-Speed- Prologue

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Prologue

Long ago an Uchiha (Rin) and Huuga(Kinko) were deeply in love but it was forbidden. The Huuga's father found out that they were seeing each other every three weeks under the moon in the forest and was not pleased. So the next day he confronted his daughter.

Kinko had long blond hair, grey eyes because she had the Kekei genkai the Byakugan, tan skin, a black coat, and black pants, with black shinobi shoes.

Kinko's father was the head member in the branch family he wore traditional clothes and had long black hair.

Kinko's father : Kinko I know about you and the Uchiha boy and I forbid you to do it any longer.

Kinko's face turned red with anger

Kinko: Why not? Why can't I see him? I love him.

Kinko's father: Because if you do think about the children that you will have the last time that happen the child was miserable and could not control its Kenkei genkai.

Kinko: I don't care about that I will teach the child how to control his or her kenkei genkai I swear on my life and if you can't see that our love is strong enough then I guess, you don't know what the true meaning of love is.

Right after Kinko said that the last words hit him, was it really that the child couldn't control his powers or was it that nobody helped him maybe it was the fact that nobody accepted him.

Kinko's father: Sigh* Fine I'll give you permission to be with the Uchiha boy but if anyone else finds out they will have all three of our heads so meet him in a more private place, dismissed.

Kinko was filled with joy and ran out of the house heading straight for her boyfriend Rin's house.

Rin has black spiky hair, black eyes, a black jacket, blue pants, and black shinobi shoes. Rin just walked out of his house and saw Kinko running straight for him.

Rin: Kinko, what's wrong?

Kinko: My father has given us permission to date.

As soon as Kinko said that Rin held Kinko by the mouth and pulled her inside his house.

Rin sighing with relief: That's great so maybe we can live together soon. Rin and Kinko hugged and two years later they moved together and lived deep in the woods. A few years later they had two years later they had two Children. Five year old Blade Myga who had tall black spiky hair with a bang, black eyes, a red shirt with blue sleeves, blue pants, and red shinobi shoes. The other child is three year old Ace Myga who had tall and spiky icy blue hair with a spiked bang, black eyes, a black shirt with red sleeves, blue pants, and black shinobi shoes.

Everyday since the time the two children turned one they were taught on how to use their mixed Kenkei genkai of the Sharingon and Byakugan. The two called it the Speedingon because they could do the same as their mother and father and every time they used it their speed increased.

But two years later Kinko died leaving Rin with Ace and Blade. Ever since then Rin pushed the two children as hard as ever, Blade and Ace began to notice that everyday their father began to get Paranoid until one day he was assassinated by three rouge ninja.


After their father was killed Ace and Blade still lived in the forest training their skills and hid from any ninja that came through the forest thinking that the three ninja that killed their father wasn't done he was going to come after them next, this is their story.

-Speed-​


So how is it? Let me know :p

Sorry if its a bit short.
 
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I like it but I think your missing some stuff like the dad was way too easy going... I really like it but things seem too simple.
 

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i didn't particularly enjoy it, could have used more subtltey and suspense, you also could have dragged out the story line, describing nights they were training. all in all it has the potential to be a great story.
 
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