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Even better ;p
One/three advantages:
  • 1.Rather fast to use.
  • 2.It blocks the opponents view of you,if it's between you.
  • 3.It is a large wall.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1.Short ranged.
  • 2.Defends only one side,although I guess you can use it multiple times,doesn't defend you from above or bellow I think ???.
  • 3.Blocks your vision of the opponent also,you know if you make it on that side.
How you would use it in battle:Well,I would use to defend myself from attack that come from the elements that are weak to steel.
How you would counter it:I don't think there's need to counter this,just use some technique powerful enough to overcome it.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):I begin gathering my chakra and as I do so,I perform the Bird hand seal.Once I am finished with that,I channel the previously gathered chakra through my legs into the ground in front of me.Once I have channeled the chakra,I manipulate it,so it create a large wall of black plated steel in front of me for protection.
 

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Defends only one side,although I guess you can use it multiple times,doesn't defend you from above or bellow I think ???.

Only defends you on one side, but you could use it three times to defend you from three different angles, and no you can't use it above or below you since you need the earth as a medium.
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(Kōton: Mukankaku no Yoroi) - Steel Release: Impervious Armour
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This Technique allows the user to turn part their body into black steel, making that part of their body invulnerable to most weapons and taijutsu attacks. But due to its metal properties it leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.
Note: Can only render Taijutsu Techniques A rank and below useless.

Okay so I want you to send your steel chakra any where to a part of your body and then encase that said part in the black steel, using this can enhance your taijutsu, obviously; and if taijutsu A-rank and below are used against you, you can block it with the armour, you can also block most weapons with it also, but this technique will leave you very vulnerable to the lighting element.
 

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I have a feeling I'll try to make a stronger version of this as a cj :D
If I create it at once,over my hand,foot and neck it counts as one use right?
One/three advantages:
  • 1.Can be created on any part of the body.
  • 2.Defends against most freestyle attacks.
  • 3.You can use this to increase the damage of your own hits.I don't know does it make much difference,I think it should though. ???
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1.Makes you vulnerable to lightning.
  • 2.Just B rank (for now ;))
  • 3.Maybe it could decrease your speed if you create it around your whole body,idk.
How you would use it in battle:I would use it to quickly cover parts of my body that are about to be affected by an opponents attack.Also I would use it cover my foot or my hand so when I punch/kick him,it hurts more.
How you would counter it:Use Chidori Nagashi quickly,not very creative though :p,Melt the steel on him and kill him from the lava hot molten steel :eek:
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):I start gathering my chakra and once I have gathered enough of it,I focus the previously gathered chakra towards my right hand.Once done,I manipulate the chakra so it creates a coating of black steel over the hand for protection.
 

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It's been done, I think.

You can use this to increase the damage of your own hits.I don't know does it make much difference,I think it should though. ??? - It's not really for that it's more for defending against tai techniques.

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(Kōton: Mori Yuubu) Steel Release: Lance of Valor
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After 1 handseal (Rat), the user is able to create a great lance of black steel from one arm, which will envelop the arm up to the elbow and protrude out about a meter. The lance can then be increased to Mid-range to skewer targets from a distance or be used as a melee weapon. The lance lasts as long as the user wishes, having the ability to discard it whenever its needed.

I like the idea behind this technique, I want you to perform the Rat seal, and then gather your steel chakra in whatever arm you want, then from there create a lance of steel from that arm, this lance is about a meter long when first made, you are able to increase the range to mid range, so you can attack from there, the lance can also be used as a melee weapon if you chose, and you can stop using it when you ever you want. I like this technique, this is a nice technique.
 

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Who dares >_> it was not you right? <_<
I didn't see anything else to put,sorry.
Want a fight btw?

One/three advantages:
  • 1.It can be used as long as you want to.
  • 2.It can't be broken easily and it can even defend against some attacks.
  • 3.Can be extended into mid range to stab the opponent.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1.It makes your hand unable to do some things,like perform hand seals and such.
  • 2.It's hard to move it around after it goes into mid range.
  • 3.Can't be used in long range.
How you would use it in battle:I would use this for a close range fight most likely,although I could sometimes use it extended,maybe make it extend through some weak earth defense so he doesn't see it coming.
How you would counter it:I would,if time allows me dodge it and attack him while the spear is pointed to another side and the opponent is more vulnerable,if not I would break it with some technique.I could also try conducting electricity through it so the opponent gets shocked.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):I perform the necessary hand seal Rat as I mold my chakra in my body.Once done,I channel the previously molded chakra towards my right arm.As I'm done channeling it,I manipulate the chakra so it creates a lance of black steel that covers my arm and is long about one meter,after that I manipulate the lance so it extends to around seven meters in length and stabs your clone.
 

