[Raiton] Souji-senpai shock Orochimaru and Zanithe with Raiton

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"Mid-range is anywhere from 6-15 meters. Anything greater than that is long range, and anything less is short range. And regarding your second question, eight spears would each have E-rank strength. But when you add the strengths of all the jutsus, it still makes a B-rank technique overall."

"Mold your raiton chakra and visualize your image: what you are. You'll apply the principles of shape and nature manipulation to form an exact replica of yourself; a clone. Quite simple in theory, but make sure you get it right. These clones can use basic ninjutsu and taijutsu, as well as B-rank lightning techniques as well. When they disperse and get defeated, they can release a small surge of lightning that may momentarily annoy your opponent, giving you an opening that would be unexpected."

"Tell me what you know about clones, and how they can be useful in battle."


(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself but made from lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.

Next, use your sword and channel your Raiton chakra through it. The vibrating frequency and cutting power of the sword increases exponentially, turning an already lethal weapon into something special. You can cut through Earth like butter..."

Out of nowhere, a huge boulder that's bigger than both individuals suddenly hurtles directly at Alluka!

(Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.
 

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Alluka first kneads her chakra and uses nature and shape manipulation. As she does, she visualizes herself, how she looks like, how tall she is, how she dresses. She releases the chakra and a replica, or simply a clone of herself appears. It looks like her, in every way. I've been waiting for clone techs ^^ Name is boring ._. Well, still, it's really useful; REALLY. Clones work, like a diversion. Like, the enemy attacks your clone, you have the time to do another thing. It can also do some team techs, like punching someone at the same time, doing jutsus at the same time.

Clone dispersing!
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Alluka kneads her chakra and uses nature manipulation to turn it to raiton chakra. She grabs her sword and channels her chakra to it. It was full of lightning, quite ready for slicing. As the boulder nears Alluka, she slices it, breaking the boulder, saving Alluka. Who threw that boulder!! What a SUPER name xD I like using swords, so I like this tech too. ^^ Useful, liek slicing things like its a piece of paper. Reaaaaally useful, I like it ^^

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"Weave the Ram handseal and send lightning through the sky. It'll form an electrical discharge that shocks your target from above. It's fast, strong, and has a great range. One of the best B-rank Lightning techniques, in my opinion. Try it on that tree over there!"

(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.

"Now, use two shurikens, the regular or the Windmill ones, it doesn't matter. Infuse your Raiton into them, and create a tether made of lightning that attaches to the shurikens. By throwing them at your opponent, you can pin them down and channel electricity through the cable, numbing and paralyzing them. This leaves them open for a follow-up attack, making it good for use in a combination."

Souji creates a Shadow Clone that leans against a tree.

(Raiton: Shuriken Seigyo no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Shuriken Control Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will take out two large shuriken or Windmill Shuriken and channel their raiton chakra into them. They will then throw them at their target to pin them down and maintain a connection with the shuriken through a electrical cable that delivers a numbing shock to paralyse the target and restrict their movements.
Note: Numbing Effect lasts for one turn.
 

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Alluka performs the Ram handseal, while kneading his chakra and using nature manipulation to turn it to Lightning Chakra. She then points her right arm to the sky, channels her chakra to her arm, and discharges it to the sky. By the use of shape manipulation, she sends it to the tree. The tree is burned again. Well, electrocuted that is. Name is boring ._. Awesome jutsu though, great range and good attack. Overall, nice jutsu.

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Alluka grabs two shuriken from her bag. She kneads her chakra and uses nature manipulation to turn it to Lightning Chakra. She infuses her chakra and make an electric cable thing. She throws it at her senpai, and both did not hit. She then uses the connection to remove it from the tree and hit senpai. The clone disperses. Boring name ._. Bad range, better if long. Still, awesome for combinations. Overall, average.

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(You don't have to tell me your opinions on the name, I was just joking around back then xD but keep up the good work :) )

"Alright, these are the last three B-ranked techniques! Excited?"

