School Music and Experiments (Chapter 5)

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Let the bodies hit the floor
Let the bodies hit the floor
Let the bodies hit the floor
Let the bodies hit the floooooor

Naruto’s world went black, and a smile crept onto his face. “What!? Allergic to music? That’s ridiculous!” Ryota shrugged and continued. “Whatever, we’ll beat the shit out of you anyway, starting now!” He charged Naruto with full speed. ‘The little ****er won’t even know what hit him.’ Suddenly he noticed the smile on Naruto’s face, and came to a sudden stop right before him; he grabbed the Uzumaki’s collar, lifted him up and smacked him towards one of the lockers. “What’s with you, dipshit? Smiling at your own funeral? Not a smart move.”
One - Nothing wrong with me

Naruto looked up at the senior, a psychotic smile had overtaken his features, madness radiated from his eyes “Whatcha looking at? Something funny on my face?”
Two - Nothing wrong with me

Ryota looked at the boy with a bit of fear in his eyes. Something in the back of his mind screamed at him to let go of the freshman, but his pride as a senior wouldn’t let him do anything else than hit the little bastard. So he punched the seemingly insane kid as hard as he could in the face, which caused Naruto’s head to snap sideways into some of the lockers. The freshman immediately started bleeding from the corner of his mouth, but the smile never left his face.
Three - Nothing wrong with me

“What’s wrong you? Did someone steal your tongue?” Naruto’s voice seemed different, it seemed deeper, it sounded so haunted, as if a war veteran had possessed the freshman’s body, it send a chill down Ryota’s spine. The senior was seriously starting to doubt the brilliance of his little ambush.
Four - Nothing wrong with me

Tthat second of wondering, that second where he didn’t have his full attention focused on Naruto, was the second which costed him several broken ribs. The large crowd had been watching the fight with widened eyes for some time now. But even the most attentive students couldn’t follow the speed of Naruto’s right fist, as he suddenly without warning smashed it into the senior’s chest. A few students were able to catch a glimpse of Ryota’s chest bulging inwards from the sheer force of Naruto’s punch, and the whole crowd heard the loud snap as several of the seniors ribs broke under the pressure. The large boy was blasted back by the power of Naruto’s punch, and he collided with some lockers on the other side of the hall, with such a speed that it caused some of the lockers to bend inwards. The senior thug, who had been watching the short fight with a superior smile, suddenly turned pale, and looked at Naruto as if he’d just grown a new head. The two others who each had been holding one of Shikamaru’s arms, to prevent him from interfering, let him go as if they had burned their hands on the Nara’s arms. The large crowd of students, who before had been cheering randomly, went dead-silent and stared at Naruto with gaping faces. Had it not been for the heavy metal playing quite loudly in the background, you would’ve been able to hear a pin hit the floor.

Naruto was the only one not affected by the mood. Shikamaru was staring at him with an amazed expression, and Chouji was still unconscious, the psychotic grin Naruto was wearing hadn’t disappeared for a second. Suddenly it seemed like the blonde boy became aware of the silence. He took a few steps into the middle of the circle formed by the crowd, and dusted himself off. “Now,” he said in a sugar coated voice. “Who’s next on the list?”

Naruto took a single step towards some of the spectators, which immediately made a few of the less brave, take a frightened step backwards the. “The music demands action, you must give me action or the consequences will be severe,” Naruto said almost mechanically. He lashed out after the student closest to him. The music demanded action, he had to create action.
Just before he hit the student, who was staring at him with frightened amazement, Naruto felt a hand on his arm. Naruto knew he could easily overpower whoever the owner of the arm was, but somehow the surprise of being touched made him stop his punch. Naruto turned his head to identify whoever it was that dared stop him from execute the wish of the music, to come face to face with Shikamaru, who was looking him pleadingly, staring deeply into his soul. “Naruto, you have to stop.”
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AN: Last chapter unless people really want me to continue o.o
I know i'm attention-whoring, but if nobody wants to read my work, i don't really want to write it.
There will be no Yaoi or slash in this fic.
If i somehow manage to make this fic long enough, i have a pairing in mind.
FanFics Forever.
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.....0.0....Um, well...my guess from Chapter 4 was dead on..or some what. Aiy...Naruto and loud music, definatly bad thing to have. Alrighty then, note to self. Stay away from Naruto with metal or any band that screams @_@

Good read, definatly going to keep an eye on this one. If you ever have time XD Think could read some of my chapter lol. Only when you feel like it of course.

If this is the last chapter for the day. Then I will wait till you post more, or are they posted on Fanfiction?
 

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.....0.0....Um, well...my guess from Chapter 4 was dead on..or some what. Aiy...Naruto and loud music, definatly bad thing to have. Alrighty then, note to self. Stay away from Naruto with metal or any band that screams @_@

Good read, definatly going to keep an eye on this one. If you ever have time XD Think could read some of my chapter lol. Only when you feel like it of course.

If this is the last chapter for the day. Then I will wait till you post more, or are they posted on Fanfiction?
I had actually planned to use NB as a little test-run to see if my writing was worth anything. I'll publish it slowly on fanfiction.net
I'll definitely read some of your work O:
NB or Fanfiction.net?
 

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I had actually planned to use NB as a little test-run to see if my writing was worth anything. I'll publish it slowly on fanfiction.net
I'll definitely read some of your work O:
NB or Fanfiction.net?
Well the chapters are both on here and Fanfiction.net XD Think, finding the chapters will be easier on FF.net. All you gotta search on is "An Anbu wanting to be sensei" and should come up lol.

Your writing is great. I can definatly agree to that. Probably better than mine XD I hope you do keep going with the story, I kinda hate it when things get unfinished lol. Even though I shouldn't be one talking, since I haven't got the old Naruto fanfic done.
 

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Well the chapters are both on here and Fanfiction.net XD Think, finding the chapters will be easier on FF.net. All you gotta search on is "An Anbu wanting to be sensei" and should come up lol.

Your writing is great. I can definatly agree to that. Probably better than mine XD I hope you do keep going with the story, I kinda hate it when things get unfinished lol. Even though I shouldn't be one talking, since I haven't got the old Naruto fanfic done.
lol xd
I know the feeling. Sometimes i stumble across a really good FF, and the the writer has abandoned it in the middle of the plot =/
Sucks <_<
 

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im not doing this personally. people will know thats similar to mine and you wont get a good review and bad rep but looking from the creativity you have the potential to be a very good fanfic writer and if you ever need ideas pm me im always coming up with ideas
 

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Naruto is going Pschotic... ths is really interesting to read. You should consider publishing this and any other work you've written. Your writing syle is interesting and you write clearly so its easy to get into the flow of the story.
 

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im not doing this personally. people will know thats similar to mine and you wont get a good review and bad rep but looking from the creativity you have the potential to be a very good fanfic writer and if you ever need ideas pm me im always coming up with ideas
Excuse me? o.o
Is this fanfic similar to yours? Or have i misunderstood something? If this is similar to yours, then i'm truly sorry. I've never read your fanfic, if i had i would've never written this :(
But thank you very much for your thoughts on this ^_^

Naruto is going Pschotic... ths is really interesting to read. You should consider publishing this and any other work you've written. Your writing syle is interesting and you write clearly so its easy to get into the flow of the story.
O:
Thank you very much little miss ^^
 

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Wah~ I didn't know you continued on my account till I finally decided to check! TT-TT (Yes I'm HinataR, I changed my username. :p ) I feel bad for not reading these sooner. It's awesome! ^_^ Keep up the good work, I'll do my best to look for the next chapters! :D
 
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