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Two fights currently, so not right now, sorry dude.
And, nah wasn't me. Check my customs thread in my sig, you'll see my steel cjs.

(Kōton: Sassou Kishi) Steel Release: Gallant Knight
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: after 3 handseals (Bird+Boar+Tiger), the user is able to create a large gollem made entirely of black steel plates, that rises from the ground, fashioned after a samurai or a knight armor, which can be sent to attack the opponent or to support the user. The Knight can use Taijutsu/Kenjutsu and Kōton up to B rank and can stay on the field as long as the user spends chakra to sustain it. Only 2 Knights can be on the field at any given time and each use of the technique only creates one.

Perform the three seals, I then want you to send you steel chakra into the ground in front of you, from there a big black steel gollem will rise out of the ground, the gollem will look like a samurai or a knight in armor, your choice. This gollem can use Tai/Ken and Steel techniques up to B-rank, you need to keep sending your chakra into the gollem to keep it sustained/
 

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Created in short can move to long range from the user?
One/three advantages:
  • 1.Can stay on the field as long as the user wants.
  • 2.Free moving and also can use certain techniques
  • 3.My bodyguard :cool:
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1.Requires hand seals
  • 2.Can have only two,and that also spends two moves per turn.
  • 3.Consumes chakra to sustain them.
How you would use it in battle:I would use them pretty much how I would use a clone that is limited to certain techniques,they would be good in close range combat,being immune to most taijutsu and kenjutsu techniques because they are made of steel.They could guard me while I take my time to perform a longer jutsu.Or they can just look cool beside me.
How you would counter it:I would use a sufficient lightning technique to break them.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):I start gathering and focusing my chakra,in my body and as I do so I perform the following hand seals:Bird->Boar->Tiger.Once done,I channel the previously gathered and focused chakra out of my body and into the ground beside me.Once I have channeled it,I manipulate the chakra so it forms a knight-like gollem made out of black steel that stand before me,I continue flowing my chakra into the knight continuously so it doesn't fall apart.
 

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No they can't.

(Kyosei Kōton no Jutsu) Greater Steel Release
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A bigger version of Basic Steel Release where the user will do one hand seal (Bird) and produce medium to large sized objects, pillars, weapons, etc, made of black steel, from their body or from the earth.

Like the parent technique; but bigger and better. Perform the Bird seal, you'll be able to create medium to large objects, pillars, weapons, so on from black steel, can be made from the ground or off you body. Good, but the range could be better. D:
 

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Aw fuc* :(

One/three advantages:
  • 1.It has a wide variety of applications.
  • 2.It is quick to perform,I imagine.
  • 3.It can create objects from the ground as well and they can reach up to mid range.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1.It can easily block your view,or get in the way later.
  • 2.Is not long ranged.
  • 3.Requires some a hand seal.
How you would use it in battle:I would mostly use this in the beginning of fights.I would use it probably the most to create pretty large,quick defenses to block some ranked attack,especially the close ranged ones.I could also use it,either on it's own or in combination with some other technique,to attack the opponent with some projectiles,or create a pillar to knock him off his feet,so some other technique hits and so on.I could also create a pillar beneath me,so it launches me up,to the sides so I get away from some attack.However,I would use it to escape from water through which lightning is being conducted as the steel would also conduct it into me.
How you would counter it:Either some strong lightning based techniques,or another steel technique.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):I start gathering and focusing my chakra in my body as I perform the Bird hand seal.Once I have gathered enough of it,I begin channeling the previously gathered and focused chakra towards my feet,and from there I channel it into the ground.Once I have channeled it,I manipulate the chakra so it crates a large box of black steel in front of me.
 

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Well done.

(Kōton: Ikka no Isshi) Steel Release: House of Strings
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After 3 handseals (Boar+Bird+Horse), the user will create two great pillars of black steel, parallel to each other, and 5 meters apart. Almost invisible to the naked eye, are a myriad of thin, sharp steel strings that connect both pillars. The user will then launch both pillars in any direction, ripping the ground at their passage, with great speed. If anything stands on the path of strings, it gets sliced clean, including the opponent. The strings follow the element's weakness and strength on what they can or cannot cut. The pillars go back into the earth after they reach the range limit, and cannot change direction once in motion.

