"this peace of crap needs no comment"
well i'm commenting it.

1. i don't like it.
2. where's the render? .-.
3. all i see is weird smudge, also try to sharpen them instead of blurring them.
first one.
1. pretty decent.
2. i wouldn't put the text too close to where the lighting allows the depth to function. Maybe should have placed it down there at the bottom where it's a little more empty.
3. text needs work. keep practicing it!!!!!
