September Rap Battle- Bring it!!!

Best Rapper in this thread


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NaruAwesome

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I'll catch you fast while you're alone
And carve your name on a tombstone.
For it is better to prepare
to slay the idiotic heir
of feigned wordcraft, a poor facade,
presenting forth a shit parade.
What feats have you since then amassed?
What fame, what escape from the past?
No change was made, no change at all.
Your dynasty was meant to fall.
This is not treason to the throne,
that honor which you claim to own,
but merely reason to believe
your glory, which I don't perceive,
was never real and fake at best.
You tried your luck, and I detest
your cavalier attitude,
so I propose this quick prelude:
Abandon optimism here;
accept realities you fear.

so i see you finally came*
lol, enough with the puns
i'm putting back in the oven
cause you're still not done
you got a nice flow
nb better watch out
this girl is good
sensational without a doubt
 

ITACHIUCHIA101

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stuck in the past....more like perfectly in sync
so let me give you a word of advice
never go against someone like cuz i'll kill you faster than you can blink
so try to think twice
cuz i pop yo girl's p*ssy till da shit turn pink
i'm cat and your less than mice
stick my d1ck in yo girls p*ssy.....now where in perfect link
if you respond back i won't be half as nice
and i almost killed yo girl the other day......she had more than she could drink
you keep talkn bout my girl, that's pretty generic
i asked you to get on my lvl but your'e not even near it
you can't see me but i'm right infront of ya
silent killing zabuza
this is for fun so calm dafuq down
you must be new here because this my fukin town
i'll even stop for a second, give you a breather
and the only girl you can get is justin beiber
 

NaruAwesome

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Anyone wanna go

wait a minute bro
didn't i just beat you
ya rap skills are so low that
that justen bieber can't even reach you( damn)
yep i said it
jb raps better than u
and that's an insult
sorry, i'm just explaining since you're 2
if you want me then come at
if u don't then back back
now sit down and shut up
as papa count his racks
 

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so i see you finally came*
lol, enough with the puns
i'm putting back in the oven
cause you're still not done
you got a nice flow
nb better watch out
this girl is good
sensational without a doubt

Yes, it's true that I've arrived
to slaughter dreams for which you've strived.
They'll melt in acid, thin and clear
becoming nothing worthy of revere.
Tell me if you wish to rhyme
I'm ready now; I have the time.
Careful though, if you insist,
Pen in hand, I'll raise a fist.
 

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Anyone wanna go
yeah but can you go first

I'll catch you fast while you're alone
And carve your name on a tombstone.
For it is better to prepare
to slay the idiotic heir
of feigned wordcraft, a poor facade,
presenting forth a shit parade.
What feats have you since then amassed?
What fame, what escape from the past?
No change was made, no change at all.
Your dynasty was meant to fall.
This is not treason to the throne,
that honor which you claim to own,
but merely reason to believe
your glory, which I don't perceive,
was never real and fake at best.
You tried your luck, and I detest
your cavalier attitude,
so I propose this quick prelude:
Abandon optimism here;
accept realities you fear.

ok, i kill b1ches fa fun.....and make it look easy
cuz you know when it comes to rhymes i'm flat out beastly
flows so cool.......call me lbreezy
i'm laid back smaoking a cigar
cuz yo lines gettin cheesy
nothing less than bizarre
and here's a couple pennies for the needy
 

Elementalist

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hell no bro
u just went at my name
nigga you crazy,
must be insane
the beast is loose
call me godzilla
u rape kids like mj
heard dat, thriller
ma girl call u papi
boy you're delusional
u say u got her naked
must got her confused, the usual
bro stop with the dreams
and nigga get real
are u a bitch and a man
ma girl, you'll never get a feel

Yeah your right I'm insane. But I'm also lyrically gifted
you don't understand my flow cuz son its just to encrypted
and the code is only known by those who have actual skill
This the mountain you cant climb, like Jack and Jill with the hill
so until you get real
I'll just continue to spill
my lyrics all over this thread cuz I do this for the thrill
You thinkin yourself slick comparing me to Micheal Jackson
but I'm the whole package you just barely a fraction
 