"Generate purple lightning and push it forward like a wave in front of you. This can damage and knock away enemies that try and get too close to you. Purple lightning is quite pretty... but this technique only works in short range, keep that in mind."


A clone of Souji begins running up to Alluka.

( Raiton: Rakurai Senkou ) - Lightning Release: Thunderbolt Flash
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a current of purplish lightning from their hands forward, damaging and knocking away enemies. The range of this technique is, however, limited.

"This technique has you applying defensive wall principles and creating a lightning wall with your hands outstretched in front of you, except this is a plasma barrier. You'll need to maintain your focus on this wall, but the interesting here is that the jutsu follows you where you move. If you ram an opponent with the wall active, you can use it like a riot shield. Alternatively, discharge the electricity in any direction you choose, creating an energy wave that can hit targets who are close by.

"It lasts three turns, but I believe you can deactivate it by unleashing the wave at any point."

( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-5 per turn active)
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow. However the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques while sustaining the technique. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active and use it to ram against them. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.
"And finally, the last B-rank technique has you manipulating your Raiton chakra and creating a lightning orb in your hands. Release it into the air, and after a few seconds, the orb of lightning will rain down lightning bolts that will hit any enemy in its attack radius. A fast, simple move, and the delayed release can open up a lot of combat options."

( Raiton: Kaminari no Shōgeki Ame ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shock Rain
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their lightning chakra condensing into a orb of chakra and then releasing it into the air. The lightning orb will then remain in the air for several seconds releasing a continous rain of lightning bolts shocking any enemy within the radius of the attack.
Note: Lasts only the turn in which its used
 

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She kneads her chakra and uses nature manipulation to turn it to Lightning Chakra. She sends her chakra to her palms and releases her chakra after coloring it purplish. It then gets pushed forward, and destroys the clone, fodderizing it. Okay name. Cool jutsu, bad range. Well, good technique for short ranges. And, about to reach A Ranks is exciting XD

-Sorryyyy senpai, can't find a picture-

Alluka kneads he chakra and uses nature manipulation to turn it to Raiton chakra. She then sends the chakra all over her body creating a plasma barrier around her. She discharges some lightning from her barrier. Okay name. The range kinda sucks.

Question senpai, if I use the offensive of the jutsu, would the defense disappear?

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Alluka kneads her chakra and uses nature manipulation to turn it to Raiton chakra. She focuses it on her palms and creates a lightning orb of it. She then sends it to the sky, and lightning falls down. Cool jutsu XD Boring name :/ Well, the attack is good, but it makes lots of openings. So, still sucks, but I guess it's good nonetheless

-Sorry senpai, didn't find any picture-
 
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"Answering your question, yes. The moment you discharge the offensive version of that jutsu, the shield will disappear. Remember to use it as the best time!"

Souji seemed a little more excited than usual.

"Now... for the A-ranks! These techniques are volatile and generally incredible in their strength and effects. I expect you'll treat them with the respect they deserve."

"The first one has you forming the Monkey, Ox, Boar, and Tiger handseals. Discharge electricity from your hands and form them into lightning disks. You can then throw them like frisbees at your targets. They have cutting and shocking properties."


Souji points to a couple of trees that are ripe to be cut down for firewood.

(I think this tech is like Krillin's Destructo Disk, honestly xD)
( Raiton: Raisogekishin ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Rat Violent Quake
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the required hand seals Monkey → Ox → Boar → Tiger the user releases a discharge of electricity that shapes itself into several destructive disks of lightning. These are shot at the targets with great speed.
"The second jutsu is the Chidori! I believe you were waiting for this jutsu? Very self explanatory, it's been spammed by certain people in our world, ad nauseam. I want you to be detailed with the formation of the chidori, and analyze it well. I'll fill any points you may have missed."

