[Horror] Sound of That Evil that Exists. Chapter 4

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The Reason For Everything !?
This is the Full chapter 4 (No Parts)

Charcter Appearance's .....
[Sally]
Is a young Blond 16 year old girl ... she wears a red hair clip that was given to her by her mother. Her casual clothes are a white T-shirt and a red skirt.
[Ageria]
Is a young black haired 19 year old boy... His casual clothing is a White shirt and a black pants.
[Valton]
Wears a Black suit and a red coat hanged on his shoulders as a cloak and has Long black hair and usually wears Red Sunglasses.
[Reed]
Wears black jeans and a red long coat with a naked chest.Has white hair and blue eyes.
[Kuroko]
Wears a white cloak with a white uniform has black hair and brown eyes.
[Junto also known as the "guy in the black cloak"]
Wears a black cloak which is torn from every edge....is bald and has a tattoo near his eyes.

-"So this is the place you call Home...Looks pretty weird" Said Sally."Yes it is weird indeed..but at the same hand its somewhat special as well" replied Valton. "So who was that guy earlier and why was he fighting with you" asked Sally. "His name was Reed and he is one of the Killing Machines created by the organization he is an 5th ranking from those killing machines" said Valton..."5th ranking..i don't quite understand" said Sally...
"The organization created countless Killing machines but there were only 7 strongest Killing machines they each were ranked in number according to their strength"Said Valton....."So the one called Reed who was fighting against you was number 5 rank according to strength so the strongest would be number 1 ranker" Said Sally..."Yes Indeed" Said Valton.....

Somewhere hidden in the mountains...."So this is it huh" said Reed. "Yes this is the hidden gate to Rasto la vida(Hidden Organization)" said the person in the black cloak. *Door Opens* "Its pretty dark in here" said Reed. "Stop Complaining and keep walking" said the person in the black cloak....till they reach the end of the tunnel...."We have been expecting you" said a person sitting right infront of them with the other Killing machines. "I hope we are not late...Lord Kuroko" Said the guy in the black cloak while taking off his cloak..."We were just about to begin.....now before we waste anymore time please sit down Junto"...."Yes my lord" said Junto (the guy in the black cloak).
"Let me explain for the reason i called you here fellow Brothers.....as we speak the Corkz are preparing to attack Rasto la Vida ... And it may not be much of a threat..!" Said Kuroko...."Then why bother calling us here when there is no big threat to us" asked Reed..."Did i finish talking ? next time you better be careful before interrupting me while i am talking" said Kuroko. "Okay what ever" said Reed...."As i was saying they are not much of a threat but we will allow the organization to invade Rasto la vida !" said Kuroko ...every one stunned "what do you mean lord Kuroko if we let them invade then Rasto la vida will be completely destroyed !" said Junto.

"Yes ...that might be true but to achieve something a warm sacrifice is a must" said Kuroko....."Once Rasto La vida is invaded the three leaders of the Corkz will pay a visit to this place" said Kuroko ..."*Suprised* But what would they want from here If i may ask lord Kuroko" Asked Junto ..."They will come for the Key to Shonpo" Said Kuroko.. "but what do they want from something like that" Asked Reed..."What they want is the perfect KILLING MACHINE" said Kuroko ...."Well if they want the perfect Killing Machine as you say won't that be a threat to us....why should we allow them to invade if thats the case" Asked Reed .."Because through one of the leaders we can get the Exact Location of the Hideout of VALTON !" Said Reed...

Until Next Chapter ....

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<div class="bbWrapper">This chapter was a big TEASE! How could you leave me hanging like that?! Oh, I SO wanted MORE! However, it was good. I like the name Kuroko, it is very catchy, this organization is going to be very interesting I think. It is very myseterious, I like that about it. Kinda reminds me of the Akatsuki. <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" data-shortname=";)" /></div>
 

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This chapter was a big TEASE! How could you leave me hanging like that?! Oh, I SO wanted MORE! However, it was good. I like the name Kuroko, it is very catchy, this organization is going to be very interesting I think. It is very myseterious, I like that about it. Kinda reminds me of the Akatsuki. ;)
Kind of but its alot different than Akatsuki :yay:
 

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Well, I’m glad that the beginning of the chapter revealed somewhat the origin of Reed as well as a little more about the organization. Thus Valton must be among one of those rankings and by the looks of how he dealt with Reed, I’d assume he is around rank 4 or 6. Wow, this chapter shifts to the organization with a spanish like name-nice :) The members seem fierce and another group wants to invade in order to seize a key that will unlock the “perfect killing machine” and the organization’s leader will allow this for the sole purpose of exposing Valton’s whereabouts. I’m thinking either Sally is a special killing machine unbeknownst to herself and would explain why she is being sought after. Overall nice and insightful chapter! ;)
 
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