Shocking asses
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I meant to link me to the thread you and Nagato trained in, but I guess it's cool
Hey Pradatta, I will be the one conducting your training from now on. I would like you to include at least one advantage and disadvantage in every Jutsu description that you make in order to further your learning that you learning. Note that being lazy on this part will get you a huge explanation instead of a reply saying whether you did good or not. Besides that I would also like you guys to be fairly descriptive when you are explaining what you are doing and not say that you actually preformed the Jutsu or Include and ending such as "And your clone goes poof" or "And then I preform the Jutsu". Stuff such as that will not be accepted.
Since you already did the lightning talk and what not with nagato I won't require it again, since we WERE supposed to be in the same thread xd
Any questions?
Good 
Anyway I am going to post two Jutsu for you to make into a combo for a Christmas present =DD
(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
What I want you to do is Gather a large amount of your raiton chakra and then expel it so that it is all around. Then once you have done that I want you the vibrate your raiton chakra rapidly and shape it into an electric field around you (The vibrations will create the electricity if you don't know how to create the electricity manually yet.) This will send my clone flying backwards. While he is flying backwards I want you to gather ration chakra above your palm. This will be achieved by constantly sending your raiton chakra towards the location above your hand. After you can see the raiton chakra then you will shape it into the sphere using chakra manipulation and send it flying towards my clones direction, making sure to keep a constant flow of raiton chakra going into the ball to stop it from disappearing.
Anyway I am going to post two Jutsu for you to make into a combo for a Christmas present =DD
(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: By gathering chakra in their hands, the user can create a ball of electrical energy and launch it at the enemy.
(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.
What I want you to do is Gather a large amount of your raiton chakra and then expel it so that it is all around. Then once you have done that I want you the vibrate your raiton chakra rapidly and shape it into an electric field around you (The vibrations will create the electricity if you don't know how to create the electricity manually yet.) This will send my clone flying backwards. While he is flying backwards I want you to gather ration chakra above your palm. This will be achieved by constantly sending your raiton chakra towards the location above your hand. After you can see the raiton chakra then you will shape it into the sphere using chakra manipulation and send it flying towards my clones direction, making sure to keep a constant flow of raiton chakra going into the ball to stop it from disappearing.
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I focus on my chakra core and then channel chakra to all parts of my body while simultaneously increasing the rate of chakra flow, or vibrating the raw chakra surrounding my body to manipulate it into a feild of lightning made from my chakra. I continiously channel my chakra outwards while the same chakra gets vibrated and manipulated to form an electric feild around me, that blows your clone back in contact.
Then, with the same momentum, I channel my raiton chakra to my hands where I focus on my chakra to change its shape in the form of a sphere while my inner chakra vibrates and gets focused+released at the palm high above my hand.Then upon releasing contact, i still channel my chakra into it through the electrical charges while the ball goes to shock your clone.
The gift is awesome
I focus on my chakra core and then channel chakra to all parts of my body while simultaneously increasing the rate of chakra flow, or vibrating the raw chakra surrounding my body to manipulate it into a feild of lightning made from my chakra. I continiously channel my chakra outwards while the same chakra gets vibrated and manipulated to form an electric feild around me, that blows your clone back in contact.
Then, with the same momentum, I channel my raiton chakra to my hands where I focus on my chakra to change its shape in the form of a sphere while my inner chakra vibrates and gets focused+released at the palm high above my hand.Then upon releasing contact, i still channel my chakra into it through the electrical charges while the ball goes to shock your clone.
The gift is awesome
Good job and Happy New Year ^_^
Next Jutsu:
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
What you are going to do is send your raiton chakra into the air and keep channeling your chakra into one area. Then you are going to rapidly move the raiton chakra towards my clone while vibrating it rapidly, causing it to turn into lightning and kill my clone.
*Creates a clone*
Next Jutsu:
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user sends an electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location.
What you are going to do is send your raiton chakra into the air and keep channeling your chakra into one area. Then you are going to rapidly move the raiton chakra towards my clone while vibrating it rapidly, causing it to turn into lightning and kill my clone.