Souji sets up a Training dummy that looks like Karin, the Uzumaki! Lol

(If you have any questions about the chidori, let me know :) )

(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they will then focus lightning chakra into their hand to create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name, and allows the user to perform high grade cutting damage or high penetration piercing thrusts.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Note: Uchiha Sasuke and Kakashi Hatake bios can use the technique without handseals
 

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Alluka smiles in excitement—she long waited for A Rank Lightning. She listens to her Senpai's instructions, and nods in understanding. She starts by kneading her chakra and using nature manipulation to turn it to Lightning chakra. As she does, she performs the handseals Monkey -> Ox -> Boar -> Tiger. She discharges the Lightning in her hand. She uses shape manipulation to change its shape to lightning disks, exactly three lightning disks. She sees the three trees pointed by her senpai. She throws the three disks at the same time in three different directions, each directly going to the three. The first tree was hit in the right side, the second in the middle, the third in the left. this causes the first to fall sideways to the right, the second to fall down by front, and the third fell sideways to the left. Alluka smirks a little, somehow recognizing the technique.

"Well, I think there was a technique like this, using shuriken infused with lightning, but this uses disks. The name is very.... normal. I mean, why Rat xD Too bad it isn't a long range though. Still, I think its pretty reasonable, so I'd rate this jutsu as 7/10.

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Alluka's eyes sparkled, it's her long awaited jutsu. She had always wanted to learn it, as it can make an addition to her Kenjutsu techniques. She kneaded her chakra and used nature manipulation to turn it to Lightning chakra. As she does, she performs the handseals Ox -> Rabbit -> Monkey -> Dragon -> Rat -> Bird -> Ox -> Snake -> Dog -> Tiger -> Monkey. She sends her chakra to her right palm. She had focused the lightning, and kept it in her palm. Lightning had surrounded her hand. She concentrated it, and it started to sound like a chirping bird. She then runs to the Karin dummy. As she reaches it, she hits her chest with her right hand, and Alluka's hand pierced it. As she removed her hand, a hole was left open. Alluka smiled, out of pure innocence.

"Finally xD!!! Expected the name to be cool, which it is. It has to rival the name "Rasengan", and "Chidori" sounds cool. So, the series of handseals is really a down, but after we finish Lightning, it's great that I only have to perform the Ox handseal. The rank is reasonable though, so I rate thus jutsu as 9.999999999999/10.

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(Excellent descriptions and staying in character! :D)

"This next A-rank jutsu is a personal favorite of mine, and very powerful. Concentrate your Raiton chakra in your open hand and form a sphere of lightning that surrounds your hand. You can then throw it as a projectile towards your enemy, or punch them with it while it's still connected to your hand. Either way, upon contact, the sphere causes a massive lightning explosion. Powerful and fast; the personification of lightning's properties."

Souji creates a Shadow Clone for Alluka to test the jutsu on.
(Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand, compressing it into a ball of lightning energy. The user can then hurl it at the enemy or trust it forward in a melee attack. Once the ball hits the target, it expands into a massive lightning explosion.

"The second technique is a variant of the chidori: The sharp spear. Create a Chidori in your hands and use shape manipulation to form a blade that can reach up to 10 meters. This blade can split apart into multiple blades, and you use it much like a sword, and almost has a solid feeling, much like a tangible object."

"What makes this jutsu different from the regular chidori, and what advantages does it have over its parent technique?"

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact but unlike others, seems to focus more on having a cutting power, like a katana, than a piercing one. Because of its cutting abilities, it often seems to manifest a certain "solidity"; a tangible aspect.
 

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Alluka listens to her senpai. After he speaks, Alluka kneads her chakra and uses nature manipulation to turn it to Lightning chakra. She focuses the chakra onto her right palm, and shapes a sphere. The Lightning was too many that it sparkled in a way. It seemed so strong and deadly ^^ After she was satisfied at the sphere's shape she runs to the clone. She punches it at the clone, somehow like throwing the Rasengan. After releasing it she retreats and lets it expand to a lightning explosion. The clone disperses, and the ground was kinda... black.