Punk Hazard

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does it seem like i'm trying
sorry if it did
i'm just taking it easy
killing ya'll bitches like twigs
i don't wanna go too hard
and i don't wanna let ya off easy
but ya raps are nonsense
what , are they suppose to tease me
yeah, i'll save ma ryhmes
while you get more from google
i got money in the bank
bitch i'm frugal
you don't know that word
too bad , look it up
while i take care of ya girl
damn, ma dik got stuck
I know you really tried
You just telling lies
Just like your sig
I already took the prize
You just a runner up
You soft like a butter cup
You got the same lines
And lame-ass puns
Sour like a lime
And aint no fun
Either talking about a girl or a mom
While im just dropping bombs
My best is still to come
You pulled out your maximum
Me, im just haxxin' 'em.
Lunging and attackin em
Youre just cowering
While im devouring
Snap us like twigs?
Bro, you fake as wigs
 

NaruAwesome

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Yes, it's true that I've arrived
to slaughter dreams for which you've strived.
They'll melt in acid, thin and clear
becoming nothing worthy of revere.
Tell me if you wish to rhyme
I'm ready now; I have the time.
Careful though, if you insist,
Pen in hand, I'll raise a fist.

pen in hand
so u must be praticing
girl, u should be typing
free styling, rapping
slaughtering dreams
well i murdered hope
i kill wishes
ma riches make u seem broke
so u raise a fist
you're right, black power
go ahead and say it
scream my name louder
 

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wait a minute bro
didn't i just beat you
ya rap skills are so low that
that justen bieber can't even reach you( damn)
yep i said it
jb raps better than u
and that's an insult
sorry, i'm just explaining since you're 2
if you want me then come at
if u don't then back back
now sit down and shut up
as papa count his racks

I was looking for someone else
Waiting for your reply
Thought my rap blew your mind and made you wanna cry
Ya hating on my style so lets jump on you
Ya raps are so bad
Makes me wanna be next for the noose
Ya last in this battle I should just call you Caboose
But me, I spit fire
I'm your neighborhood hero
Call me Toby Miguire
Next time you want to speak to Big Daddy
Ya better ask first
Next time you disrespect me ill leave ya in a hearse
 

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you keep talkn bout my girl, that's pretty generic
i asked you to get on my lvl but your'e not even near it
you can't see me but i'm right infront of ya
silent killing zabuza
this is for fun so calm dafuq down
you must be new here because this my fukin town
i'll even stop for a second, give you a breather
and the only girl you can get is justin beiber

the only thing i find generic is your stupidity
stop rapping
please don't insult humanity
take a breath?.....please, i'm something one would call immortality
i don't get tired, nor can i loose
and i'm only speaking the truth
and if you still think you can beat me your acting with irrationality
i'm on a whole nother level....a whole different nationality
 
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NaruAwesome

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Yeah your right I'm insane. But I'm also lyrically gifted
you don't understand my flow cuz son its just to encrypted
and the code is only known by those who have actual skill
This the mountain you cant climb, like Jack and Jill with the hill
so until you get real
I'll just continue to spill
my lyrics all over this thread cuz I do this for the thrill
You thinkin yourself slick comparing me to Micheal Jackson
but I'm the whole package you just barely a fraction

so you're using nursery ryhmes
what is this, pre-school
for those who battle me
i pity the fool
and let a fool pity themself
and let u acknowledge defeat
you sound like an old record
left on repeat
ma key board is on fire
cause how fast i'm typing
going on ya ass
but even then i'm skyping
go hard or go home
well i made my touchdown
this game goes to me
are u up for another round?
i know you're sweating
you're ready to give in
sign this decree bro
heres a pencil and a pen
 
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yeah but can you go first



ok, i kill b1ches fa fun.....and make it look easy
cuz you know when it comes to rhymes i'm flat out beastly
flows so cool.......call me lbreezy
i'm laid back smaoking a cigar
cuz yo lines gettin cheesy
nothing less than bizarre
and here's a couple pennies for the needy

I find it such a pity
how you think that you've been witty,
but you cannot even rhyme.
You lack spice; I'll grab the thyme...
You're worth nothing at the auction
with your laughable concoction.
You stand smiling by yourself
as an aloof, recluse elf;
You bring no good intention
and aren't worthy of a mention,
but I'll answer, nonetheless,
and dispose of this bland mess.
 

