Seiiku - Memories

[Rin Hatake]

wow it was GREAT!!!
can't wait for the next chapy! ^-^

 

[Rei]

Very very very well done I am truly impressed ^^
keep it up ^^

 

[Emperor]

thanks Rei !

 

[Devlin]

Not bad for the first effort,just take the criticism as constructive and work on making the next one better than the first.All in all not a bad effort i would say spread the story out a bit more felt a bit rushed through the story if you know wot i mean don't take this in a bad way!

 

[Emperor]

Not bad for the first effort,just take the criticism as constructive and work on making the next one better than the first.All in all not a bad effort i would say spread the story out a bit more felt a bit rushed through the story if you know wot i mean don't take this in a bad way!

i wont ^^
thanks for your comment, ill work on that in the next chapter

 

[Renegade87]

nice fanfic

reps for you ma friend

 

[narutouchihakiller]

good job man..
i am always up for cool kyuubi action lol...

 

[LeafDude]

good

 

[Kakashi_sharingan]

ROCKS !
Good things come in small packages

 

[Ace]

Dfinately a great story!

 

[platinum69]

I really liked it...worshippyworshippy

sound like Naruto vs Madara... ???

 

[Emperor]

thanks all !

 

[Itachi15]

nice

 

[Emperor]

thx

 

[roflcopter]

Cool! !!

 

[PietroUchiha]

Oh my god, why is everyone so much better at writing fanfiction than me! =(

Nice job EOW ^_^

 

[KeotsuEclipse]

Pretty good.