"I guess the name is reasonable ._. It's a really awesome technique though, it's also cool that you can throw it. So, ths jutsu is at least 9/10."

0-0 Sorry senpai, can's find a photo

As his senpai finished saying the instructions, Alluka started to create the Chidori. Instead of focusing it on her palm she started shaping it to a blade instead. It chirped again like a bird. She continues to extend it up to 10 meters by using her Lightning chakra. She felt it was solid; like a regular sword. She then swings it onto a nearby tree to cut it in half.

"Okay name. Well, the name makes the jutsu really obvious of what it can do. This is better since it can extend mid range, but it still uses the same amount of chakra. This jutsu is rated 9.9999 (goes on until the end of the world) /10"

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"Perform a set of three handseals and place your hand on the ground, creating a large triangular bolt of lightning that cuts through the ground while rushing towards your target. Anything in its path is hit. Some things to note: this travels along the ground as it needs it as a medium to be effective, and it's also a stream type, in which you can control the path of the attack with your chakra. You should know the implications of that."

(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of 3 hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

"For this next jutsu, I'm going to cast a genjutsu on you. Don't worry, let me explain."

"This next technique is the Chidori Nagashi, where you'll surge a Chidori throughout your entire body as an unfocused current that can paralyze enemies in its attack range. Alternatively, you can also channel the Nagashi through a focused conduit like a weapon to increase its range. However, one of the better usages is its ability as a full-body chakra surge, where you can disrupt your chakra system with a running of your own chakra throughout your entire body. This full-body surge can dispel genjutsus cast on you by expelling foreign chakra that's been inserted by an enemy. Note, however, that it can only dispel genjutsus up to one rank lower than the Nagashi itself; a property among full-body surge techniques. So, since this jutsu is an A-rank, it can dispel up to B-rank genjutsus."

"There have been a lot of misuses of this jutsu, so be sure to understand it and ask me questions if you have any concerns. But for now, let's try this..."


Souji places Alluka under a genjutsu, changing his surroundings to make it look like a dry desert instead of the grassy field they were doing the training in.


Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10 (+5 if you use it double)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion over an area that allows him to manipulate the way an area looks to fool an opponent. He can only change the way the terrain looks, and not any other feature.



(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short (Mid if channeled through a medium)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+10 if used to boost weapon damage)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electricity from their body. It can be used as an omnidirectional attack or be channeled through weapons, the ground or other conductive mediums. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it has great numbing and paralyzing effects. To channel Nagashi through a medium, the user needs to focus the technique into one of his hands which will then be put in contact with the medium and can only choose to either do a widespread attack throughout his whole body or to channel it into something; he cannot achieve both usages at the same time. Despite not having much destructive or damaging properties, Nagashi can be used to destroy low rank earthen and wooden structures and even negate chakra on the ground to stop high ranked earth and wood techniques. It has also been noted that Lightning Specialists that have mastered Lightning to the highest degree can resist total paralyzation, although they still feel the pain and numbing effects.
Note: Paralyzation lasts 1 turn if sucessful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty
 

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(Sorry for super late reply! Been busy lately!)

(Hey, nice to see the orange! Congrats!)

Alluka kneads her chakra and uses nature manipulation to turn it to Lightning chakra. She performs three handseals and sends her chakra to her palms. She slams her hands onto the ground and channels it through the ground. She sends it through a nearby tree to electrocute it.

"I think that the range is reasonable, I've encountered a jutsu like this with short range ._. It's great and nothing much to see because it's a self-explanatory jutsu. But its good."

Alluka kneads her chakra and uses nature manipulation to turn it to Lightning chakra. She creates a "chidori" from her hands. This chidori is spread throughout her body and shocks it, quickly releasing her from the genjutsu. The chidori is spread through her body.

"This jutsu has some kind of awesome hit to it. It's useful against genjutsu and the paralysis is awesome too. Nothing much to say rather than it also seems like the original chidori.
 

