The blond tossed and turned on his bed,his wounds raw, his dreams turning once more to the hellish events of the day. He could still hear the masked man's voice....
" Give it up, you pathetic ninja...You will never defeat me, who has the greatest gift of the Gods...." To prove it, the masked man closed and opened his eyes, revealing the most powerful weapon in Shinobi history....
" Never ! " spat the blonde..." I ..will...defeat you ! " And as if to prove his point the blonde threw a focused disc of wind chakra toward the man....who promptly disappeared and reappeared behind the blonde, ripping a kunai through his skin.....
The blonde screamed in pain but gritted his teeth and kept fighting....to no avail as his thoughts turned into a blur of agony and determination.... he was dripping blood from head to toe. As he finally got up again, he stared right into the mans eyes...and fell into a nightmare where his friends were killed right before him.. Minutes blurred into hours as he had to watch the deaths of his sensei, his best friend, his student, too many people to name.
Whether it was this or the pain is still unclear to him, but all he remembers is his skin turning red...six tails growing out his back and powerful blasts of orange energy clashing with black fire. As he let loose a powerful sphere toward his enemy, it was dodged...resulting in it hitting and killing a certain kunoichi of the village... a kunoichi who meant a lot to him..HE had killed her. He collapsed in mental agony and waited for the deathblow...only to see a raven blur appear before the masked man and a few seconds later the man bleeding from his face...no, his eyes....no, he had lost his eyes...and dying.
The next thing he remembered was being comforted by his friends, by his sensei who had survived the battle with a water nin.. He fell unconscious and woke up in a hospital.
He looked around for the two familiar healers in this hospital...only to find one had been killed by that same water nin and the other...the other...HE had killed....
NEXT : The Village Moves On
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" Give it up, you pathetic ninja...You will never defeat me, who has the greatest gift of the Gods...." To prove it, the masked man closed and opened his eyes, revealing the most powerful weapon in Shinobi history....
" Never ! " spat the blonde..." I ..will...defeat you ! " And as if to prove his point the blonde threw a focused disc of wind chakra toward the man....who promptly disappeared and reappeared behind the blonde, ripping a kunai through his skin.....
The blonde screamed in pain but gritted his teeth and kept fighting....to no avail as his thoughts turned into a blur of agony and determination.... he was dripping blood from head to toe. As he finally got up again, he stared right into the mans eyes...and fell into a nightmare where his friends were killed right before him.. Minutes blurred into hours as he had to watch the deaths of his sensei, his best friend, his student, too many people to name.
Whether it was this or the pain is still unclear to him, but all he remembers is his skin turning red...six tails growing out his back and powerful blasts of orange energy clashing with black fire. As he let loose a powerful sphere toward his enemy, it was dodged...resulting in it hitting and killing a certain kunoichi of the village... a kunoichi who meant a lot to him..HE had killed her. He collapsed in mental agony and waited for the deathblow...only to see a raven blur appear before the masked man and a few seconds later the man bleeding from his face...no, his eyes....no, he had lost his eyes...and dying.
The next thing he remembered was being comforted by his friends, by his sensei who had survived the battle with a water nin.. He fell unconscious and woke up in a hospital.
He looked around for the two familiar healers in this hospital...only to find one had been killed by that same water nin and the other...the other...HE had killed....
NEXT : The Village Moves On
How was it guys ? My first attempt at a good fanfic. It tuned out more serious than I thought it would, but oh well. 
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