soul made of coal (a poem and song)

izinagi54

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I see thy soul dancing
in the valley below
but why am i filled with woe
as the demon insides me grows
feeling of hate and malice invade my soul
someone help me for i loose myself
to the darkest of hells

hellfire and brimstone turns this soul into coal
for somthing in me is amiss my soul is not whole
the blood rage calls out to me
saying i am a dying breed!
i see my friends dance with glee
as i see death stalking thee
death can take me if i can never be free
FOR I AM NOT ALL OF ME

someone needs the free the beast in me
it dances with glee over my bloody heed
i am not a saint as i like to be painteded
why can't i understand
to make my amends and give in
NO i will never surrender in vain!
death can never have me
without me giving it the green light
never ending lights of this blight cloud my mind
why can't i just be left alive!

- christopher
 
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Awesome Poem you should sing it on camera and upload it or something :)
 
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Yuka

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That was a beautiful poem,
 

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nice poem chris :) a few minor mistakes but it was really neat
 
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