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(No worries, take all the time you need ^^ and thanks!)

Souji created two clones once again.

"Last two A-ranks! Ready?"

"First one. Channel your Raiton chakra throughout your body and release it into your surroundings. Use shape manipulation to form a vortex of electrical currents around you like a tornado. It's like one of those long Chinese Dragons that wraps around you, as a visual reference point. This dragon can then shoot forward in front of you. Even if the opponent manages to dodge, the lightning can jump from the vortex and shock, giving it a nice area of effect property."


The first clone starts reading what appears to be a lewd magazine U_U

(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will grow to then shoot forward and cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

"The final A-rank has you weaving the Rabbit, Rat, Horse, and Ram handseals. Slam your hand on the ground and release a ton of Raiton chakra into it. It will pool beneath my second clone's feet and erupt as a large column of electricity that decimates anything caught in it. You can control the size and height of the pillar, within reason, of course."

"You can even hit low flying targets if you get the timing right."


The second clone starts reading the same thing the first clone was reading U_U

( Raiton: Denpō Sekka ) – Lightning Release: Telegram Flash
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Rat → Horse → Ram hand seals, the user will slam his hand on the ground and release into it a massive amounts of lightning chakra which will then pool beneath his opponent before releasing itself into a gigantic column of lightning which shocks anything caught above it. The technique can affect a bigger or smaller area depending on the users will.
 

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Alluka kneads her chakra and uses nature manipulation to turn it to Lightning chakra. She channels it throughout her body and releases it. She uses shape manipulation to create a vortex out of her chakra. The vortex had electric currents that looked like a tornado. It then takes form of a dragon's head. It shoots forward to the clone who was reading the lewd magazine. The clone dodges (at the cost of losing the magazine) but the lightning jumped from the vortex and shocked him. The clone disperses. @.@

"I like this jutsu because of its range. Like, if he dodges by moving aside it would still hit him. The long range is kind of good too. I presume the dragon's head is kind of large so it's quite thinkable if he simply jumps upward or steps aside."

Alluka kneads her chakra and uses nature manipulation to turn it to Lightning chakra. At the same time she weaves the handseals Rabbit -> Rat -> Horse -> Ram. She slams her hands on the ground and channels her chakra below the second clone's feet. After sending enough, the chakra pooled beneath him. It released a gigantic column of lightning, quickly making the clone disperse, making the lewd magazine burn (Haha.) and making a bird fry.

"Like the first jutsu, this jutsu's range is awesome. I really like its "column" attack. Well, seems like I have the like for wide range jutsus.
 

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"Good, Alluka, now for the S-ranks! These are the pinnacle of Lightning release techniques... most of them are unlike you've ever seen, but rather, heard in the stories of famous shinobi in the past."

"The very first S-rank Raiton technique is powerful, fast, and all around, one of the best standard techniques in existence. After performing the Snake hand seal, you'll fire a lightning spear from either your hands or mouth. This has such high piercing potential, it can punch through any earth technique like nothing. It's incredibly fast and difficult to evade. In fact, you would need really strong wind techniques or equal ranked Raiton to even stop this."

"Destroy that huge boulder, pierce through it and break it apart. You can also split the jutsu into multiple branches, and each one of those streams is lower-ranked, like we learned earlier."

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

"After that, you will form two Chidoris in your hands, one in each. Clap your hands together, and this burst of two energy sources will cause a massive thunderbolt that will be linearly directed at your target. Incredibly powerful and it can leave a massive crater from the impact of the jutsu. Unfortunately, using this in short range is impossible, or you'll get caught in the explosion of the jutsu."

"One thing to keep in mind. This jutsu is best done from high ground. So, walk over to the edge of this hill we're standing on, and fire the ThunderClap at the ground below us, at the trees below. Check out what it's capable of!"

