[CJ] Serpent and Pantha
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I would have asked for that, but I don't now if I can use Kinjutsu, or if it's just aesthetic. So if it's just Aesthetic I'd ask for that, if it requires Kinjutsu training, I asked for Prone
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Then yeah, that is the one I primarily want.It's aesthetic. We actually had a discussion over skype with LoK about it
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Indeed, since the Kinjutsu rules have been updated, and this technique no longer falls in any of the 3 categories for a technique to require Kinjutsu training. you can learn it. I'd like you to analyse the technique and explain it to me, as well as ask any questions you may have. (at least 1) Then I will answer your question(s) and correct you analyses if needed. any further questions may then be asked and you will preform the technique. then your training will be complete ^^
(Kinjutsu Suiton: Itami Gisei) Forbidden Water Release: Sacrificial Pain.
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage points: 90
Description: Before or After making contact with an opponent the user will drawl water from there own body and form small thin yet dense spikes as thin as needles stick out throughout there body or designated area of the user. This will form a defensive lair of countless needles that can easily pierce into an opponent. When these needles stab into an opponent they take old keeping the opponent stuck in the connected area almost like glue, although this is causes by small barbs located at the ends of each spike. Upon the users will they can release the water outwards in a large blast that will blast back the opponent causing extreme crushing power and force sending them flying backwards. Because of the use of the users own water within his body this Jutsu causes extreme dehydration. This makes the user feel drained and dizzy as well as blurs his vision stunting his ability to see well. This will also cause the user to look slightly "aged" after use of this Jutsu.
Note:
-Can only be used one time per battle
-Dehydration last for two turns
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent
(Kinjutsu Suiton: Itami Gisei) Forbidden Water Release: Sacrificial Pain.
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage points: 90
Description: Before or After making contact with an opponent the user will drawl water from there own body and form small thin yet dense spikes as thin as needles stick out throughout there body or designated area of the user. This will form a defensive lair of countless needles that can easily pierce into an opponent. When these needles stab into an opponent they take old keeping the opponent stuck in the connected area almost like glue, although this is causes by small barbs located at the ends of each spike. Upon the users will they can release the water outwards in a large blast that will blast back the opponent causing extreme crushing power and force sending them flying backwards. Because of the use of the users own water within his body this Jutsu causes extreme dehydration. This makes the user feel drained and dizzy as well as blurs his vision stunting his ability to see well. This will also cause the user to look slightly "aged" after use of this Jutsu.
Note:
-Can only be used one time per battle
-Dehydration last for two turns
-This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent
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Okay, I can tell this is a really old technique due to all the spelling mistakes!
It's hard to decode everything, but here is my analysis, which basically serves as my question(s):
Sacrificial Pain is about drawing water from your own body and turn it into very thin needles that appear above your skin, either the whole body or a designated area of my body, like a limb. They are very thin, barbed needles, and once they're stuck they will keep the opponent locked in like glue, I'm guessing dealing quite some pain to the target. How long are these needles, and are they visible? I'm also assuming I can already be in direct contact with someone, and the needles will simple pierce as they materialize. I'm also guessing that they can be used through clothing, both mine and my target's. Could they pierce through boots, from my feet? Leather jackets? Anbu masks?
After I catch an opponent, I can immediately blast him off, creating what I assume is shockwave of water, composed of multiple barbed needles, which will come so suddenly and so strongly that it has a very tangible crushing force, as they send my target flying backwards. The idea of barbed needles inside my opponent's skin is so unique that it makes me think this could be added upon, imagine needles of crystallized or normal water inside my opponent, locking joints and pinning nerves, preventing movement as collateral damage. But I'm guessing this technique wouldn't be approved if ressubmitted, so it's not like we can add that. I may try my own version, with your consent.
But it does beg the question, what exactly happens to my target after this technique hits him/her?
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Totally forgot about this.
The needles are hair thin and about 2 inches long. They cannot pierce something of greater density but can pierce most clothing and armor. They are F-ranked water in power so as long as its within reason. You can release the blast as soon as you are creating the technique if you want to. It's as you described, shock-wave in nature with piercing and blunt force. It's overall damage comes from this shock-wave, so the needles stabbing the opponent will cause pain, but the blast is what makes this technique so powerful. The shear blunt force of this technique should be enough to crush bone within reason, shred flesh, render an opponent unconscious or even bring death depending on how it's used. I believe that's all ^^
You can come up with your own version, just be sure it's not a straight rip lol.. and also teach it to me when it gets approved xD