irregularities, thus increasing or decreasing the friction to extremes.

( Kato Enten ) Smooth Tadpole- The thin layer will get rid of the irregularities in one's body surface, allowing a nearly zero-friction surface. Given the natural flexibility and curvature of the user's own body, and allying it with well-timed motions, the user is able to become impervious to any physical attack, allowing it to slip off the side. The selective aspect of the jutsu allows one to retain some un-covered areas, permitting usages such as whole-body "armor" with naked soles for walking, left covered-sole and right naked sole for fast gliding, covered arm for evasion and naked fist for attack, etc.

( Gama Ranbou ) Rough Toad - The thin layer will accentuate the irregularities in one's body surface, increasing the friction. It allows one to have a much better grip on objects, almost sticking to them in a microscopic scale. Likewise, it allows one to mimic the Lotus Effect, becoming a superhydrophobic surface. This, among other things, would turn the user impervious to pathogenic agents like bacteria, fungi or algae growth, reducing or eliminating the area of contact with the water particles in which these pathogens dwell and proliferate.

Effective against Earth and Water based elements, to a certain extend, as one can be affected through the sheer size of the tangible object. There is a protection against physical blades, but not intangible blades, such as those created with Wind or Energy based elements. While it does cover oneself with chakra, the low ammount of chakra deployed is minimal, and thus, outside the described effects, it is useless as a chakra armor, when in direct confrontation with chakra-based attacks. It does not protect against Genjutsu or Yamanaka techniques.
The user is able to passively change between the Smooth, Rough and Normal aspect as long as the technique is active, though, except in the turn of usage, swapping between the Rough and Smooth will count once towards the jutsu count. The user is able to selectively cover oneself with chakra, allowing the rest of the surface to be normal, and alter the degree of irregularity, but the whole affected surface must have the same degree, thus preventing part of the body to have the Rough variation and other part the Smooth.
Lasts 5 turns, max, per usage.
Requires 1 turn cool down.
Can only be used 5 times.
Allows the cover to spread through body/clothes and any surface in contact with the user up to 1 meter all around (thus allowing other people to suffer the same effects).
Doesn't negate usage rank and strength and thus can only be used against physical Jutsu A-Rank and bellow and is completely useless against energy based elements while neutral to wind based ones.

Pretty cool jutsu, and restrictions are quite nice. Active for 5 turns, you can continuously switch from Rough to Smooth (or other way round) within those turns, and no chakra intake per turn.

Smooth tadpole would be of great use in avoiding jutsus in CQC, whilst making your opponent feel the same effects, assuming they're within a meter from you. You can use the jutsu to skid away at fast speeds regardless of the terrain. Allows you to have Rain techniques simply slip off of your body, you can avoid Earth/Water jutsus which aren't wide enough to hit your whole body.
Question I had on this part was, if the opponent is handling a weapon and is within a meter from you, would you be able to say that they can no longer have their grip on the weapon?
Also, referring to the bold, it says it allows you to do so, but isn't a requirement, so can I assume it's a choice?

Rough toad would be more useful if you were willing to engage in CQC I think, since it'd help you get a grip on your opponent and keep them close. Out of cqc, its super hydrophobic characteristics would make Water jutsus quite useless, as well as Rain jutsus. Techniques such as Sticky Starch would lose their purpose. Even your beloved Mushies would be dealt with.
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Now, due to injury, I won't be able to perform the jutsus u-u

( Ninjutsu: Ryousei Kanshou ) Ninja Arts: Amphibian Intervention
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Based on the principle of friction and microscopic texture. While some materials may seem smooth to the naked eye, in the nano-scale, they're comprised of multiple irregularities and rough textures. When two materials drag on eachother, the inherited friction increases exponentially, superior than it would happen case the materials were virtually smooth. Applying the teachings of the basic Tree/Water Walking techniques, the user is able to create a thin layer of chakra across any surface of his/her own body. The chakra is thus able to cover or enhance the microscopic irregularities, thus increasing or decreasing the friction to extremes.

( Kato Enten ) Smooth Tadpole- The thin layer will get rid of the irregularities in one's body surface, allowing a nearly zero-friction surface. Given the natural flexibility and curvature of the user's own body, and allying it with well-timed motions, the user is able to become impervious to any physical attack, allowing it to slip off the side. The selective aspect of the jutsu allows one to retain some un-covered areas, permitting usages such as whole-body "armor" with naked soles for walking, left covered-sole and right naked sole for fast gliding, covered arm for evasion and naked fist for attack, etc.

( Gama Ranbou ) Rough Toad - The thin layer will accentuate the irregularities in one's body surface, increasing the friction. It allows one to have a much better grip on objects, almost sticking to them in a microscopic scale. Likewise, it allows one to mimic the Lotus Effect, becoming a superhydrophobic surface. This, among other things, would turn the user impervious to pathogenic agents like bacteria, fungi or algae growth, reducing or eliminating the area of contact with the water particles in which these pathogens dwell and proliferate.

