Six Paths of Pain (Help me)

RinneArtist

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Though it's not very high quality please check out this song I put together the other day. I plan on expanding on the instruments because its very basic.
Feel free to actually go to youtube and give me a like!
Six Paths of Pain Help Me Remix
Note: Deuce tends to not rhyme with a lot of his songs so I keep some of it in this song. That would be why some of my lyrics don't rhyme, don't judge.

[video=youtube;-CqaCFpenP4]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-CqaCFpenP4&list=HL1352457377&feature=mh_lolz[/video]


Tell me what you guys think!
Lyrics

Human
Asura
Deva
Preta
Animalia
Naraka

Human - Could steal your sold today
Asura - Killed Jiraiya Sensei
Deva - I know Bansho Ten'in I'll pull you back before you run away
Preta - Absorb more than Kisame's Blade
Animalia - I can Kachiyose
Naraka - We are the Six Paths of Pain, I'll change this world so full of hate
I'm the god of the Naruto verse,
Go ahead and face me you'll end up in a hearse!
I'm the second Sage of Six, you can't fight this,
You'll end up so damn dead and soulless.
I'm sick of this world so full of hatred,
Gonna collect the nine Bijuu make a weapon of it
What you gonna do I take entire villages down,
Other Shinobi are no where near me, Take him,
Like Kakashi Hatake who's dead in a ditch,
Wasted his life for a shinobi on the D-list,
Killed your Sensei's, Sensei, so how would you win?
Everyone I fight it goes just like this,
Like Hanzo of the Rain went down like a bitch,
Didn't remember my face so I killed him that quick
Hold up, Tsunade is your best shinobi and Kage?
I guess your pretty ****ed!

*Chorus*

Look at where I'm from, the god I have become,
Started the Akatsuki up with some help from Madara
Konoha will get no love, just like Sage Naruto,
Rasenshurikens suck! From Nagato with love!
Go ahead, dream, loser dream but your gonna die,
You'll never be a kage kid, surprise, surprise.
So long as we live in this world of hate,
No one can truly understand anothers pain.
But what can I do? Collect the B-I-Juu!
Create a weapon to educate this kids!
Jiraiya sensei's wrong, Naive and headstrong.
Your just like him, and a sage even!
C'mon Naruto I wanted a fight!
SHINRA TENSEI! Why don't you go ahead and die
S-O-6-P, yeah I'm back!
Hey Kyuubi, (Kyuubi Roar) Your about to be mine!

*Chorus*

I'm the one to put the Kyuubi away for good,
Just like the SO6P sure would
CHIBAKU TENSEI, comin right up Bam its done!
You can't win this, oh ****!
Your Hax, but can't last.
Your back to the man who lost so fast!
Baka (Fool)I don't have any love
For a wannabe pupil of Jiraiya

Peace made you foolish and thoughtless. If you kill someone, someone else will kill you. This hatred binds us together. I want you to feel pain, to accept pain, to know pain.

*Chorus*
 
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Zorø

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its harrrrrrrrrrrd
 

BEASTLY NARUTO

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Ahahahaha I tried singing I couldn't help but laugh at myself think I better have to go and hear you out on YouTube
 

Flash

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It doesn't even rhyme :|

But looks like you put some effort into it :)
 

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Well, uhm, wasent that good tbh, lyrics are weird and your voice isnt that great.
 
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