[Approved] Shisui Uchiha うちはシスイ[revisited]

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SHISUI OF THE BODY FLICKER
Basic Info:
Name: Shisui
Nickname: " Shisui The Body Flicker "
Gender:male
Age:17-21

Clan:
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Looks:
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Appearance
Bearing stark resemblance to his father, Shisui also had short, unkempt, dark-coloured hair and a relatively broad nose and well-defined eyelashes, that were turned upwards at each end. In the anime however, these lines are broken instead of whole. He wore the standard attire of the Uchiha clan which includes a high-collared, dark-coloured outfit along with a tantō strapped to the right side of the back of his shoulder. He also wore what appeared to be a harness for his tantō which ran across his chest and fastened over both his shoulders.


Personality​
Itachi was Shisui's best friend; in fact, Itachi thought of him as a brother. Shisui taught Itachi that "self-sacrifice… a nameless shinobi who protects peace from within its shadow…" was the true mark of a shinobi. Shisui was also very devoted to the clan, which is why the Konoha Military Police Force asked him to spy on Itachi. Although Shisui was devoted to his clan, he was even more devoted to the well being of his village, a trait he inherited from his father. His devotion to his village was so strong that he never fell victim to the Curse of Hatred when awakening his Sharingan or even his Mangekyō Sharingan. He even went as far as to attempt to put his clan under a genjutsu in order to stop their coup d'etat which would lead to civil war.​
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Village Info:

Village of birth:
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Konohagakure

Village of alliance:
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Konohagakure


Chakra Info:
Ninja Rank: Jounin
Specialty:
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Sharingan
Elements:
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(Need Training)


Your Ninjutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique*
Rank:E*
Type:Supplementary*
Range:Short*
Chakra Cost:5*
Damage Points:N/A*
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.*
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)*
















(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique*
















Rank:E*
Type:Supplementary*
Range:Short*
Chakra Cost:5*
Damage Points:N/A*
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.*
















(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique*
















Rank:E*
Type:Supplementary*
Range:Short*
Chakra:5*
Damage Points:N/A*
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.*
















(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder*
















Rank:E*
Type:Supplementary*
Range:Short*
Chakra Cost:N/A*
Damage Points:N/A*
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.*
















(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique*
















Rank:E*
Type:Supplementary*
Range:Short*
Chakra Cost:5*
Damage Points:N/A*
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.*
















(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill*
















Rank:E*
Type:Supplementary*
Range:Short*
Chakra Cost:5*
Damage Points:N/A*
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).*
















(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique*
















Rank:E*
Type:Supplementary*
Range:Short*
Chakra Cost:5*
Damage Points:N/A*
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)*

Background:​
Born to Kagami Uchiha of the Uchiha clan, Shisui was noted to be one of the most talented members of the famed clan. At some point in the past, he fought with Ao of Kirigakure who retained an acute memory of Shisui's chakra colour, as well as the Uchiha's ability to control others with his Mangekyō Sharingan's ability.
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However, Itachi would later reveal the truth behind the incident to his brother, Sasuke: Shisui was perplexed that the clan would not deter from the coup d'etat that they were planning and Shisui was greatly concerned with the consequences that would follow their actions. He told Itachi that he had tried to use Kotoamatsukami to stop them but he failed.
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Shisui was best friends with Itachi Uchiha, who shortly after joining the ANBU began to act "oddly". Shisui was instructed by the Konoha Military Police Force to monitor Itachi because of this.

Shisui was noted to be one of the most talented members of the Uchiha clan. He had earned the nickname of "Shisui of the Body Flicker", possibly implying that he had great mastery of the Body Flicker Technique. He was also hailed as the most powerful genjutsu user of the clan. He wielded a tantō which he was presumably adept at using.


Sharingan
Like many members of his clan, Shisui was a wielder of the Sharingan. Alongside his friend Itachi, he was praised for superior skill and sheer power in its use.