*Creates a clone*
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I gather some chakra in my body and then release it outwards with my chakra pores so that my raiton chakra get mixes up with the atmosphere while I constantly continue the process till my chakra reaches the level of the sky and then with my chakra manipulation, I vibrate the chakra firmly to create lightning currents till it reaches a large scale while my nature manipulation allows to change the same chakra into larger lightning bolts that I direct towards your clone.
PS: Can you give me two techs to perform at once? I will describe them at once ^_^
PS: Can you give me two techs to perform at once? I will describe them at once ^_^
Well done, and I don't really like training that way, It's more of a rushing then a learning way of teaching
We will continue on to the next Jutsu as soon as you give me the weaknesses and advantages of every Jutsu that I have taught you
Note this was in my original post, you probably just looked over it o.o
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(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Advantage: Very easy and quick to use. Very good start for a combo
Disadvantage: Weak against other techs and very non-creative attack
(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Advantage: Fast and effective. Most close-range techs are blocked
Disadvantage: Strong Attacks kick ass. this jutsu is useless against Futon, suiton, katon
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Advantage: Superb made tech and very useful.Attacking is great.
Disadvantage: May not be always useful since it takes some time for it to take place
Advantage: Very easy and quick to use. Very good start for a combo
Disadvantage: Weak against other techs and very non-creative attack
(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Advantage: Fast and effective. Most close-range techs are blocked
Disadvantage: Strong Attacks kick ass. this jutsu is useless against Futon, suiton, katon
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Advantage: Superb made tech and very useful.Attacking is great.
Disadvantage: May not be always useful since it takes some time for it to take place
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(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Advantage: Very easy and quick to use. Very good start for a combo
Disadvantage: Weak against other techs and very non-creative attack
(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Advantage: Fast and effective. Most close-range techs are blocked
Disadvantage: Weak against other nature
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Advantage: Superb made tech and very useful.Attacking is great.unpredictable
Disadvantage: May not be always useful since it takes some time for it to take place
Advantage: Very easy and quick to use. Very good start for a combo
Disadvantage: Weak against other techs and very non-creative attack
(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Advantage: Fast and effective. Most close-range techs are blocked
Disadvantage: Weak against other nature
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Advantage: Superb made tech and very useful.Attacking is great.unpredictable
Disadvantage: May not be always useful since it takes some time for it to take place
(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Advantage: Passable
Disadvantage: All opinion
(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Advantage: Horrible
Disadvantage: Horrible
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Advantage: All Opinion
Disadvantage: Passable
Redo everything that is all opinion or horrible xd
Really? :|
Copying and pasting your former post is supposed to get you where?
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(Raiton: Raikyu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Ball
Disadvantage: After some research, I found that this technique is small in size and power. It can only be used to shock a single target and it is also non-productive since small Fire or Wind techniques easily block it
(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Advantage: As mentioned earlier it can be used swiftly. It is a good defence against taijutsu and earth techniques in which there is larger probablity of getting hit by a earth peice
Disadvantage: Can only be used once U_U This technique is useless against Katon,or Fuuton (of course) and .... idk
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Advantage: When this technique is started, most non-sensor users have no idea about the attack (,', it is unpredictable) It strikes from the sky and cannot be easily noticed easily since lightning travels fast to the ground and the opponent has to focus on the attack more specifically while we can take the advantage(,', it is good in attack)
Disadvantage: After some research, I found that this technique is small in size and power. It can only be used to shock a single target and it is also non-productive since small Fire or Wind techniques easily block it
(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Advantage: As mentioned earlier it can be used swiftly. It is a good defence against taijutsu and earth techniques in which there is larger probablity of getting hit by a earth peice
Disadvantage: Can only be used once U_U This technique is useless against Katon,or Fuuton (of course) and .... idk
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang
Advantage: When this technique is started, most non-sensor users have no idea about the attack (,', it is unpredictable) It strikes from the sky and cannot be easily noticed easily since lightning travels fast to the ground and the opponent has to focus on the attack more specifically while we can take the advantage(,', it is good in attack)
Well done
On to the next Jutsu
(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
What you are going to do is Preform the handseal I am going to show you in a minute and then erect 4 giant pillars around my clone. Then you are going to channel your raiton chakra through them and, at one moment, make the raiton chakra meet up and shock my clone, restraining him and causing him damage
On to the next Jutsu
(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs a single hand seal the user summons Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs a single hand seal the user summons Four Giant Pillars surrounding the enemy target and then the user shoots out bolts of lightning, binding the target in place and possibly doing damage to them.
