Spice up Konoha ~Hinaru and Amaya~

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In a far away land of Konoha there is girl named Amaya, generally kind-hearted, timid, soft-spoken, and polite, applying appropriate name suffixes to most people. Amaya can be a bit of a pacifist as well. She is a kind individual, who is unwilling to watch people get hurt in front of her, a trait that other kids considers a flaw, and dislikes competition and fighting. As a result she stay alone all the time. She often lacks self-confidence, and despite training hard, often makes mistakes on missions. Amaya is able to understand people who share pain, and is one of the few people who knows how painful Hinaru childhood was. She generally thinks carefully before acting, allowing her to think more clearly in tough situations.

Hinaru a strong ninja had a craving for acknowledgement. During his days as an academy student, he would play pranks all around the village in an attempt to be recognized by its inhabitants. He would also tell everyone who doubted him on a near-constant basis that he would one day become Hokage. As he told Iruka, he wished to achieve this rank in order to be recognized by those around him, and to have the responsibility of defending them.

Amaya always watch Hinaru from a distance, while Hinaru followed her w/o her notice too. Both are shy to express thier feelings. Untill one day, Amaya play an ocarina near the river. Hinaru hear the sweet music and listened to it, after Amaya done playing Hinaru couldn't help himself but clap his hands and tell Amaya she play it really good.


Hinaru:How so sweet music, play by a beautiful lady! *while claping his hands*

Amaya:*blush* really you liked it!

Hinaru:Yes its a pleasure to be your fans, May I? Oh I have seen you arround for a long time now but I got no strength to spoke with you, your so lovely and I cant help myself, Ah I have to say this or I will regret if I miss this chance! Amaya Im inlove with you long time ago till now! Will you accept me as your boyfriend!? *hold and kissed Amaya's hands*

Amaya;*blushes* Oh My! I dunno what to say, Me too is in loved with you for so long, I....yes Im willing to be your girl! I love you!

And the two will together and been so happy for some years past untill one day. While Amaya do her loundry in the river, a strong vortex of water appear and wash her away, she lose conciousness, and when she wakes up she's in the strange bed not familliar w/her.

Nero:Oh! your awake now lady, I saw you in the river near my house. And your unconcious so I bring you here. *a sweet smile in his lips* And may I ask the beautiful lady's name? And by the way Im Nero of Konoha, Im a new sensei there!

Amaya:Thank you Nero, I dunno what happen just then when I washing my things in the river a huge vortex of water wash me out. And Im Amaya a newly graduated ninja from Konoha's academy....nice to meet you! *seing Nero's smile make her heart beat past* Can you be my sensei!?

Nero;Yes I will be glad to train a beautiful lady *a sweetest smile on his lips* and now you can rest here and oh I prepared a food for you, dig it in coz you will be needing it to regain your strenght. *wink* I leave you now I will stay in the other house I build w/my jutsu! I dont want people gossip on us, It will ruin your reputation.

Amaya:Your so sweet sensei! *her eye's looks immobilize w/passion*

And Nero trained Amaya, the next week after the incidents happen and they will be very closed to each other and Amaya seems to forget about her love one Hinaru. As Nero is also Hinaru's sensei, Nero send him in a battle and and give him more mission. But one day Hinaru learned about her Girlfriend in love with their sensei, his heart broke into pieces. But never confront Amaya for he's still inlove w/her, even thogh he knows someone is in her heart. But in some time, Amaya learns Nero is not in love with her, and she always see's him flirting w/the other female students like or maybe he's just a sweet person. She talks to him about their relationship, and Nero replied there's nothing beetween them aside from being a sensei and student relationship. To her dismay, she runs in the forest and try to hang herself in the tree. She feel so devastated., in the state of darkness she remember Hinaru a man who loved her. Tears fell in her eye's and she lose conciousness (again). To her surprise she wakes up in Hinaru's arm.

Hinaru:Don't do it again baby if you killed yourself Im gonna die too!

Amaya:Im so sorry! I made a mistake! But I still love you! I will explain.......*Hinaru kissed her to seal her lips*

Hinaru: No need to explain I will accept you because your the most important person to me. I will love you no matter what happens Im still here open arm waiting for you!


Tears of joy fall in their eye's and they been together again for a second time arround. And they both so happy. And now that she learned her lesson, she promise herself not to let him go again!



:p Liked my story!? and for you Amaya my dear little sister this is just a fiction and real Hinaru my brother is not like my Sweet Ali who is real kindhearted person think twice before you fell in the trap of love like what happened to me!:(
 

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:eek: *mouth wide open!!!* :eek:

Y!!! ate anna y?! oh y?!!!

it should have been
hinaru to like someone else
of course girls r emotional..

n i wouldnt like nero sensei if i have him
though y didnt he fight for me?!

well, its just fiction, GUD JOB!!!
ahahah it was sweet n just so sad,
why didnt i die??? ehehe

gud gud ate anna make it more sweeter!
im gonna read it for sure,
i want it i want it i want it :D
 

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omg so u guys actually write fanfics about each-other's couples ?!?!?

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