seeking love (.... im thinking this is sad but beautiful) it has 2 parts

[izinagi54]

music that inspired this

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seeking love part 1
by izinagi54 aka chris

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i will journey sea and shore
through hell and scorn
for i am born to seek a sacred thing

so pure and strong forever it will never be gone
not even death can match its power
but yet it's so fragile in a weaken state

however i will hold on to it and never let it go.
forever it shall be my search for it.
to take it for my own.

may i forever be torn and scorned.
should i ever let it go.
into a darker flow.

she loves me more
it leaves me so sore when i must leave
but i will seek her out once more
to cure my illness on her shore

seeking love part 2
holding on

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her eyes draw me in
i find my self closed off within
for i never see her so clean

pure as a white rose
my love in bloom like the reddest of roses
i wish thee can show me closest of things
like love and how it symbols a greater above

let the stars shoot across the heavens
i wil be here for you in heaven
i love you to death

i have i kept you to long
i may forstalled my plan
you have driven me mad

with our love is a dove
a peace in gods eyes above
for i have been seeking this love
now i feel like a divine in a golden line.

for i am inclined to love her for all enternity
death and love will be our hands intwined
for i am seeking love

 

[The KleaNupGuy]

OMG that is DROP DEAD GORGEOUS!!
Wayy to go man!!:worshippy:

 

[EL MAGNIFICO]

its amazing Izi man !!!

 

[izinagi54]

i love this job and day... but i would love it to have met a girl in this... i feel as if i am meant to die alone sometimes so thats were my dark poems come from

 

[uzumaki antonia]

wow that was so beautiful.

 

[saaaaaadpanda]

Pretty good, though I'm not a poetry aficionado by even the lowest of standards.

So you know, when you send me VM's it won't let me view the conversation or send you one.

 

[izinagi54]

sorry bout that i'll be turning off the private off. thanks by the way. im sorry if i annoyed you

 

[saaaaaadpanda]

sorry bout that i'll be turning off the private off. thanks by the way. im sorry if i annoyed you

No worries. I'm just not a good critic of poetry. It's one artistic venue that's beyond me.

 

[~Uzumaki~]

Cool poem. Not really good at poems so I give credit where its due. Thanks for linking me.

 

[Rorasa]

awesome!!! you get better every time ^_^

 

[teravita9]

Very good my friend:ice:

 

[BadBoy M]

i likey <3

 

[Vayne]

Good job bro keep it up

 

[hans roildy]

I feel the pain. Great poem +rep

 

[hinata100]

WOW! thats just amazing

 

[shelma]

I see this poem's an epitome of ur feelings...
Its lovely....then again...watch out for spelling mistakes
All in all, gud job....again

 

[AiMi]

Absolutely Love this. <3
Amazing^_^

 

[Zeref]

Wow bra i really like it rep+

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

I love Simple and Clean and Hikari as I am a KH elitist lol However, I suppose I understand what you mean by the song.

I liked your tow poems as they again inspire love. As if true love can be found if you look deep enough

 

[Legendary Broly]

thats deep bro ^.^ and good