Ldude

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pen in hand
so u must be praticing
girl, u should be typing
free styling, rapping
slaughtering dreams
well i murdered hope
i kill wishes
ma riches make u seem broke
so u raise a fist
you're right, black power
go ahead and say it
scream my name louder

Your name is but a waste of breath
I'm saving till my time of death.
A pen, I said, a pen indeed,
comes running mightier than a steed.
You've fallen to the swampy mud;
I might as well write in your blood.
And when you meet the bog witch there,
look up and see how little care
the mortals up above contained
for those raps which have still remained.
 

NaruAwesome

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I was looking for someone else
Waiting for your reply
Thought my rap blew your mind and made you wanna cry
Ya hating on my style so lets jump on you
Ya raps are so bad
Makes me wanna be next for the noose
Ya last in this battle I should just call you Caboose
But me, I spit fire
I'm your neighborhood hero
Call me Toby Miguire
Next time you want to speak to Big Daddy
Ya better ask first
Next time you disrespect me ill leave ya in a hearse

go back to the locker room
take a shower or two
you rap like a bitch
you cry like you're two
go ahead and rap
i'm finna take a snooze
when you finished copy and pasting
i'll be out on ma cruise
by that time u should be done
i'll then read your post
you deserve an emmy
for copying the most
 

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so you're using nursery ryhmes
what is this, pre-school
for those who battle me
i pity the fool
and let a fool pity themself
i'm calling u out
no one else
ma key board is on fire
cause how fast i'm typing
going on ya ass
but even then i'm skyping
go hard or go home
well i made my touchdown
round goes to me
are u up for another round?
i know you're sweating
anout ready to give in
sign this decree
heres a pencil and a pen
lol you think you won? Homie you aint even close
Slaughtered you so bad already you're just becoming a ghost
killed you in my 1st post, second post, third post and more
only thing your really doing is becoming a bore
sayin nursery rhymes cuz I gotta talk down
to infants like yourself who can't stay afloat in the water so all you do is drown
and get lost in the maze that is known as my lyrics
the bell is already rung don't pretend like you aint hear it.
 

ITACHIUCHIA101

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the only thing i find generic is your stupidity
stop rapping
please don't insult humanity
take a breath?.....please, i'm something one would call immortality
i don't get tired, nor can i loose
and i'm only speaking the truth
and if you still think you can beat me your acting with irrationality
i'm on a whole nother level....a whole different nationality

heres a short one to start it off
so your'e a different nationality
don't expect some pity
i'm just playing with you, like i do with your girls titties
so your'e immortal?
that's good because i was about to murder you with these rhymes
but it ain't no crime when i'm king
i'm coming out fresh and it aint even spring
I only offered a break because I want this to last
you came out strong but your rhymes aren't really that fast
i'm new and i already owned you
your just a magikarp and i'm mew two
you can't loose?
btw i'm done with your girl she can't handle my D
i'm like a moose
 

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I find it such a pity
how you think that you've been witty,
but you cannot even rhyme.
You lack spice; I'll grab the thyme...
You're worth nothing at the auction
with your laughable concoction.
You stand smiling by yourself
as an aloof, recluse elf;
You bring no good intention
and aren't worthy of a mention,
but I'll answer, nonetheless,
and dispose of this bland mess.

my rhymes a make you tremble
your lines don't make a bit of sense
looks like your skills are still developmental
i hope you know that in order to rap at least a little bit of skill is essential
your shit at this game
and thats obviously evidential
you responded back so i'm like niga is you mental
i murder b1ches fa fun.....and i promise this isn't coincidental
 

NaruAwesome

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Your name is but a waste of breath
I'm saving till my time of death.
A pen, I said, a pen indeed,
comes running mightier than a steed.
You've fallen to the swampy mud;
I might as well write in your blood.
And when you meet the bog witch there,
look up and see how little care
the mortals up above contained
for those raps which have still remained.

the pen is mighter than the sword
but words speak louder than actions
i can't give u my all
so i'll just give you fractions
fractions of my best
bit and pieces of my ryhmes
go ahead and thinks of words
i'll give your ass some time
got u confused
my sayings speeding through your head
isn't pass 9:00
take your ass to bed
 
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