Shinigami of the leaf bio

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This bio is a remake of my previous bio

Name: Soul Gōsuto (pic is in avatar)

Nickname: shinigami of the leaf

Story: He is reserved and well-balanced, he has a mood disorder(he can't show emotions even if he wanted to), he has a callous personality, He is the successor of his older brother who previously was the best known user of kokoro no me. He is th sole member, the very last of the Gōsuto clan. He is also descended from the uchiha, senju, hyuga, and the kaguya clans. Whenever he uses fire style techniques, the fire always comes out green, except for amaterasu.

Clan kekkei genkai: kokoro no me(minds eye)
This kg is at 50% power when not using the 3 great dōjutsu, But when using the 3 great dōjutsu, it is at 100% full power. This kg allows u to be one with nature, however u can't use more than three chakra natures attuned, go to four, and you will end up in a coma for 2 to 3 years, go to five and u will most certainly die. There's also one more additional ability, It will also awaken your subconscious & merge it with your conscious making your body & soul even more enhanced, when u use it this kg resonates with ur heartbeat

Fav weapon of choice: 4ft. Long katana, wind style chakra blade scythe

Fav attire(clothing): Grim reaper robes

Clans: last of uchiha, last of senju, last of kaguya, member of hyuga, last of the Gōsuto clan(y clan)

List of kekkei genkai & kekkei tōta: kokoro no me, Eternal mangekyō sharingan, Byakugan, Rinnegan, hell release(fire & wind), blaze release, plasma release(lightning & earth), Shikotsumyaku

Summonings: fire(In this order, bird>snake>tiger>dragon>special seal{it's like snake but with your thumbs touching, and fingers straight out}), ancient wyrm god(snake>tiger>dragon)

List of jutsu: Forbidden tech: thousand drasinnegan barrage, Hell release: hell storm, Plasma release: thunder coffin, driving force(similar to rasengan, but way different, basically just gathering chakra and firing it like a beam, power depends on how hard u make it, like konan hardens her paper stars to increase cutting power), Fire style: Phoenix amaryllis(defense based tech like shinra tensei, can be enhanced with Amaterasu, basically a stream of fire that morph into petals made of fire, Phoenix amaryllis is also the name of a flower), Susano'o, Amaterasu, tsukuyomi, Fire style: great majestic stream(basically a thin stream of fire tht follows the target), Rasengan cannon(basically Shooting rasengans like a cannonball), fire style: meteor fireball

Stats::

Attack: enough to destroy a mountain
Speed: Fast enough to surpass both light and sound creating a trail of fire, and a loud bang in its wake(flames for light, bang for sound)
Reaction speed: Quick enough to dodge almost any attack
Chakra reserves: rivals that of kurama's(9-tails)
Chakra natures: main chakra nature is fire, All others but wind I can use(wind scythe makes up for wind style)

Tai jutsu: not too bad
Genjutsu: surpasses itachi's genjutsu
Ninjutsu: great mastery, knows a little more than kakashi does
Rank: way higher than s-rank
Reputation: legendary beyond legendary
Endurance: Very high, more long lasting than a diamond




Please approve this, scorps

I remade this bio for becoming a sensei, at that's what tsuchi told me

The bolden parts are stuff that at my level, I currently can't use due to stickies, rules, etc

If there's anything u noticed that I wouldn't be able to use currently, please tell me, and I will edit it when I get to it
 
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Mirai 🥉

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This makes no sense.You didnt even follow bio template.Its all juke that makes no sense
 

Migualon J.J.

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read the rules before making a bio

 

Mephistopheles

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What? I just made this so I can become a sensei and teach jutsu
This made my day, thank you xd

you can't have any of those KGs

read the freakin rules
Calm down, he is new.

Read the freakin bottom part
Idem ditto, calm down as well.

This is what you should do:
  • First, read the rules that Mig posted.
  • Then, follow the template.
  • Also, look at a couple of other bios to get an idea of what a good bio should look like.
  • "kokoro no me(minds eye)" is no kekkei genkai, and you need to be Official Sage to create a custom clan.
  • You can't be in all those clans, read the rules and restrictions for the ONE clan you want to join as well.
  • You don't have any summonings as of now. You can get these later (only two allowed), read the rules about this as well.
  • Same goes for jutsus, you have to learn them and can make custom jutsus later.
  • Delete everything that you can't use at the moment.
  • Put the first element you want to learn in it as well (being one of the basic 5)
  • With all due respect for Tsuchi, she is not an rp mod. She is right, you need a bio to become sensei, but you need a lot more. Next time, ask one of the rp mods for advice, or members who rp for that matter.

I hope this helped you, and if you have any more questions or so, don't be afraid to ask ^_^
Cheers.
 
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