[Approved] Sensou Tenshi(1st bio)

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Basic Information
Name: Sensou Uzumaki

Gender: Male

Age: 16

Rank: Chuunin

Clan:Uzumaki

Symbol:
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Appearance:
He wears a white t-shirt underneath his robe, so not to show his chest out in public. He sometimes has a black cloak that he wears in colder weather. Sensou also has a sword draped on his side like how a samurai wears his sword.
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see me cool na?

Personality:
Sensou is a pretty good guy that tries to be friendly to everyone, but is also very serious as well. He will fight to the death, and will not hesitate to kill if you are his enemy. He is extremely curious, and that alone has proven to almost get him killed in many situations, but he always finds a way out of his predicaments.

Village Info

Village of Birth: Uzushiogakure
Village of Alliance: Kumogakure

Rank//Chakra Info:

Ninja Rank: chunnin
Specialty:A
Elements:
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Raiton(needs training)
My jutsu:
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Hand seals: Ram → Snake → Tiger
Description: A clone made of the user that can move but it cannot use any jutsu. This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element (Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Hand seals: Dog → Boar → Ram
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.


(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Hand seals: Ram → Boar → Ox → Dog → Snake
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background (Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong). Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu (Rank C and above)

Weapon:
Regular ninja weapons (ex: Smoke bombs, shuriken, kunai, paper bombs, etc.) And also carries a regular sized katana that is made of the special chakra metal. When imbued with Sensou's Chakra, the blade becomes sharper and stronger. Also, his boots and gloves do not conduct electricity, but still allow him to be able to perform his justus without any problems.

Background Info

History:
Sensou uzumaki is the younger brother of Jace uzumaki, the clan's leader. When Sensou was just four years old, there was an earthquake that practically destroyed the mountain that the uzumaki clan lived on. About half of the clan died in a major rock slide. His mother and father were a part of that half. Jace, who just became a Genin at the time, survived and had to raise Sensou on his own. Even though Jace and Sensou were on their own, the clan still helped them a lot. You could say that after the earthquake it brought the whole clan closer and made them more of a family.

Years later, Jace became head of the clan, and Sensou became a Genin. Soon after becoming a Gennin, Sensou went on a self-proclaimed mission. That mission was to learn the Summoning Technique, and to have a contract with the powerful birds that roamed the skies of Kumo. It took Sensou nearly a year to earn the trust of the birds, and to also be able to call upon the Phoenix. No one in the history of Kumo has ever been able to call upon her, except now.

Just recently Sensou became a Chuunin, and was elected to go to Konoha to participate in the King of Shinobi tournament. Traveling with him is his mentor and older brother Jace.
Clan:
The Uzumaki clan (うずまき一族, Uzumaki Ichizoku) was a prominent clan in Uzushiogakure. They were distant blood relatives of the Senju clan and as such, both were on good terms; an alliance that extended onto their hidden villages — Konohagakure and Uzushiogakure. The shinobi of Konoha integrated Uzushiogakure's symbol onto their uniforms and flak jackets as well as on the shoulders of their uniforms as a sign of friendship and goodwill between the two villages, and continue to do so to this day, in memory of their friendship even years after Uzushiogakure's destruction.Members of this clan were very knowledgeable in the art of fūinjutsu, and were both respected, and feared worldwide because of their prodigious skill.

Other
Theme Song and Background Music:
[video=youtube;Tsvmgr0liP4]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tsvmgr0liP4[/video]
Battles

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my first rp..hope u guyz like it!


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Use the glow again like that and I'll auto decline...enjoy the RP
 
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My eyes. @_@

Somethings you gotta fix: there's no Tenshi clan so remove that. You also have to fix your history as you mention that Tenshi clan. Remove the jutsus under 'My jutsus' as you haven't learned any of them.

Other than that good job.
 

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If its your first bio Remove EVERY element except two. And you need training in those two
You are not part of no tenshin clan. So take it out ... OF your WHOLE bio
You have no jutsus except standard E rank jutsus
U have no weapon nor summon

though if you made this clan up. Its pretty nice

You cant submit a clan till you have 10,000 post. And go on a sage mission.. Which takes 1year RL time .. >_>
 

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oh..i see so wat i have to do??should i submit a separate clan now?
Nah just edit the post. You don't have to be in clan if you don't want too. Just remove the Tenshin clan stuff, fix your history and remove those jutsus since you haven't learned them.
 

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thankz buddy.....y ..do u know any other method of joining amegakure apart from this bio method?
I believe you can join any village you want. You just have to send a request here:

Just select the village you're interested in and hope you get in, that's it.
 

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Congrats on getting into Amegakure. If you need any help please let me know and I'll help you out as much as I can. You can also ask EdwardSama and Penguin since they are in your village. I wish you a lot of luck and may the stars shine on you.
 
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Congrats on getting into Amegakure. If you need any help please let me know and I'll help you out as much as I can. You can also ask EdwardSama and Penguin since they are in your village. I wish you a lot of luck and may the stars shine on you.
thankz buddy for the info...i dont believe on those stars though..i believe on efforts=D
 
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