(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will cover his hands in with lightning, essentially performing a (Raiton: Chidori) Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds in each hand. Clapping his hands together, the user can unleash that massive amount of lightning chakra into the form of a powerful Thunderbolt directed at the target. The technique is best used if the user has a height advantage in relation to the target. The thunderbolt is strong enough to leave a giant crater and cannot be used while being in Short-range of the target, at the risk of being hit also.
 

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No problem, sensei ^^

After listening to her sensei's instructions, Alluka starts to smile in excitement. She kneads her chakra, uses nature manipulation to turn it to Lightning chakra, and weaves the Snake handseal. She points her right hand at the huge boulder, and sends her chakra to the said hand. She releases the chakra while controlling it, applying shape manipulation to shape it to a spear. This spear travelled incredibly fast and destroys the huge boulder, making chunks of rock drop all over the place.

I really like the name and the whole jutsu itself! It's like your all in one package; speed, power, and all around. I can see how much I'm going to use this jutsu in the future. I rate this jutsu, er, around 9.7/10.

After listening to her senpai's instructions, Alluka kneads her chakra and uses nature manipulation to turn it to Lightning chakra. She walks over to the edge of the hill until she sees the green trees below. She focuses the said chakra in both of her hands, forming two Chidoris in the process. She claps her hands together, releasing a massive amount of chakra forming a powerful Thunderbolt which is targeted at the trees below. This destroys the trees leaving craters in their leave.

Name sucks. But awesome jutsu by the way. The idea of thunder clapping is awesome, it's range is cool and the power is credible. Rating, around 9.4/10.
 

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Souji could see Alluka's growth. She was getting more confident, and she had that sparkle in her eyes that was a mix of both joy and killing intent. He smirked, happy.

"Being awfully specific with those ratings, huh? Ha, that's good, though. I really like your enthusiasm and effort. Don't lose that spark, no pun intended!

"Now for the Raikiri; Kakashi Hatake's signature technique. It's legendary for its usage and feared for its strength. I shouldn't really have to explain it to you; other than the fact that it's a Chidori with more chakra control required, and higher strength and power in general."


(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Long if applied to a projectile weapon)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The Lightning Cutter is an enhanced and concentrated form of the Chidori with the same effects and drawbacks that is done performing the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey hand seals. According to Might Guy, it gained its name after Kakashi split a bolt of lightning with it. Because the Chidori is already powerful on its own, the Lightning Cutter requires better chakra control, which is exemplified in its appearance. The Chidori appears as simply a mass of white electrical chakra in the user's hand, while the Lightning Cutter is much more focused. Kakashi has shown different ways of forming and using the Lightning Cutter, unique to him. For example, he demonstrated the ability to imbue a projectile weapon, such as a kunai, with his Lightning Cutter, granting the technique long-range capabilities by throwing the kunai towards his target. In this instance, the kunai was capable of piercing through multiple large rocks with ease, without any loss of momentum or change in trajectory.
Note: Kakashi biographies can use the technique without hand seals.
Note: Only Kakashi biographies can apply the technique to a kunai and use it as a projectile attack.

"These next two are Chidori variants. For the first one, form a chidori and point your palm forward. Release the chakra in a blast of lightning. The formation of the angle is enough to create a widespread attack that pushes forward. It's fast and efficient; it can tear through any Earth technique, and serve as a lethal offensive attack."

"Hit those targets over there. The last ones I've got for you."


The last set of targets rested quietly, waiting for their inevitable demise xd

(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: The user will channel lightning chakra into his hand, covering it with a massive chidori. The user will then point his palm forwards, unleashing that chakra, creating a massive 120º blast of lightning that spreads from his hand, outwards and forward towards the enemy.
"Then, form another Chidori and running up to your opponent-in case, my clone. Strike him, and once you do, apply your shape manipulation to extend your chidori into a long lightning spear that impales and pushes him upward. The tip of the spear will explode, just to add more injury to injury."

"Go ahead."


Souji's Shadow Clone waits to be defeated U_U

( Raiton: Chidori Shinsō ) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.
 

