[Horror] Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 6 ...

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Valtons Death !?


This is the Full chapter 6 (No Parts)

Charcter Appearance's .....
[Sally]
Is a young Blond 16 year old girl ... she wears a red hair clip that was given to her by her mother. Her casual clothes are a white T-shirt and a red skirt.
[Ageria]
Is a young black haired 19 year old boy... His casual clothing is a White shirt and a black pants.
[Valton]
Wears a Black suit and a red coat hanged on his shoulders as a cloak and has Long black hair and usually wears Red Sunglasses.
[Reed]
Wears black jeans and a red long coat with a naked chest.Has white hair and blue eyes.
[Kuroko]
Wears a white cloak with a white uniform has black hair and brown eyes.
[Junto also known as the "guy in the black cloak"]
Wears a black cloak which is torn from every edge....is bald and has a tattoo near his eyes.

- "Ugh you bastard" said Kuroko, "Gotta say you are not bad" said Valton...*Valton instantly appears infront of Kuroko and slices his chest causing a big wound* "Why you...How is this possible" Said Kuroko, "All these years and still weak, pathetic you are" said Valton..*Two mysterious people come and grab Valton* "W-what is this, who are you" Asked Valton, "We are the rankers 1 and 2 Prada(1) and Kura(2)" said Prada... "But..how come i was not able to sense your presence" asked Valton..."Prada and Kura have the ability to surpress their presence and have the obility to control someones will to move, but the fact that you are about to die doesn't have a good reason for me to waste time explaining it to you" said kuroko

"This was your intention all along" said Valton, "Indeed and it seems you fell for it pretty clean" said Kuroko, *Valton looks at Sallys direction* "Oh you are worried about that girl, don't worry i won't make her suffer and i also know that you handed the Rejigerna, you see there is no way i could have won this fight, i admire your strength and it was my biggest fear of accomplishing my plan" said kuroko, "You bastard..... what do you plan on doing with me" Said Valton, "Well don't worry you won't die, i need you in the accomplishment of my plan until then i will seal you in the pandoma" said Kuroko, "The Pandoma, the place where there is no coming out" said Valton....."Good bye Valton" said Kuroko *Places hand on Valtons forehead and seals him* - * Valton disappear* "Now lets go get the Rejigerna" Said Kuroko..

*Sally running to a safe distance from the lab until Kuroko suddenly appears infront of her* "W-who are you" asked Sally, "My name is Kuroko and that thing you hold in your hand....i need it, if you give it to me without trouble i might let you live..." Said Kuroko, "[Valton: This is the Rejigerna, the whole world is fighting for this]" Remembered Sally "No way i will let you have it, Valton would never let you get away with it" said Sally, "*sigh*....Too bad he is dead neh" said Kuroko ..."*Suprised* W-what are you blabbering about, he is alive and i know it" said Sally....."*instantly appears infront of Sally and snatches the Rejigerna and starts walking away* Come back here you bastard *Sally charges to attack him* *Kuroko Slices Sallys arm causing an wound sally falls on the ground...she gets up and tries to attack him but Kuroko kicks her in the Stomach and Sally loses consciousness*" -Sally, "Pathetic humans you are lucky i am letting you live" said Kuroko...

*Kuroko fly away* .....

3 days later...
*Sally wakes up* "Where am i and where is Valton" asked Sally... "Relax you are safe now" said a mysterious guy in the shadow..."Who are you" asked Sally...."*Walks out of the shadow* i suppose we have seen each other before...my name is Reed" said Reed..."YOU you are the 5th ranker....why are you helping you should have killed me rather being saved after crushing my fathers and Valtons dreams" said Sally...."I have no concern for you, i just don't want you to die...guess my job here is done later * walks away *" Said Reed, "Wait.." said Sally completely being ignored....

"*Kuroko arrives at Rasto La Vida* What a mess *Looks at the bodies lying on the floor..sees a body lie in the front room* Look how pathetic you look as one of the three leaders of Corkz.....you gave out you Organizations information like a coward, but i must say if it wasn't for you i wouldn't have discovered Valtons Hideout... Now you body shall be buried inside Rasto La Vida....*Raises sword and destroys the underground Rasto La vida*" - Valton...."Well so whats our next objective " asked Reed...."Now......We rage out the true war" said Kuroko....."Its time Muaro" Said Kuroko..

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NOTE: On the upcoming Monday i will not publish the next chapter but another One shot story ^^

And i just released a new ongoing FanFic :

NOTE: This is not i repeat this is NOT the one shot U_U
 
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Great read as always bro.... Keep up the good work ...=D Plus rep...

loved it can't wait for next one since I am worried about Valton though he is not gonna die :p
 
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My FanFiction Table......
Sound Of That Evil That Exists.
Chapter 1 -->
Chapter 1 2/2 -->
Chapter 2 -->
Chapter 3 -->
Chapter 4 -->
Chapter 5 -->
Chapter 6 -->
 

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Kuroko mustn’t be too confident in his henchmen’s capabilities seeing as he himself went after Valton personally. So its possible that Kuroko may or may not be the best fighter as he could have been faking in order for those two to intercept or actually needed their assistance. Wow, so suddenly Valton is gone and Kuroko is able to continue with his plan. For Sally to have been found this quickly must mean that something is going to happen. She is lucky that her life was spared as there wasn’t anything she could do physically to hurt Kuroko. Reed must have an ulterior motive for also sparing Sally’s life. So the time has already begun for the killer machine leader to wreak havoc and there seems to be no hope at the moment. Overall it was another good chapter dude ;)
 
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Kuroko mustn’t be too confident in his henchmen’s capabilities seeing as he himself went after Valton personally. So its possible that Kuroko may or may not be the best fighter as he could have been faking in order for those two to intercept or actually needed their assistance. Wow, so suddenly Valton is gone and Kuroko is able to continue with his plan. For Sally to have been found this quickly must mean that something is going to happen. She is lucky that her life was spared as there wasn’t anything she could do physically to hurt Kuroko. Reed must have an ulterior motive for also sparing Sally’s life. So the time has already begun for the killer machine leader to wreak havoc and there seems to be no hope at the moment. Overall it was another good chapter dude ;)
I am not gonna release the next chapter soon :( nor am i gonna enter the FF contest because i will be busy -__-' .. STBM
 

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<div class="bbWrapper">Hmmm, not bad. The story is stil quite interesting. My only issue is sentence structure. You realy gotta work on that, it gets confusing with the dialogues. All-in-all I'm enjoying the story and can't wait for Valton to come back and kick some booty!</div>
 
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