[Action] Shaolin - [Fantasy story]

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Title: Legend of Shaolin: The Story of Pai-G


Prologue:

Many Centuries before China was unified in the Qin Dynasty, there was nothing but warring states, The 6 major states were:

Yin - Chu - Zhao, Qi, Tao, Jin


Within these Imperial states lay the quiet and peaceful Shaolin temples, were monks practiced their teachings and way of life, and passed these down to the next generation.


In one of the more, powerful states, Yin, was a shaolin temple high in the mountains. In this temple Bodhidharma, one of most elder shaolin monk resided and taught the Shaolin way of life to his desciples.

Out of the dozens, the most talented were

Huike [25],

Hui-guang[22]

and Seng-chou[19]


Seng despite being the youngest was the sharpest of the three, a very intelligent man and the most proficient in his Kung Fu skills

Huike was the eldest and most respected

Hui-Gang was the joker, the one who lifted his comrades in spirit, and was second to Seng in his skills.


Despite being so fearful and respectful of their master, they never actually witnessed him fight or train as he was always meditating, and only giving instructions to his desciples



The Emperor of the Yin state, Emperor Hua, was known as a Tyrant even among his people

He considered himself a deeply spiritual man, and often beckoned spiritual personalities to come and give him closure to his actions on an annual basis.


Bodhidharma as a well known as respected Monk, and his temple were of course invited, and despite his distaste for the current emperor he takes a group of disciples and students with him yearly.



The Emperor, even in the protection of his Throne room among spiritual men, with his thousands of guards outside, was a very wary man, and often had his 4 Bodyguards with him

These Bodyguards were known as: ''Four Fists of Hua''

Their names:


Li Bai

Fuu

Yui Fe

Huo

All whom were extremely talented martial artists with years of battle experiences.

These men were part of a heritage that would serve the Emperor of the Yin empire, and so would their sons following their demise.

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During one of the yearly visits to the Emperor, Seng-chou and Huike discovered a horrifying secret,

Hui-guang, was secretly seeing one of the Emperor's Spouses, who was mother to the Emperor's first born son

Worse still was that Hui and Mei, [her name], planned to elope back to the temple in secret as she was of his child.

This was a tragedy as Seng understood that if discovered they would lose their brother, and the King would certainly show no mercy to them also

Reluctantly they agreed to smuggle Mei in their entourage
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Upon completing the current visit, and successfully hiding her in their entourage , [while their master was unaware], the disciples were almost out of the Emperor's vast castle, until they were stopped by the 100 of the kings men


Bodhidharma perplexed by the aggressive nature of the stop, quries as to why they were stopped from leaving

& is shocked to learn of the secret hidden among his group when informed by the Soldiers, who informed that all the spouses were watched by hidden spies throughout the palace

Bodhidharma however pleads for their safety and assures they will disappear never to return,

The soldiers reject this and explain they will save their Emperor's honor by bringing back their head

Bodhidharma explains that as members of Shaolin they will not harm them
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A soldier from inside the large group, fires an arrow which hits one of the shaolin and kills him,

Reluctantly Bodhidharma instructs his pupils to defend themselved, and to not kill but to evade

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During the melee many of the Shaolin are killed, however the three main students, Mei and Bodhidharma manage to escape, however upon arriving at the temple they find destruction

The death of all the members of the temple, old and young and the ''Four Fists of Hua '' -[the kings bodyguards awaiting them], and 200 more guards



Bodhidharma becomes for the first time in decades infuriated, he asks why the King would go so far

Li Bai, the leader of the Four responds that, he did it to appease his soul, and to damn the Shaolin's



Bodhidharma calls his remaining desciples behind him, and lowers his robe to his waist, showing his aged muscled body.

He goes into [xu-bu] stance, and the air around him becomes dense


Everyone is taken aback by the power eminating from him


Li Bai screams at the Four and the soldiers to attack


The desciples stand alongside their master and begin to fight

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After a long battle, the dust settles


During the fight all the kings guards were killed, leaving Li Bai still standing, who begins to generate some sort of fighting power which cause the ground around him to crack


however..

Huike is killed


Hui also is beaten much to Mei's horror


Seng loses an arm and his stabbed in the leg



Bodhidharma distraught at losing his students, desciples, and temple

Does not wish to see Seng pass away also.

He thus activates his ''QI'' an acient technique used to take his body to a higher level to give seng and mei the chance of escape, at the cost of his own life


Seng refuses to leave his master, However Bodhidharma requests that he lives to carry on the spirit of their temple

Seng still declines in tears, however is too weak to do anything and passes out


After Seng passes out, Bodhidharma lifts him and places him on the horse alongside Mei, and instructs her to ride to another Kingdom to escape the Emperor's wrath.


Mei in tears rides off, she takes one look back at the fire engulfed battlefield, to see the back of the old Master, who is facing off against Li Bai



A climactic final battle between Bodhidharma and Li bai takes place

After an epic fight, the old Master proves successful



Bleeding profusely from wounds, he sits down into a meditating stance, mentions his hopes for Seng and dies in the stance
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Prologue To be continued.... what do you think

Pai-G is to be the main protagonist, and as you've guess it he will be the child Mei is carrying
 
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