Sho, the Silence.

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Basic Information

Name: Sho
Nickname: Silence, The hunter.
Gender: Male.
Age: 17
Clan: N/A

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Personality: Sho has always been extremely carefree. despite being an orphan he has always made friends easily and excelled at Kumogakures ninja academy. He was always the top of his class because of how well he could use stealth jutsu. He's almost always cheerful, except when the topic turns to 1 direction, though that's a different story.

Village Info

Village of Birth: Kumogakure
Village of Alliance: Sunagakure

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Chuunin
Specialty: N/A
Elements:
fuuton-needs training
Your ninjutsu:
Basic E-rank.




Background Info

History: Sho grew up as an orphan in kumogakure. When he was 11 years old he was adopted by a man named Darui who trained him up to chuunin level. He excelled at missions, but soon his good streak took a dark turn. Sho got a job offer he just couldn't resist. Assassin for hire. He became famous throughout Kumo as "Sho the Silent" because they say his victims never heard a sound. soon, he donned the cloak of darkness, his signature wear. his assassination skills were unmatched, and his swordsman ship was exquisite. they say he can assassinate someone in a room, next to you, but you'll never even know. Sho refuses to carry anything but senbon as the clanking of metal can give away his position. When Sho turned 17, he took assassinations to far. he left his village and began to massacre small towns in other villages just to gain fame. when it comes to kill people he is merciless. " it was just before dawn, i was taking a midnight stroll. I saw a strange boy I didn't recognize. he wore a smirk, and gave off a playful attitude. as he got closer, something about him felt strange. then i realized, we were walking on a road covered in fallen autumn leaves. while my steps made loud crunches, his bare feet made not the slightest sound. Soon he was about a foot away from me, every bone in my body screamed for me to run, but the fear seemed to paralyze me. I saw a flicker of movement, and watched all the playfulness leave his eyes. his smirk disappeared, replaced by a look of emotionless calm. i managed to look at my chest to find about 15 large medical needles sticking out. He missed my vitals by millimeters, but i was in a coma for 3 months. I woke up to find the rest of my town dead." - Gatori Minamino, village elder.

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Theme Song and Background Music:
[video=youtube;l7iVsdRbhnc]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=l7iVsdRbhnc[/video]
Battles

Won: Infinity[SUP]2[/SUP]
Lost:UNDEFEATED

made it quite simple, tell me if you like it:). ps I'm dropping Phantom.
 
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CleverMonkey

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I don't think you can have any specialities yet, since you have no training in anything.

IMO the background story could've been longer and more detailed, but that's not something that you have to do ^^
Other than that, it was pretty decent :)
 

0TailBijuu

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I don't think you can have any specialities yet, since you have no training in anything.

IMO the background story could've been longer and more detailed, but that's not something that you have to do ^^
Other than that, it was pretty decent :)
no, you can have a specialty. also i didn't feel like making a long back story since my recently approved bio hawk had quite an extensive one.
 

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Stealth is not a specialty and you can't have kenjutsu either because you don't have the proper training to have it.

Other than that nice Bio.
 

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That background music is ridiculous sounds like it's from china illnou(mispelled). and nice bio.
 

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Remove speclities, stealth isnt even a thing in this Rp and Kenjutsu requires it to be mastered.

Your history, add more too it and remove defeating Caliburn, unless it accually happened in the NW(which it did not) then its not a real history, adding rpers into your history requires some form of contact with them. So i'd remove that as well.
 

Kisaragi

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Nice bio man.
 

Lyanna Stark

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edit a few things. the history for one.You cant and couldnt have defeated cali.Stealth is not a speciality.You cant have that their.add it into others as a little i dunno thingy saying he is very silent as such makes reduced noise when running.Make sure it ties in with history.Update history so its longer and what delta said.As it is now cali wont be approving this probably.Nicely done but for a 2nd bio cali wont accept it.He is lenient with peoples first bio after that he isnt.
 

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Apparently eyebrows float now o.o
 
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