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Theme Song:
[video=youtube;v2tygV0zDmQ]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v2tygV0zDmQ[/video]
Battles: Won: None Losses: None
[reposted because I now have the post count for this Bio]​

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Can't use a bio that's dead so don't put in the info about suicide. Also, unless you want to RP blind, don't mention how he lost his eyes to Danzo and Itachi respectively. I took those parts out. Obviously you'll need to learn flicker and the Sharingan skill, that's to be understood. Blah blah blah, have fun with this bio.
 
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You didn't need to repost this bio just because you finally got your post count up to 1,500. You could still use the one you posted a few days ago since it was never checked. Also, you need to take out MS and body flicker from your specialties. Only Senseis can have MS and body flicker isn't allowed in our RP anymore.
 

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You didn't need to repost this bio just because you finally got your post count up to 1,500. You could still use the one you posted a few days ago since it was never checked. Also, you need to take out MS and body flicker from your specialties. Only Senseis can have MS and body flicker isn't allowed in our RP anymore.
Dont criticize what you cant understand , miss. I asked should I repost this bio long before I actually did. And as far as the Mangekyo it clearly says not activated. I am not making anymore changes to this bio based on random post, I f i cant use Body Flicker, so be it, but im not going to subtract from the character because of it .It is a Shisui Bio after all.
 

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Dont criticize what you cant understand , miss. I asked should I repost this bio long before I actually did. And as far as the Mangekyo it clearly says not activated. I am not making anymore changes to this bio based on random post, I f i cant use Body Flicker, so be it, but im not going to subtract from the character because of it .It is a Shisui Bio after all.
I understand plenty, thank you very much. All I am trying to do is to help you out by telling you that you should remove the things that you aren't allowed to have out of your bio, so you bio can be approved, simple. Though it seems you don't want any help in getting it approved. Though I will still try and tell you and hope that maybe you will listen. You need to remove:

Mangekyou Sharingan (not activated)/ Body Flicker
Mangekyō Sharingan

Shisui was one of the few members in the clan's history that was able to awaken the Mangekyō Sharingan. It granted him access to powerful genjutsu techniques, the strongest of which was a unique genjutsu noted to be of the highest calibre, Kotoamatsukami. This technique allowed him to enter a person's mind and manipulate them by giving them false experiences, making it seem as if they were doing things on their own free will; the victim wouldn't even notice they were being manipulated. This ability was so unique and powerful, that even Obito wanted it for himself and was angry that Danzō managed to destroy the eye before he died. Kabuto was also extremely thrilled when he learned that the remaining eye was within Itachi's crow. Within the crow, however, this genjutsu could only be used once in a decade, unless given a way to augment the process, like Danzō, with the implementing of Hashirama Senju's cells, thereby drastically reducing the time required to only about once a day. Shisui's eyes were also seen as something of a treasure even within his own clan, as before his death he had to ensure that it looked like he had destroyed them before he had died, fearing it would end in conflict otherwise
And you need to remove the part about him dying and about how Kabuto failed in getting his DNA and stuff. If you keep that in your bio then you are basically saying your character is dead and you can't RP with a dead character.
 

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I understand plenty, thank you very much. All I am trying to do is to help you out by telling you that you should remove the things that you aren't allowed to have out of your bio, so you bio can be approved, simple. Though it seems you don't want any help in getting it approved. Though I will still try and tell you and hope that maybe you will listen. You need to remove: And you need to remove the part about him dying and about how Kabuto failed in getting his DNA and stuff. If you keep that in your bio then you are basically saying your character is dead and you can't RP with a dead character.
I may have gotten a bit defensive, but some people on here can bring that side out of you, I apologize. Now If I was to take out those things, the bio would be, not as interesting, i'm sure they can use their imaginations. But since there is so many freaking rules!!! Ugh!! I suppose I have no choice. But they should really think about chilling out with all of these restrictions, seriously.

that was beautiful I luv Shisui
Thank you *_* .
 

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If I am correct, you need to be a Sensei to have MS and being a Sensei means you have to become a Senpai first. Sensei requires battle test and I think MS requires a battle test as well. Even activating a 1 tomoe Sharingan has got its rules. These kind of things prevent people from going OP which is great

The bad thing is all CE, CFS and CS are gone
 
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