[Romance] Seism

[SIR HERDERP PRESIDERP SDO]

Actually what is left
Is a dim memory of my love for you.

You are near me
And still my hands know the depth
Of you, weigh with greater gravity
Than this silence...

Worry not. For they will not move
Like they used to.

Some are instruments
Of cracks unneeded
To feel tremors.

A Single tremor magnified
Can spell the greatest of rifts
Like now....

Near you....
I now fully understand

The principle of continental drifts
Eons ago, we were one island
That had forgotten its shape....​

 

[villain55]

That's pretty deep

 

[-immortal-]

Wow nice Sdo!

 

[Pumpkin Ninja]

That avatar was preventing me from reading the poem.

 

[King of Camelot]

Best poem I've read today.

 

[Pumpkin Ninja]

Best poem I've read today.

Roses are red

Violets are blue

I'm the best poet on NB.

 

[Venomous Cobra]

:lol at that dislike

OT: Nice poem man.

 

[Conspirator.]

A deep and beautiful poem. Well done.

 

[fiend]

Idea of comparing distant love to seismic drift was novel and brilliant and genius.
These lines were magnificent:-

You are near me
And still my hands know the depth
Of you, weigh with greater gravity
Than this silence...

Awesome poem <3

I have a question though why geiger counter?

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Sinking deep against one another right ? Good poem .