Effective against Earth and Water based elements, to a certain extend, as one can be affected through the sheer size of the tangible object. There is a protection against physical blades, but not intangible blades, such as those created with Wind or Energy based elements. While it does cover oneself with chakra, the low ammount of chakra deployed is minimal, and thus, outside the described effects, it is useless as a chakra armor, when in direct confrontation with chakra-based attacks. It does not protect against Genjutsu or Yamanaka techniques.
The user is able to passively change between the Smooth, Rough and Normal aspect as long as the technique is active, though, except in the turn of usage, swapping between the Rough and Smooth will count once towards the jutsu count. The user is able to selectively cover oneself with chakra, allowing the rest of the surface to be normal, and alter the degree of irregularity, but the whole affected surface must have the same degree, thus preventing part of the body to have the Rough variation and other part the Smooth.
Lasts 5 turns, max, per usage.
Requires 1 turn cool down.
Can only be used 5 times.
Allows the cover to spread through body/clothes and any surface in contact with the user up to 1 meter all around (thus allowing other people to suffer the same effects).
Doesn't negate usage rank and strength and thus can only be used against physical Jutsu A-Rank and bellow and is completely useless against energy based elements while neutral to wind based ones.

Pretty cool jutsu, and restrictions are quite nice. Active for 5 turns, you can continuously switch from Rough to Smooth (or other way round) within those turns, and no chakra intake per turn.

Smooth tadpole would be of great use in avoiding jutsus in CQC, whilst making your opponent feel the same effects, assuming they're within a meter from you. You can use the jutsu to skid away at fast speeds regardless of the terrain. Allows you to have Rain techniques simply slip off of your body, you can avoid Earth/Water jutsus which aren't wide enough to hit your whole body.
Question I had on this part was, if the opponent is handling a weapon and is within a meter from you, would you be able to say that they can no longer have their grip on the weapon?
Also, referring to the bold, it says it allows you to do so, but isn't a requirement, so can I assume it's a choice?

Rough toad would be more useful if you were willing to engage in CQC I think, since it'd help you get a grip on your opponent and keep them close. Out of cqc, its super hydrophobic characteristics would make Water jutsus quite useless, as well as Rain jutsus. Techniques such as Sticky Starch would lose their purpose. Even your beloved Mushies would be dealt with.
No further questions
It depends on the situation. If you're holding a katana vertically, gravity would probably make it slip downwards, but then the guard could keep it still in place. If they move it, like in an upwards lift, the katana could simply slip and fly out. Imagine everything is ice or covered in soap. If the object falls in that situation, then if falls with Smooth Tadpole.

Yeah, up to 1 meter from you you can manipulate what you want. You can use Smooth Tadpole solely on your right hand, your whole arm, your whole body, the ground, an opponent, just the opponent, just the ground, etc etc. As long as it is in range, any variation is alright.

It's also a good combination with CQC taijutsu because it would allow you to break your opponent's base and prevent them from both hitting you and gripping you, if you play it well with your body position, because you'd be all slippery, but you do not have to cover your whole body. If you use Smooth Tadpole on your torso and arm but keep your knuckles normal, you'd be able to slip and deflect all attack done to you (with certain skill) and reach for punches. You can even allow your inner arm to be normal, so that your outer arm serves as slippery shield for you to go for a grip or a hold.


Rough Toad has those defensive applications but also has offensive applications. Your skin surface is all rough, so you could create enough friction to produce roadburns and whatnot. Your skin is protected but your opponent's is not.
 

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It depends on the situation. If you're holding a katana vertically, gravity would probably make it slip downwards, but then the guard could keep it still in place. If they move it, like in an upwards lift, the katana could simply slip and fly out. Imagine everything is ice or covered in soap. If the object falls in that situation, then if falls with Smooth Tadpole.

Yeah, up to 1 meter from you you can manipulate what you want. You can use Smooth Tadpole solely on your right hand, your whole arm, your whole body, the ground, an opponent, just the opponent, just the ground, etc etc. As long as it is in range, any variation is alright.

It's also a good combination with CQC taijutsu because it would allow you to break your opponent's base and prevent them from both hitting you and gripping you, if you play it well with your body position, because you'd be all slippery, but you do not have to cover your whole body. If you use Smooth Tadpole on your torso and arm but keep your knuckles normal, you'd be able to slip and deflect all attack done to you (with certain skill) and reach for punches. You can even allow your inner arm to be normal, so that your outer arm serves as slippery shield for you to go for a grip or a hold.


