[Gimp] Signature

[Pavoneo]

Made a bad signature.
Some of the more experienced GFXers here pleaseeee tell me what I did wrong, I really need to improve on C4D signatures :\
Usually I wouldn't post something this bad but I need some tips or something >.<

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[Viole]

you made it monotone
and u kinda overdid it with the blur
the composition is fairly good but the render is placed a bit too much on the left...
you can also flip and turn a render around man, find a place where it feels right, that''s a rather small but a wery important part
the flow is good but that's about it...small yet important stuff

 

[Pavoneo]

you made it monotone
and u kinda overdid it with the blur
the composition is fairly good but the render is placed a bit too much on the left...
you can also flip and turn a render around man, find a place where it feels right, that''s a rather small but a wery important part
the flow is good but that's about it...small yet important stuff

Yeah, I tend to throw away my fundamentals while making C4D signatures and I'm not too sure as to why. I don't really think the blur was too overdone, but it was a bit. I was just worried about taking away from the focal with the C4Ds (which is why I suck at these sigs..). I like the render where it is and felt that it went well where I put it, but I'm not that good at this so I'll take your word for it :\. Thanks for the CnC, this sig was pretty bad.

 

[suki]

It's not bad actually, in general the blur kinda takes away the attraction from the render..
Anyway; the positives;
I love the colors used and how you positioned the render, the flow and brightness are very nice together in this signature significantly.. All these positivity makes it uniquely flawless; you know this kept me thinking if I actually wanted to use it or not :3
The rest, nothing wrong; but thats just my taste ~_~