[Other] Seeping Through The Plastic Wrap

King Volcano

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Should I do Rhymes, a Haiku, or nothing of it?
I don't know, I know my mind is just messed up
Darkness stay away, Don't you knowI've had enough?
Love is like a rose, Once it blooms everyone awes
Loneliness is like a virus, Once it appears everyone falls
What should I write?! Should I write a story?! A poem?!
I don't know, You tell me
I won't join, because I don't like thm

Permanent plagued stains of matters and conspiracies infiltrated the country
If they call us greedy pigs, Then why don't we have enough food for the hungry?
At night I can't go to sleep, The only time is when I'm cold and I weep!
Or again into a pool of decadence, holds my heart, where like a voodoo doll, it stabs it with a tranquilizing dart

They lit a match before they set up a fire
And threw it into my home
After I ate some of my own dieing flesh
I told them,"Please! Please! Leave Me Alone!"
Don't you dare do what you think...only do what you speak................The News lies.....
THE SOUL IS TRULY WEAK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!​









****I wrote this in 10th grade for a poetry contest, I made it sound like from something crazy that I do not remember because it was a while ago, haha, it sounds like a crazy poem, but I made one like that for fun haha...I guess I bmade most of it sound like hm...I really don't remember, oh well, haha****
 

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this is terrible, why would you even share it?
 

King Volcano

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Because I wanted too, why can't I? :p
My works are my own, and Idc what anyone thinks about them.
 

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I really hate your sig and that has nothing to do with this.
When I said I really don't care about what people think, I meant Idc if you have harsh criticism for me, because I like it.
I accept all criticism as a writer for anything that is thrown at me. I'm not dumb haha. So I'm not attention seeking Dafuq. I'm showing my works to the public and if anyone says something bad about me I'll accept it. Your reply to mine is really irrelevant you know that?
 
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