Sonic: The Roleplay

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-Hmph- That Lana again... Dr. Robotnik said so huh? What would he want to do with five kg of cake!?

Jirayia:
Name: Jirayia the Evil Genius
Species: Black Hedgehog
Abilties: Telikenisis/Invisibility/Darkness
Gender: Male
Rival: Spike, Gowan, Lana
 
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-Hmph- That Lana again... Dr. Robotnik said so huh? What would he want to do with five kg of cake!?

Shadow:
Name: Shadow the Evil Genius
Species: Black Hedgehog
Abilties: Telikenisis/Invisibility/Darkness
Gender: Male
Rival: Spike, Gowan, Lana
Even if this isn't supposed to be a canon character, it's too close and thus I have to ask you to not use him.
Create something entirely different from an existing character.
 

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Black hedgehog is fine, but name is exact same as shadow the hedgehog, obviously, and having Spike as your rival without him having one makes no sense.
Powers are a bit op, you might want to tone it down.
(I changed it to Jirayia, it was the most epic name i could think of since i was thinking of my favourites xD Telikenisis isn't OP, It is kinda like Tsuchikage/Onoki/Muu, moving rocks and smashing them, and darkness kinda Shadow yeah... But overall not that OP, and invisibility isn't a battle ability... More like supplementel, and i'll make Spike my rival just gotta ask Gran xD)

-Darkness starts leaking out of J as small rocks are jumping around- It is not time yet? And that Lana... Puh, so annoying, i don't need any of them! Dr. Robotnik only needs me! Me! Puh... Fighting with some Angel Islanders? Hah! Just some weaklings... Unless they do defeat her... They are interesting... Indeed.
 

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-Is sitting on a chair, infront of the window as he punches a robot thatbwas getting close to him and he sees Syn enter- Syn, you are late... Dr. Robotnik is late aswell.... -Sends out a shockwave that makes all the (Cough cough... Fodders) Robots malfunction and stop working- Annoying... -Sits on the Confferance table- Sit Syn...
 
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