OKay perform the seals, then send your koton chakra into the ground before, from there. You will create two pillars of black steel parallel from one another, and five meters apart, these pillars are super thin, strings made of steel are attached to both of them, from there pulling on the strings you can launch the pillars in any direction, ripping though the ground. Only goes up to mid-range, if it went to long range would be good, but it had to have some sort of weakness.
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1.Moves fast.
  • 2.Can slice through most obstacles.
  • 3.The pillars can go into any direction.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1.Can't go up to long range.
  • 2.The pillars can't change direction once in motion.
  • 3.After they reach the end of mid range,they 'disappear'.
How you would use it in battle:Probably on it's own,or I would make him run from this on one side while I attack from the other side with something else.
How you would counter it:I would use a powerful lightning or wind technique to either cut the strings or break one or both of the pillars,also I could get out of range with the hurricane fist or something like that.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):I first perform the hand seals:Boar->Bird->Horse and as I perform them,I gather up my chakra.Once I'm finished with that,I channel the previously gathered chakra out of my body and into the ground in front of me.After,I have channeled it,I manipulate the chakra so two great pillars of black steel rise in front of me,the pillars are five meters apart and they are connected by a myriad of black steel strings.As the pillars have risen,I make them launch themselves backwards,in my direction so the strings cut me into pieces.I then press F to respawn.
 

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Awesome.

(Kōton: Kujo no Tama) Steel Release: Demolition Ball
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After 2 handseals (Bird+Monkey), the user is able shoot a steel chain from any point in the ground. Attached to the tip of the chain is a small ball of black steel, and moves at the speed of an arrow. After its shot, the small ball of steel increases in size to become a devastating 2 meter in diameter recking ball. The steel chain is kept connected to the ground but cannot be used to control the direction the ball is taking. The weight of the ball is roughly 20 times that of a normal ninja.

Now I want you to perform the required seals, I want you to send your koton chakra into the ground below anywhere on the field. From there I want you to form a steel chain from the ground, this chain has a small ball of steel on the tip. From there it chain is kept connected to the ground while the ball and the remaining bit of chain moves around the field at the speed of an arrow. The ball starts to grow bigger and bigger till it reaches 2 meters in diameter. The chain cannot be controlled by you, the goes one way and one way only. This thing weight 20 times more then a normal ninja. This technique is crazy.
 

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So the ball spins around the chain in one direction?Is the length of the chain up to the user?
Are you willing to trade for those two steel customs of yours?
One/three advantages:
  • 1.Long ranged.
  • 2.Unpredictable movement.
  • 3.Large and heavy ball,that can break the opponent.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1.You can't control the direction of the chain.
  • 2.It is a small ball at first.
  • 3.Can hurt you as well.
How you would use it in battle:I would pretty much use it on itself because the ball can get in the way of friendly attacks,maybe I would attack from the ground with small sized attacks.
How you would counter it:I would try to severe the chain and render the ball useless that way,or I would use a sufficient lightning technique to destroy the ball itself,while it isn't near me,killing the opponent would probably do also.If it is about to hit me,and I don't have time to destroy it,I would have to form some really powerful armor around myself if I want to escape unscathed.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):I begin with performing the required hand seals:Bird->Monkey and gathering my chakra.When I'm done with that,I channel the chakra into the ground close to your clone.Once done,I manipulate the previously channeled chakra so it creates a chain of black steel on top of which is a small ball made out of the same material,once it's formed,the ball begins to grow until it's two meters in diameter large,it moves around with the chain and in the process hit your clone and destroys it.
 

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Yes, and yes.
And, I am, yeah.

Well done. You have mastered Steel Release.
 

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Customs time!

So I only expect for this one a question if you have one. That's all.

Little error with the name of the technique, as you can notice. :p

(Katon: Pisuton no Jutsu) Steel Release: Piston Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
forming the hand seals Tiger → Hare → Rat → Dog → Horse, the user coats their arm in metal and creates a piston-like attachment around it. When used as a taijutsu measure, the user can punch the opponent with the end of the piston and use their chakra to force their fist into the piston and hit the target with a second, harder impact. Also, if the user hits the ground with the piston, the second blow and can cause a mini-quake that can result in tremendous damage to the surrounding area. However, the piston is usually very heavy, so caution and precise timing must be used when utilizing the piston.
Notes:
- While the piston is active, the user is unable to perform any handseals.
- Can only be used twice per-match.
- Must wait three turns before you use it again.
- Can only be worn for two turns due to how heavy the piston is.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

Okay so a neat one, you will perform the seals, then send your koton into whichever of your arms you want to, can only be one arm. Then coat your arm in the black steel, but manipulate it in such a way that the black steel around your arm is a piston of sorts around your arm. Using this with taijutsu is probably the best bet, but can be used free-form of course. So you can to punch lets say my clone, that will do damage in itself, but you can then straight after send chakra to the piston and perform another powerful punch, will send them flying.