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(Wow, two replies in a day!)

Alluka was also looking forward to the enhanced version of Chidori, Raikiri. Her eyes became bright as she listens to the instructions of her sensei. She performs the Ox -> Rabbit -> Monkey handseals. She focuses her chakra onto her right hand and forms the Raikiri like how she formed the Chidori. It was more focused because Alluka spent most of her time doing so. After she finished forming it, she tests it out on a tree, cutting its bark in the middle.

Also been waiting for this tech. It's direct, it's powerful, it's cool. I like the name too xD These S Ranks are really cool :D Rating, um around 9.99/10.

After listening to her senpai's instructions and giving the targets a glare, Alluka kneads her chakra and uses nature manipulation to turn it to Lightning chakra. She focuses her chakra onto her right hand and forms a Chidori on it. She points her palm forward, pointing at the center of the five targets. She releases the chakra in a blast of lightning, quickly destroying the targets with its widespread attack.

The idea of widespread attacks is cool, rarely I see one. So the mid is a minus but the widespread covers for it. So maybe this jutsu is around 9.5/10... NO! It's 9.4/10 caz the name is not so cool!

After listening to the instructions of her sensei, Alluka kneads her chakra and uses nature manipulation to turn it to Lightning chakra. She forms a chidori in her right hand and dashes off to fodderize the clone. As she strikes the clone, she applies shape manipulation to extend it into a lightning spear. She impales the clone in the heart and sends a lightning explosion, making the clone disperse.

Nah, this jutsu is as awesome as chidori. Nothing much to say here rather than the name is not well thought of. So 9.9/10 is enough u.u
 

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"You'll like this next one." he said.

Molding Katon chakra in his mouth and performing a single handseal, Souji opened his mouth and applied shape manipulation to turn the fire building up inside him into dragon-shaped fireballs. Looking up towards to the sky, he spewed out these fireballs, which caused the otherwise clear skies to begin to get cloudy due to the extreme heat. The alteration of the local weather meant only one thing...


Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.




"Kirin."

"I've helped you set up for this legendary technique. Typically, a fire jutsu that heats up the atmosphere causes changes in pressure and forms clouds. As the thunderclouds and natural lightning begin to form, perform a Chidori and use it to control the lightning that starts striking, applying the highest levels of shape and nature manipulation to literally tame lightning. It requires two moves on the turn you use Kirin, so be aware of that."

"This is one of the most powerful techniques in existence. If you manage to pull it off in a battle, it's almost considered an instant win."

"For this, so that we don't get fried, direct the Kirin towards that nearby hill over there, a safe distance from our own hill. But even at that distance, we'll feel the aftershocks. I fully expect the hill to be completely obliterated. A testament to its frightening power."


Souji braced for impact!

(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: 120
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.
 

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"You'll like this next one." he said.

Molding Katon chakra in his mouth and performing a single handseal, Souji opened his mouth and applied shape manipulation to turn the fire building up inside him into dragon-shaped fireballs. Looking up towards to the sky, he spewed out these fireballs, which caused the otherwise clear skies to begin to get cloudy due to the extreme heat. The alteration of the local weather meant only one thing...


Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.




"Kirin."

"I've helped you set up for this legendary technique. Typically, a fire jutsu that heats up the atmosphere causes changes in pressure and forms clouds. As the thunderclouds and natural lightning begin to form, perform a Chidori and use it to control the lightning that starts striking, applying the highest levels of shape and nature manipulation to literally tame lightning. It requires two moves on the turn you use Kirin, so be aware of that."

"This is one of the most powerful techniques in existence. If you manage to pull it off in a battle, it's almost considered an instant win."

"For this, so that we don't get fried, direct the Kirin towards that nearby hill over there, a safe distance from our own hill. But even at that distance, we'll feel the aftershocks. I fully expect the hill to be completely obliterated. A testament to its frightening power."


Souji braced for impact!

(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: 120
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.
 
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