What you are going to do is Preform the handseal I am going to show you in a minute and then erect 4 giant pillars around my clone. Then you are going to channel your raiton chakra through them and, at one moment, make the raiton chakra meet up and shock my clone, restraining him and causing him damage
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I perform the single handseal and then channel my raiton chakra to the ground and circle your clone so that I summon a huge circle of pillars around your clone that has my chakra in it and then with my chakra control, I allow the pillars to conduct electricity and then using nature manipulation, my chakra vibrates and then causes electricity to form around the pillars as I generate electricity in all of them and the use my chakra control again, to join the static bolts of lightning together and then form a chamber of electricity that catches your clone or leaves it trapped.
Advantage: It is one of the best supplementary attacks since it traps the opponent and makes them numb so that the counter will be slow and enough damage will inflected. though it is not an attack type itself, It can be used to trap an opponent when used with an earth technique to swallow the opponent and an drop lid technique to make a beautiful combo
Disadvantage: To peform this attack, however a handseal is required and the opponent can predict the attack while it takes long enough time for the pillars to rize and shock the clone, while the opponent will destroy the pillars or go underground
Advantage: It is one of the best supplementary attacks since it traps the opponent and makes them numb so that the counter will be slow and enough damage will inflected. though it is not an attack type itself, It can be used to trap an opponent when used with an earth technique to swallow the opponent and an drop lid technique to make a beautiful combo
Disadvantage: To peform this attack, however a handseal is required and the opponent can predict the attack while it takes long enough time for the pillars to rize and shock the clone, while the opponent will destroy the pillars or go underground
You did good, on to the next jutsu >~>
(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
This technique is extremely easy, first preform a suiton Jutsu and then send a wave of electricity to shock the water, increasing it's power
(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 25
Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 25
Damage point: 30 (normally) 50 (when used in conjunction with water technique)
Description: After using a Water Style technique, the user releases a wave of electricity that can electrocute any water within range, electrocuting and knocking back an opponent in contact with the water. When used without a water technique, its power is moderate. The technique can be used extremely quickly, so that it finishes almost in conjunction with the previous jutsu.
This technique is extremely easy, first preform a suiton Jutsu and then send a wave of electricity to shock the water, increasing it's power
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(Mizu Kamikiri) - Rising Water Cutter
A wave of water is erupted from the ground as I channel my raiton chakra in it and then vibrate the molecules to simply form electricity that has natural conjuction with the water and then increase my chakra flow to increase the size of the lightning power as the water wave with lightining travells to your clone
A: As mentioned, very swift while conjuction with water tchnique.Both the technique complete almost at once O.O This technique is also good to escape long range as this jutsu electocouts anyone in range
D: Weak when used singularly. Similarly, very weak against wind techs since the wind can blow the entire water. weak because most of the power and range depends upon the water source and if the water is counterd, then the lightning becomes preety useles
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user slams his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user slams his foot to the ground, causing water to rise up and travel towards his target as a slicing jet.
A: As mentioned, very swift while conjuction with water tchnique.Both the technique complete almost at once O.O This technique is also good to escape long range as this jutsu electocouts anyone in range
D: Weak when used singularly. Similarly, very weak against wind techs since the wind can blow the entire water. weak because most of the power and range depends upon the water source and if the water is counterd, then the lightning becomes preety useles
You did very good, Nice Descriptions by the way
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Your going to start of begin bringing your hands together and then sending your ration chakra towards them until you can see that lightning is starting to crackle around them. Then you are going to slam your hands on the ground and disperse the raiton chakra outwards in the form of lightning, having it race along the earth towards the side of my clone. As soon as it passes the side of my clone I want you to extend multiple tendrils from the side of the lightning currents and shock my clone to death.
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.
Your going to start of begin bringing your hands together and then sending your ration chakra towards them until you can see that lightning is starting to crackle around them. Then you are going to slam your hands on the ground and disperse the raiton chakra outwards in the form of lightning, having it race along the earth towards the side of my clone. As soon as it passes the side of my clone I want you to extend multiple tendrils from the side of the lightning currents and shock my clone to death.