Rough Toad has those defensive applications but also has offensive applications. Your skin surface is all rough, so you could create enough friction to produce roadburns and whatnot. Your skin is protected but your opponent's is not.
(Katon/Fuuton: Ikusen no Houou) Fire/Wind Release: The Squad of the Scorching Falcons
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This technique consists in two different steps, which can be preformed simultaneously, using an ally, or in a quick succession. The first part consist in performing one handseal charging chakra in a point on the battle field which will turn into seriously hot ashes, which will then burst into an hellish flock of about 10-15 bird-like ash structures. The birds will fly out in different directions, some will fly high into the sky, while others (Only a few 2-3) will attack the opponent(s) directly. The second part of the jutsu consists in preforming an additional handseal. This will quickly gather air around each individual bird, concentrating the gathered wind into the ash-hawks, which will make them burst ablaze. At that point, the birds will be sharper and faster, as well as hotter. While keeping the handseal, the user is able to make them all flock down on the target. Much like real birds of prey, the free-falling bird-structures will acquire great speeds, and will violently explode upon impact (At the scale of a Paper Bomb induced Explosion). The few birds that directly attacked the opponent will simple burst outwards, burning anything close to them. Entailed with this technique is the ability to induce heat on a certain substance, instead of creating ash, and quickly provide wind/oxygen all the same. This will induce a powerful combustion reaction on the substance, vanishing it whole and turning it into it's combustion gaseous byproducts (example, hydrogen into water)
*The user loses the ability to call forth Fire or Wind Chakra to preform techniques higher than S rank in the turn after usage*


Main question is, do I have to separate them or can I just make all of them fly high into the air and then perform the Wind section to the jutsu? And it says the birds explode at the scale of a paper bomb induced explosion, thats just the size of explosion and nothing to do with damage, right? Just want to clarify since I think it'll come up in battle.

Can I make the point of creation near someone's leg, sort of damaging their legs, preventing them from moving/making quick movements to avoid the birds which would later crush down on them?

I love the jutsu, but some parts I find confusing. Like, what sort of damage would the few birds do on their own? Or is that what the paper bomb induced explosion was talking about?
 

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The scale of a paper bomb is the actual damage. As a whole, it's the same as an S rank though.

Yeas, you can make the point of creation really close to the enemy, as long as you don't make it inside the enemy or on the enemy. It will still burn, of course.

You can separate them all, you can keep them all together, your choice. As long as you understand that, while your working on them, giving them motion etc, you can't use other jutsu. You can make them shoot in a direction in order to temporarily stop actively manipulating them, and then return to them, but you can't claim you shoot a water torrent while, simultaneously, making the falcons turn around.
 

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The scale of a paper bomb is the actual damage. As a whole, it's the same as an S rank though.

Yeas, you can make the point of creation really close to the enemy, as long as you don't make it inside the enemy or on the enemy. It will still burn, of course.

You can separate them all, you can keep them all together, your choice. As long as you understand that, while your working on them, giving them motion etc, you can't use other jutsu. You can make them shoot in a direction in order to temporarily stop actively manipulating them, and then return to them, but you can't claim you shoot a water torrent while, simultaneously, making the falcons turn around.
Nice, nice.

( Fuuton/Doton: Horun no Areno Eki ) Wind/Earth Style: The Horns of the Desert Lizard
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user links together 2 handseals, creating a ravaging dome of slicing winds. The wind's speed and sharpness is increased to the max, having almost no rival in shredding power. At which point, the user ends the succession of handseals with an extra one, which infuses the wind with small particles of the strongest earth materials. This sets the abrasive power of the wind past it's limits, both Wind and Earth chakra working together to combine the roughness and tangibility of the earth against the sharpness and speed of the wind, creating an almost perfect defense against all matter, which is shredded to oblivion when it comes in contact.
With 1 handseal, the user is disperse the dome into 2 large gusts of wind that fly up to mid range.
*The user is able to create a perfect sphere by leaping in the air*
*This jutsu is able to overpower the Strongest Metals/Perfectly Solid/Kaguya Bone/Diamond Elements/KGs up to it's rank, and Basic or less solid Elements (Wood, Calcium, Crystals, etc) 1 rank above*
*This jutsu can only be used once every 3 turns*
*The user is unable to preform Earth or Wind jutsus higher than S rank in the next turn*
*The dome is maintained for only 1 turn, and disperses normally if the user does not throw it towards the opponent*
*Can only be used thrice per battle*

Just realized your jutsus are missing the 'Type' bit which is normally found above the rank xD

But yea, I want this jutsu purely because of it's defensive capabilities which are quite great, considering they can defend against the hardest of materials. Winds shredding and hard Earthen particles combined makes for a great dome of protection.

No questions on this one, the jutsu is quite simple in what it does. o-o
 
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