Sparkle 6 - Blossom, My Shadow

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Chapter 6, is a special chapter that tears between the past and the future

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Chapter 6 - Blossom, My Shadow​


Shane got out one last can of spray paint and handed it to Danny,"Come on Danny, Do it!" He shouted as, Danny steadied and went up to the wall, he closed his eyes, and began to think, as Shane shouted at him to do this, he opened eyes and sprayed the walls with the spray paint, Shane was so happy that he decided, they should celebrate for Danny finally doing this without having to have his parents told if he can do it. They went to the pizza shop, and ordered gigantic pizzas, as they munched away, Danny couldn't help feeling not very happy or proud. Danny was in a gang now, he had to do his duties if he wanted to stay in the gang.

Shane is the head gangster and only a few years older than the rest of the gang, Danny is nearly the youngest and mostly the most obedient. Shane decided to go home, so we all went home, as Danny, went upstairs, he was lectured about staying out late and in a gang, but Danny couldn't think straight and just went to his bed, he wondered what to do. He couldn't escape by doing this, so he could free himself by taking out a drawing pad, and beginning to draw, his imagination running wild, he kept drawing all night.

The next day, Danny heard, Shane and his family are moving to Washington in the us, to be close to his american family. The gang split up afterwards, and Danny began learning and being normal again and never heard from Shane or the gang again.

A letter arrives, something happened, Shane has fallen ill, and is in much danger, he could die. Danny took danger in his eyes again and began going on the streets, Shane would of liked it if he done this much sooner, but he soon couldn't control himself and ended up in much trouble.

He lost all his pride, and well began to study again, going to school again, then getting from little school, to high school. He returned normally.

Shane is the past. The Future is something new.

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Alright what do you think?

Long enough?
 

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Trust me, my FanFics are worse...-___-
Anyways, I kind of feel bad for Danny since Shane moved...
(Man, you write stories that don't fit a personality of a girl...O___O Epic.)
The last sentence had a nice ending...xd, hope Danny's gonna be all right...though I got to admit, you might want to stretch out the part where you said Danny slowly went back to normal...-__-
 
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