Another good thing, if you hit your target and he is laying on the ground after the first blow, you can hit him straight into the ground, and will create a mini-quake. You obviously can't perform any hand seals while this is in use, nor can you wear it for no longer then two turns.
 

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Katon :p

Can this counter some techniques like some small sized earth techniques,by punching them with this and could it counter something like the rasengan too,if it clashes with it?IF I have more questions I'll ask you :p
 

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Medium earth sized techniques and below yes. Rasengan, no.

(Kōton: Doragon Kourin) Steel Release: Dragon Advent
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Mid
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (-40 to the user)
Description:
The user first performs the hand seals Tiger → Dog → Boar → Rat → Monkey → Dog → Dragon → Serpent → Rat, the user exudes a large aura of steel chakra, resembling a dragon. They then manipulate as much metallic objects as they can sense and gathers them around them. They then shape the metal around them until everything except their face and some distance around them is covered by metal. The user then utilizes their chakra to form the mass of steel into the shape of a bipedal dragon. This technique coats the user in a suit of metal, similar to armor, and reinforced by chakra. Taijutsu blows are far stronger than normal and the armor is durable to many attacks. If some of the metal is destroyed, the aura left in its place will refuse the metal. The dragon can also create and launch a storm of projectiles at the opponent. However, this jutsu is extremely risky to use. For one, it changes the user's posture into a dragon-like stance. Secondly, the chakra needed for this technique is incredible, especially the restoration process. Third, the armor is incredibly heavy, weighing almost 300 pounds. The chakra aura negates the weight, but only for so long, giving the technique's effectiveness a strict time limit otherwise the user may get crushed. Finally, the metal coating the user makes them very vulnerable to Fire Release techniques.
Notes:
- The storm of projectiles counts as 1 of the 3 moves.
- The chakra aura negates the weight for two turns.
- Can only rebuild itself once, per use.
- Can only be used once per battle.
- No steel related jutsu's for four turns after the use of this.
- The user will be completely drained, can only use B-rank and below techniques.
- Taijutsu up to S-rank are made renderless.
- A-rank fire jutsu will be able to give major damage to the user of this.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.

Now onto the bees knees of steel release: I want you to perform the series of hand seals, from there an aura of steel chakra will start to form around you, it'll be in the form of a bipedal dragon, then by using your own chakra and grabbing metallic objects around you, you will start to form the metal into the dragon, it will cover your whole body besides your face, up to mid-range of you will be the size of the dragon, this is like an armour an overly powerful armour. Tai techniques are about 2x stronger than normal, and the aura around you is used to rebuild the dragon if some parts broken, but that can only be used once; you are also able to fire a storm projectiles within this technique, but of course it counts as one of the three moves. The aura around you negates the weight of this for two turns, if you keep this for any longer than that, you will die from the weight of the dragon, and one more thing Fire will cause big damaged to this. (I don't know why I didn't put lighting but w/e)
 

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I understand it better now than the first time I read it.
I assume that there has to be metal around the field so the chakra aura can bring it it?
After the use,I can use only B rank for the rest of the match?
The projectiles can go up to long range?
The projectiles have forbidden rank steel strength?
Does the armor need to be reformed after your fire the projectiles?
Can it grab the opponents sword and weapons too?
Can it grab CW's of steel too?

I first perform the required hand seals Tiger → Dog → Boar → Rat → Monkey → Dog → Dragon → Serpent → Rat while I gather a huge amount of chakra.Once I have gathered enough I release the chakra from my body and spread it around myself,while using nature manipulation to create steel chakra from it.I spread the chakra in the shape of a dragon.After that I use the chakra so it grabs all metal made objects that are near and create a dragon-like armor of the same metal around myself that reaches up to mid range from me.The chakra aura negates the huge weight of the armor.
 

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I assume that there has to be metal around the field so the chakra aura can bring it it?
No, not completely. But it does help, it can still be formed without metal around.
After the use,I can use only B rank for the rest of the match?
Yes.
The projectiles can go up to long range?
No only mid range.
The projectiles have forbidden rank steel strength?
Yes.
Does the armor need to be reformed after your fire the projectiles?
No.
Can it grab the opponents sword and weapons too?
Yes.
Can it grab CW's of steel too?
No.
 
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