Steel, Chapter 4, "Following a Father's Legacy"

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(Chapter 4: “Following a Father’s Legacy” Enjoy this emotional, but action-packed and surprising chapter! For the three-tail’s and Ygaura’s image: Play: )


“All I know is my father is Konoha’s White Fang! I’ll never give up just like him!” I couldn’t believe Hatake Sakumo had more than one son!

“While I’m a giant, there’s no way a puny kid like you could win!”

“You’re wrong! I’ll finish you off with the chakra I stole from you with my dragons! Remember when I said that my lightning has more than just the ability to be sticky? It can harden and still shock you! Lightning Style: Ghost Dragon!” Another one of those dragons flew towards the turtle’s face! It then hardened as he said! It was like a flying boulder!

“That’s useless! My armor is the hardest of all! Not even wind-enhanced chakra blades could pierce it”

“You can’t harden your eye!”

“WHAT THE?”

“ I WILL follow my father’s footsteps, his legacy! This is for all the people of the world who felt they couldn’t do something! Listen, down below, because….YOU CAN DO ANYTHING!” The boulder slammed into the turtle’s eye, temporarily blinding him. He leapt into the air yelling, “This is for all my friends like Hagane, and its power comes from them! It’s my own justu! You’ll surely die! Lightning Style: Sword of Friendship!” I’d never been so proud of this little guy!

“HOW CHEESY! PLUS, MY ARMOR CAN’T BE PIRCED, YOU FAILURE!”

“ THEN THIS IS FOR ALL THE FAILURES, BRING IT ON!” Super bright light flowed everywhere and fricken blinded me as a giant sword make of his hardened lightning pierced straight through the guy’s eye and head. The air was electrified! In the air, the incapacitated and bloody Yagura flew down to the ruins of the mansion.

“Why, how could a failure like you beat me?”

“Because I have friends! I will end this village of the bloody mist once and for all! By the way, I’m an academy student”

“A mere student? Impossible!”

“Yes it is possible. Anything is possible if you open your mind!” He then shocked Yagura with some electricity as if to wake him up.

“Thank you. I have not been myself. I wish this wall obstructing the civilians’ views could be removed! I want to tell them I apologize for my treachery! Thank you for waking me boy! He…controlled me!”

“Who?”

I interjected, “What the hell are you smoking?”

A mysterious man with an orange mask answered, “He must be talking about me, Uchiha Madara. Now if you’ll excuse me, I need to take the three-tails out!” {Cut in with this music: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k2R9ukNwaw8}

“WE WON’T LET YOU!”, we both said.

Kodomo said, “Especially after I learned it was you not him!”

“I want to kick this guy’s ass, but how are you alive?”

“You don’t need to know”

“Friends, don’t attack!”, Yagura pleaded.

I admit, I was hot-headed when I charged into the legend with no chakra and only a sword. I passed right through him!

“How about some webs?” I was the diversion, though and when we caught him off guard, Kodomo fired webs at him that flew right through him too! “What the? Why is that happening?”

“You are quite impressive for a young boy, but my powers far exceed all three of yours doubled. Now then, let me begin”

“NO!” I yelled and aimed the decapitate him, but the ******* didn’t move a muscle as I passed through again. We both tried attacks over and over again as we only passed through. He ignored us as he tried to unseal the three-tails. “STOP NOW, BITCH!”

“It’s useless!”

“Nothing’s useless if you put your mind to it! I, an academy student, beat a kage! My father will be proud!”

“Boy, your father is dead. He was killed on a mission recently because of his beliefs you speak of. That’s what you get from believing that, death and the people are ashamed and disappointed of him! Your father is a mockery to all of Konoha!”

“What?” Tears began to form.

“RELEASE!”, he said and then the three-tails seal disappeared, “Now it is done. Yagura is dead. Are you happy? The bloody mist is no more, just like you wanted! Before I go, I’ll give you one word of advice, boy! Darkness if the only way of achieving greatness! This world is darkness! There can be no happiness”

“You’re wrong! This world,” he threw a kunai with lightning flowing through it, “is light!”

“You managed to cut my neck a little, well done, but light will always be overwhelmed by darkness’s power”

“Light may be appear weak, and even give up, but then people wish with all their might and it conquers darkness! That is hope, and it will bring peace by destroying dark people like you!”

“There is no hope. It does not exist”

“Again, you’re wrong! I will bring peace to this world by using light! I’ll destroy people like you!”

“Fine, twelve-year old boy. Next time we meet, we will battle. Then, I’ll see for myself how powerful light really is!” He then disappeared in thin air!

How will Kodomo deal with the news? Poor guy! Plus, Hagane and Kodomo’s relationship grows. Find out next time, Chapter 5: “Despair”
 
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Whoa!! I did not see that coming, Madara appearing this about to get very interesting, I can hardly contain my anticipation and excitment for the next chapter. It's really sad to see Komodo's hope of seeing his father disappear so quickly, but I really like the fact that he wasn't drawn into Madara's trick and his vow to defeat him. His bond to his friends kinda reminds me of that yellow hair ninja:):). Btw nice work with fight
 
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