[Horror] Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 5

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Identity Revealed !?

NOTE:I was going to release this chapter a month later but alot of people on FB and twitter said to do so early...they are guests on here :p

This is the Full chapter 5 (No Parts)

Charcter Appearance's .....
[Sally]
Is a young Blond 16 year old girl ... she wears a red hair clip that was given to her by her mother. Her casual clothes are a white T-shirt and a red skirt.
[Ageria]
Is a young black haired 19 year old boy... His casual clothing is a White shirt and a black pants.
[Valton]
Wears a Black suit and a red coat hanged on his shoulders as a cloak and has Long black hair and usually wears Red Sunglasses.
[Reed]
Wears black jeans and a red long coat with a naked chest.Has white hair and blue eyes.
[Kuroko]
Wears a white cloak with a white uniform has black hair and brown eyes.
[Junto also known as the "guy in the black cloak"]
Wears a black cloak which is torn from every edge....is bald and has a tattoo near his eyes.


-"Valton's hideout ?....what do you want from that ?" Asked Reed.....
"The Rejigerna" repied Kuroko..."The Rejigerna ...i never heard about this" said Junto, "The Rejigerna is a an object that decides fate of death and life...with it we can control the fate of every singe free will in the galaxy" said Kuroko..."Well if this sort of thing exists and what you say is true than why does Valton have Rejigerna and why is it he didn't use it up until now" asked Reed..."The creator of the Rejigerna designed it for basic peace and to get rid of Jails in an instant but he had made a flaw in the Rejigerna so that it didn't get in bad hands...the flaw is that whoever holds the Rejigerna will be instantly killed" Said Kuroko ...

"Well the creator obviously would be able to wield it and use it .. but he didn't what would be the cause for that.?" Asked Reed.."Because the creator of Rejigerna sealed Muaro inside the Rejigerna" said Kuroko...*suprised*"the Devil Muaro is sealed inside that Rejigerna....Impossible" said Junto .."well if you wish to get the Rejigerna wouldn't the flaw kill you even if somehow you manage to get your hands on it Muaro could be release from it" said Reed ..."Well thats what i intent on doing....i have a way to counter the flaw and once i do that i will release Muaro and Force him to obey me using the Rejigerna" said Kuroko.

"You plan on controlling him by the Rejigerna ...but how" asked Junto....."you see the Rejigerna does not only control fate but it also controls free wills" Said Kuroko "Well that makes sense but how do you plan on countering the flaw" asked Reed.."The creator always makes an way to destroy its creations....i will force the creator to tell me how to counter it" Said Kuroko "and who is the creator of Rejigerna" asked Reed ..."Well to be Specific ....lets say our Former number 3 ranker .....Valton" Said Kuroko......."Uh !!!! Valton !? that makes sense why you sent me out searching for him" Said Reed...."That Betrayer" Said Junto... "Yes thats right" said Kuroko *Raso La Vida starts to shake* "what the !?" Said Reed ...."Looks like the invasion has began" said Kuroko.

"Oh i see..so why did you bring me here" Asked Sally....."Well ugh do i have to explain" Said Valton, "Well of course why did you bring me in this creepy place" said sally...."Well ....to be exact ... Your father told me to bring you here before the invasion begins" said Valton.... "My Father !? you knew my father and what Invasion" asked Sally "Well there's nothing for you to know about the invasion...and Yes your father and i were the best of friends...he was a nice man he made many sacrifices for the sake of others.....he even left your mother just to make sure you stayed safe" said Valton..."H--he left my mother for me" asked sally... "Yes ....he was an intelligent person...and he even found the cure for jails...but the Corkz couldn't stand this and started searching for him and incase they didn't find you...he left your mother...." Said Valton

"Do you know where he is...?" asked Sally .."He is Dead" Said Valton...."I see" Said Sally "[That wasn't the reaction i expected]" Thought Valton ...."What is my purpose to be here" asked Sally... "the world is no longer a safe place.. soon war will rage between Jails, Corkz and Rasto La Vida rankers and humans...." Said Valton..."That doesn't explain why i am here" said Sally ...."You need to live on....if you were not to be brought here you would have died...your father wanted you to fight for the humans, and i am just filling his last wish" *the ground starts to shake* its began the invasion ....the war has began...it will be a matter of time before we are found by the Corkz or even worse...Rasto La Vida." Said Valton

"So what do we do now" asked sally...."You must leave this Hideout....If you were to be discovered along with it, your fathers wishes will be torn apart....now go" Said Valton..."What about you...i can't go out there alone" Said Sally....
"No one is ever alone .....take this with you...its the Rejigerna its what this whole war is about...they all are in search for this thing" said Valton..."For this thing......But what if they spot me and kill me" Said Sally..."You must fight to survive....i am sure we will meet again...besides i won't let your father's wishes be torn apart" said Valton.... "B-but" -Sally ..."Now GO !! " Said Valton...... "...[But i am just a weak girl .....how will i survive ...he has so much faith in me...i a just going to let him down...but i have always been like this aways failing....but now failure is not an option]" Sally thinking.....*Sally runs away*

"[I am sure we will meet again] .......You don't waste anytime do you ....you mind telling me how you found me...Kuroko" asked Valton...."Hmph confident as ever.....Valton Where is the Rejigerna" asked Kuroko...."Like i would tell you that..." Said Valton...."Don't tell me you gave it too that girl" Said Kuroko.."Hmph" -Valton ..."You bastard ....Valton you really think you can kill me..." Asked Kuroko...."No i don't think that but its not bad to give it a try" Said Valton while taking out his sword.....*Kuroko Draws his sword* "Your arrogance will lead you to your death.....i will say this once more..hand over the Rejigerna" Said Kuroko "Thats a silly question....Kuroko" said Valton *Valton charges to attack Kuroko*.... *Kuroko cahrges at Valton.* "LETS SETTLE THIS ONCE AND FOR ALL' Said Valton.


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Nice Work...Interesting Indeed!!:win:
But Make Proper Use Of Punctuations,For instance..Some of the dialogues were confusing because U have used Continuation everywhere N One couldn't understand...What person is saying which dialogue!!:hint:
 
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Nice Work...Interesting Indeed!!:win:
But Make Proper Use Of Punctuations,For instance..Some of the dialogues were confusing because U have used Continuation everywhere N One couldn't understand...What person is saying which dialogue!!:hint:
Yes, but anyways I loved it!! It's so exciting!!! Can't wait for the next one! :bouncy:
 

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<div class="bbWrapper">Oh now this is starting to get really interesting! I hope Sally doesn't get caught too fast, and I also hope she isn't as weak as she thinks she is. You didn't waste much time getting right back into the mix of things, I like that alot. Keep it up, can't wait for chapter 6!</div>
 

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Again, I like how you open out revealing more about key factors in your story ^^ The Rejigerna is pretty omnipotent and it almost seems like obtaining this object is the main plot for your story. Okay so Valton is also a genius being able to create such a thing as the Rejigerna and now it makes sense why he was also being sought after. Insight into Sally’s family has finally come to the surface and Sally must have been he left here when she was very young maybe even an infant hence her nonchalant demeanor. So Sally is on the run whilst Valton stood back to buy her time to escape. I wonder how Sally will be able to defend herself now. Things took an interesting turn. Great job overall ;)
 
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