Some poems 
i just want some comments on if they r good or bad -_-
and what should be changed as im novice in this
Happy Ramzan or Ramadan too you all (whichever u like to pronounce XD)
W-I-S-H
THE END OF THE WORLD
AT THIS TIME OF NIGHT
MAKING
SOIL
RACE
i just want some comments on if they r good or bad -_-
and what should be changed as im novice in this
Happy Ramzan or Ramadan too you all (whichever u like to pronounce XD)
W-I-S-H
I wish i had wings
To break of from these strings
I wish i could fly
On that blue, limitless sky
Wish i could run on the sea
And further then that stars i could see
Higher than the mountains i could jump
In the clouds i would bump
Death to be afraid of me
Best would be my company
Wish i could be in love, over and over
Wish i could be a kid, and never grow older
Wish i could make a time machine
Go in past and fix everything
Wish i knew all
Not to have any downfall
Wish i would never die
Never be betrayed and never cry
Wish i could meet the God
Impossible in this life i been told
Wish i could live the way i want
To eat to sleep whenever I want
Wish i could remember
Every moment spent with you
And could recall
Each day that you remember
Wish i had everything
And to lose, i had nothing
Wish i could live in peace
And that Peace, i could cease
Wish i was greedier
To ask more than God wants to offer
Before my time is over
Amen
To break of from these strings
I wish i could fly
On that blue, limitless sky
Wish i could run on the sea
And further then that stars i could see
Higher than the mountains i could jump
In the clouds i would bump
Death to be afraid of me
Best would be my company
Wish i could be in love, over and over
Wish i could be a kid, and never grow older
Wish i could make a time machine
Go in past and fix everything
Wish i knew all
Not to have any downfall
Wish i would never die
Never be betrayed and never cry
Wish i could meet the God
Impossible in this life i been told
Wish i could live the way i want
To eat to sleep whenever I want
Wish i could remember
Every moment spent with you
And could recall
Each day that you remember
Wish i had everything
And to lose, i had nothing
Wish i could live in peace
And that Peace, i could cease
Wish i was greedier
To ask more than God wants to offer
Before my time is over
Amen
THE END OF THE WORLD
Let me remind you about the End of the world
Your sins will have you just like a caged bird
Be ready before the signs are shown
Not to all, these are known
Sun will be from west, the beast will come
The fire from Yemen, Thick smoke will come
The Kaaba will be destroyed
World will be the devil's kingdom
The Mehdi, the Isa (R.A), the Dajjal
And the Gog magog, more than humans in all
And when all and everything will be done,
The day of Qyama will come
The stars will fell off, the sky will crack
The Earth will be a rail off a track
The Plants will rot off, the animals will die
Sun will be blazing hell and water will dry
The houses will sink and the mountains will blow
Stones, fall on us just like the white snow
And when there will be nowhere to go
The true nature of human will show
The lovers of The Lord will all be dead on that day
The doors to forgiveness will all be closed on that day
Riots and commotion everywhere on that day
Only doom and destruction will be left all on that day
Knowledge will be blocked and the humans will go blind
Nothing they can do, and no help they can find
Everything else will burst and will turn to dust
Leaving humans to face the God alone and to reply
Then the God Whom nothing can reach
Will question everyone and each
Hell to the sinners and heaven on the forgiven
The new world starts and a new life begin
This life will never end
Now! You have your will to bend
Change your style, your attitude and abide
To the God, before it’s too late while there still is time
Your sins will have you just like a caged bird
Be ready before the signs are shown
Not to all, these are known
Sun will be from west, the beast will come
The fire from Yemen, Thick smoke will come
The Kaaba will be destroyed
World will be the devil's kingdom
The Mehdi, the Isa (R.A), the Dajjal
And the Gog magog, more than humans in all
And when all and everything will be done,
The day of Qyama will come
The stars will fell off, the sky will crack
The Earth will be a rail off a track
The Plants will rot off, the animals will die
Sun will be blazing hell and water will dry
The houses will sink and the mountains will blow
Stones, fall on us just like the white snow
And when there will be nowhere to go
The true nature of human will show
The lovers of The Lord will all be dead on that day
The doors to forgiveness will all be closed on that day
Riots and commotion everywhere on that day
Only doom and destruction will be left all on that day
Knowledge will be blocked and the humans will go blind
Nothing they can do, and no help they can find
Everything else will burst and will turn to dust
Leaving humans to face the God alone and to reply
Then the God Whom nothing can reach
Will question everyone and each
Hell to the sinners and heaven on the forgiven
The new world starts and a new life begin
This life will never end
Now! You have your will to bend
Change your style, your attitude and abide
To the God, before it’s too late while there still is time
AT THIS TIME OF NIGHT
At this time of night I am never able to sleep thinking why i exist
When i think why i am alone
When i think i might lose to everyone than even to myself
When i think of the people died and i know....
When I remember all that i was unable to complete
When the limits are crossed and i can't sleep...
At the late night
God calls me at the mosque to pray to Him
Well I guess
He never forgets
Not even at the time of sleep
When i think why i am alone
When i think i might lose to everyone than even to myself
When i think of the people died and i know....
When I remember all that i was unable to complete
When the limits are crossed and i can't sleep...
At the late night
God calls me at the mosque to pray to Him
Well I guess
He never forgets
Not even at the time of sleep
MAKING
I hope it looks good
The way it should
Tried changing everything
But there is still,
Something missing
And like always i feel
Trying to make it real
Before to others, i show it
I have to perfect it
Shuffle and re-arrange it
Add then delete from it
That’s how things form
Accurately nothing is born
Step by step i create
Then i make it perfect
The way it should
Tried changing everything
But there is still,
Something missing
And like always i feel
Trying to make it real
Before to others, i show it
I have to perfect it
Shuffle and re-arrange it
Add then delete from it
That’s how things form
Accurately nothing is born
Step by step i create
Then i make it perfect
They disrespect their soil
They make my blood boil
Sorry for the Martyrs
For their sons are spoiled
Because of them, the cities in turmoil
Poor the convict, rich assoiled
In every sin they are embroiled
And then they blame their nation,
Their religion!? Their soil!?
I thank God for giving me
This religion, this country
And even if i have to stand alone
Against the world for it
I WILL, ALWAYS
Even though I am spoiled
They make my blood boil
Sorry for the Martyrs
For their sons are spoiled
Because of them, the cities in turmoil
Poor the convict, rich assoiled
In every sin they are embroiled
And then they blame their nation,
Their religion!? Their soil!?
I thank God for giving me
This religion, this country
And even if i have to stand alone
Against the world for it
I WILL, ALWAYS
Even though I am spoiled
Trying to catch up to others
Trying to be at 1st
Running like mad still can’t reach that far
But the place where I stand
Is enough for me, so why?
I try?
I could care less about the people going ahead
I could care more for the people going no more
I should go back to bring them ahead
At least to the place where i stand
Then i can move forward again
At the end i know i might lose
But this lost will just be a win
If one of the saved ones will win
Trying to be at 1st
Running like mad still can’t reach that far
But the place where I stand
Is enough for me, so why?
I try?
I could care less about the people going ahead
I could care more for the people going no more
I should go back to bring them ahead
At least to the place where i stand
Then i can move forward again
At the end i know i might lose
But this lost will just be a win
If one of the saved ones will win
