shoijo (created charactor)

[Uzumaki Kato]

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I know this drawing is similar to the last one i posted but the reason i didnt like it because it didnt look like authentic manga at all it looked more like a american comic style so i decided to make the same character but with manga style and i made my own style what you guys think about my style?

 

[Ventalus]

More life into hair and more shading would have been awesome but I like the idea of character ^^

Good job

 

[Uzumaki Kato]

More life into hair and more shading would have been awesome but I like the idea of character ^^

Good job

im not capable of adding more details in the hair :eww:

 

[BazzBee]

Meh, Not bad but his hair looks terrible, as if he is an Cartoon character and his eyes need some more shading and shaping, Could be improved but overall Not bad.

 

[Ventalus]

im not capable of adding more details in the hair :eww:

skills/knowledge comes with time ^^


Time > everything

 

[Uzumaki Kato]

Meh, Not bad but his hair looks terrible, as if he is an Cartoon character and his eyes need some more shading and shaping, Could be improved but overall Not bad.

Judging by your post you seem really like a good artist i would like to see your work one day
and as for the eyes i want to keep this style simple not super details.

 

[Nakamazi Itchigo]

I love the line-work in his clothes, the ear needs to be defined more and so does the hair, but looks good, keep practicing

 

[Zorø]

really good man i like it