[Gimp] Signature, Need some CnC

[Pavoneo]

Yay, Pavoneo made another Signature^^.

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I know there's probably a lot of things I did wrong, so I'm hoping you guys can point them out^^. aka CnC por favor.​

 

[Gèckö]

i like text
who is that btw

 

[Pavoneo]

i like text
who is that btw

He's Iron Fist. A superhero created by Marvel.

 

[Cascade]

It looks good to me but: heres my CnC

The render looks a little bit low quality - like ur blending as made the render lose its sharpened qualities

The lighting is sorta wierd - but after taking a second glance i got where it was coming from

The text needs work - try different fonts and placement - put it near the focal...
speaking of which where is it? the character is looking down, with his legs split - and the light is to the rght but where are we focusing?

The colours are nice and have a variaty so thats really good its also got a semi vintage feel to it which i like
theres also some really nice depth (atleast from what i can see) good use of blurr
a really good sig, hope i wasnt too harsh with my cnc haha

 

[Pavoneo]

It looks good to me but: heres my CnC

The render looks a little bit low quality - like ur blending as made the render lose its sharpened qualities

The lighting is sorta wierd - but after taking a second glance i got where it was coming from

The text needs work - try different fonts and placement - put it near the focal...
speaking of which where is it? the character is looking down, with his legs split - and the light is to the rght but where are we focusing?

The colours are nice and have a variaty so thats really good its also got a semi vintage feel to it which i like

a really good sig, hope i wasnt too harsh with my cnc haha

Pssh, no CnC is too harsh xD. I'd rather the truth rather than lies to make me feel good about myself.

Well, I tried to make the focal point his face, apparently I failed on that though :3. I'm not good too with focals yet >.< although I did try. I slightly blurred everything but his face.. Hoped that would help ._.

And yeah. Text isn't my forte so I'll work on that as well :3. Thanks for the CnC.

 

[~MC117~]

They look very good