Simple drawing by Ventalus

[Ventalus]

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Still just working with Anatomy, camera views and poses.

Now, after all piece of shiat drawings I do everyday I finally start making more progresses xD, still. I keep doing this syntax errors by maybe make the characters body way to small or way to big. Still I am working with it and at least I am doing progresses.

-You learn from your mistakes.-

Do notice that I am not drawing 'realistic' manga style, more likely cartoon style.

And please, do notice again. I am almost never practice details, only poses, camera angles/views and as well anatomy.

I should probably upload more poses drawings in the future.

Please, do tell me all anatomy errors you guys/girls can find. So I can actually see it as well and learn from that mistake!



-Back to practice.-

 

[asparticus]

head is too big. ears are supposed to line up with top of the eyes and bottom of the nose. use this as a referance

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remember, even for a cartoon style, a common man is generally 8 heads tall.

-before you start working on a specific style, my friend told me that to first start working on anatomy. after you mastered anatomy u can ..change up the anatamy that looks like cartoonish style yet still looks like you know anatomy. so just work on your anatomy

-do u use guidelines? if yes, keep doing that. if not, use them as they will help you alot. when u use stick figures to draw, u know how exactly ur pose is going to look like. it's really hard to draw a pose starting from the head and then working your way down. without using ur guidelines in drawing is like not having a map for a car drive


hope this helps ~

 

[Hoshi]

^ completely important ^^

And we'll done... Nice pose ^^

 

[Nakamazi Itchigo]

More and more practice bro, go hard and own it

 

[Ventalus]

head is too big. ears are supposed to line up with top of the eyes and bottom of the nose. use this as a referance

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remember, even for a cartoon style, a common man is generally 8 heads tall.

-before you start working on a specific style, my friend told me that to first start working on anatomy. after you mastered anatomy u can ..change up the anatamy that looks like cartoonish style yet still looks like you know anatomy. so just work on your anatomy

-do u use guidelines? if yes, keep doing that. if not, use them as they will help you alot. when u use stick figures to draw, u know how exactly ur pose is going to look like. it's really hard to draw a pose starting from the head and then working your way down. without using ur guidelines in drawing is like not having a map for a car drive


hope this helps ~

Guidelines is something that I defiantly use. There is no way that I go straight into a drawing just like that.
I should retry and see if I can do better.

 

[- Їиfєяио -]

looks good -- head could hav been smaller

head is too big. ears are supposed to line up with top of the eyes and bottom of the nose. use this as a referance

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remember, even for a cartoon style, a common man is generally 8 heads tall.

-before you start working on a specific style, my friend told me that to first start working on anatomy. after you mastered anatomy u can ..change up the anatamy that looks like cartoonish style yet still looks like you know anatomy. so just work on your anatomy

-do u use guidelines? if yes, keep doing that. if not, use them as they will help you alot. when u use stick figures to draw, u know how exactly ur pose is going to look like. it's really hard to draw a pose starting from the head and then working your way down. without using ur guidelines in drawing is like not having a map for a car drive


hope this helps ~

^^ totally agree ^^​

 

[Ventalus]

All right noticed my anatomy error in this drawing. I forgot the head under the navel. Other words Torso is about 1 - 2 head tall.

And I believe it should be 3 then. Should probably edit and post another pose with hopefully correct anatomy so you guys can tell me if I did it better or perhaps even worse.

 

[Hoshi]

All right noticed my anatomy error in this drawing. I forgot the head under the navel. Other words Torso is about 1 - 2 head tall.

And I believe it should be 3 then. Should probably edit and post another pose with hopefully correct anatomy so you guys can tell me if I did it better or perhaps even worse.

Yes you do that buddy ^^
Tho it is really hard to see the errors you have in this piece, so aside all that.... It's a great one.

 

[hokage0kitt]

One thing that I noticed is the arms. Elbows usually reach down to right around the top of your hip bones.

Also, the head is too large, which makes the neck look awkward.

The head at this sizing looks a little better:

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Hope I helped <3. Good job and keep at it !

 

[Uzumaki Kato]

the head is to big try atleast make the head smaller or make the body bigger btw nice work

 

[Ventalus]

I know people that head is quite big, it's because like I said that I forgot to add the last 'head' on torso, the torso is only 1½ - 2 heads tall and a torso is supposed to be 3 head tall, I forgot to make an extra head tall under the navel, that's why the drawing is messing with everyone's mind.

I will try to make another drawing and hopefully I won't forget that thing that I just did. But still you learn from your mistakes and everyone can do these simple errors without noticing it.

But anyway thanks for the feedback guys & girls <3

 

[Excālibur1]

Good Drawing...

 

[Zorø]

Wow great work man keep it up