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Basically the same rules as the other two xD
I'll be using Six in ma sig.
Snow covered field. No water source.

Heads or Tails?
 

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*As he finishes his sentence, Kakuzu's begins channeling his chakra into his opponent, where he causes her to see an illusion of Kakuzu slamming his hands upon the ground, to cause the ground around Maren to transform itself into a fairly large water source which ends at Kakuzu's feet. Immediately after putting this illusion in place, Kakuzu performs the Ram handseal, causing the ground around his opponent's feet to suck itself inwards, dragging his adversary deeper and deeper into an crushing and inescapable sinkhole. In the illusion, it appears as if the water source is forming itself into a whirl-pool like formation which begins sucking his opponent into its watery depths, with such force he's unable to escape it with movement alone.*

*As the Antilion continues to spiral inwards, Kakuzu stomps his right foot on the ground to create a tunnel between himself and his opponent, breathing a sizable stream of fire along it which quickly reacts with the ground to form molten lava. Then with the use of a single handseal, he causes the lava to erupt from the ground in a violent manner, reaching an outstanding distance into the air before inevitably crashing back down on top of the blonde-haired girl.*

Kakuzu: Its futile to oppose me, the end result will be the same.

( Magen: Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu ) - Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10 (+5 if you use it double)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion over an area that allows him to manipulate the way an area looks to fool an opponent. He can only change the way the terrain looks, and not any other feature.

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, Kakuzuch like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how Kakuzuch chakra is put into the technique.

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.
 
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I assume you're using Kakuzu?
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With her surroundings changing greatly as water begins to cover the area all around her Maren knows her opponent must have something planned, her fears are answered when the water begins to pull her under. The moment she feels her feet being pulled Six notices that although being pulled downward the water hasn't actually enveloped her feet, and instead her feet remain on what feels like solid earth. With this in mind she uses the force of the antlions suck and allows her body to fall limp, the speed and force of the pull would pull her feet out from under her thus removing her contact with the ground (The ground in antlion remains solid, unlike if the antlion was made of mud my feet wouldn't actually be under the ground until they rteached the centre of the pit, they also wouldn't be stuck down in any way. ^^). Whilst off the ground Six points her hands at the ground in front of her (if she was still standing looking at you) blasting a cannon of water at the floor which sends her flying backwards into long range of her opponent.

( Suiton: Seiryūshō ) - Water Release: Azure Dragon Palm
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a spiralling torrent of water from his hands.

Whilst travelling through the air Six causes the earth behind her to rise up to create a platform roughly ten meters high and wide and adjusts her body in the air allowing her to lands feet first upon the platform.

(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.

The moment she touches down on the risen earth Six rolls backward to avoid any unnecessary pressure on her knees, as she rolls over she lands on one knee with her right leg bent at a right angle in front of her as support. from this position Six causes multiple jagged pillars of earth to sprout from the face of her platform, reaching out toward her opponent at completely random angles in an attempt to impale him.

(Doton: Kujo Joushou Iwa Chuuseki) - Earth Release: Destructive Rising Rock Pillars
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This jutsu causes gigantic pillars of rock to forcefully emerge from the ground. This is a even greater scaled Earth Release: Rising Spikes and is large enough to impale a summoning technique.

From her position on the ground Six places a hand on the earth in order to steady her balance further as she watches her opponents actions. As her hand hits the earth at the bottom of what water remains to further her balance she suddenly receives a cold chill which pierces through her skin, pulling her hand away quickly she sees the snow in her hand. Perfectly formed snow, underneath a thick layer of water. With this impossible weather effect Six is easily able to assume the water is not water at all but a genjutsu. Six then smiles to herself and allows the illusion to go on.

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Note that the Azure Palms water hitting the antlion would weaken the technique enough to make the moving earth core use possible using the ground that the antlion covers.
 
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*As Kakuzu notices Maren project herself away from the antilion below her, he immediately abandons his previous plan and takes a new course of action. After performing a single handseal, he causes a large dragon composed entirely of earth to erupt beneath his feet, the head of the dragon directly below his position. As the dragon erupts from the ground, Kakuzu's wind mask hastily erupts from his back and flies alongside the dragon, directly to the left of Kakuzu's position (right from your perspective). Immediately on re-entering mid-range, Kakuzu's wind mask begins inhaling air with devastating suction power, pulling in Maren but leaving Kakuzu unaffected as he disembarks himself from the right side of the dragon (who is a few meters off the ground). During the very same instant, Kakuzu performs the tiger handseal as he jumps down from the dragon, exhaling two identical dragons composed of flames in Maren's direction. The dragon's are mere centimeters apart, giving them the appearance of Siamese twins.

The suction power of the wind mask begins moments after Maren's feet make contact with the ground she raised from the floor. Immediately pulling her off the raised ground and causing her to collide full force with the earth dragon. The suction itself doesn't affect the earth dragon in the slightest since its not in the same line of action and its mass is too significant. Kakuzu himself is sure to fire the twin fire dragons in a different line of action to the suction of the wind mask to prevent the attack from backfiring. The suction of the wind mask ends a few seconds after pulling Maren off her platform and is replaced with a pressurized wind bullet which powers towards her crushed body, which has been forced to collide with the earth dragon.*

(Doton: Dosenkiryū) – Earth Release: Earth and Stone Dragon Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Horse → Dog → Bird → Ox → Snake will create a large dragon of earth erupt from the ground and direct it towards the enemy with devastating force. This technique much resembles the Water Release: Water Dragon technique.

( Futon: Shinkūdama ) - Wind Release: Vacuum Bullet
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: The user will begin sucking in wind which results in drawing in opponents towards them and by kneading with their chakra in their mouth the user then releases the wind chakra in the form of a powerful bullet that blasts the opponent away.

(Katon: Ryūen Hōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Dragon Flame Release Song Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the hand seal Tiger the user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body, before instead expelling it in the form of a number of dragon head-shaped fireballs. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. The temperature of the created flames is so great that, even with the briefest of contact, they are capable of easily burning human flesh and the fireballs are dense enough to behave almost as solid, being able to deliver impact damage in adition to the fire damage. However, this also means that they can be deflected as a solid projectiles.




Timeframe
-Earth Dragon erupts and begins traveling on ssee your use of Azure Dragon Palm
-Moving Earth Core begins to raise from the ground
-You land on the Moving Earth Core, the dragon very close to your position
-Wind Mask begins its suction literally seconds after you land on the ground + Kakuzu jumps off the dragon and releases the two Fire dragons
-You're sucked into the Earth Dragon's face and crushed + Wind Bullet is shot
-Fire Dragons crash into you
 
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As she flies through the air she notices the earth dragon form under her opponent and lift him into the sky, travelling toward her location she knows she cannot stay in her landing place for long. As she travels she therefore performs a sequence of handseals forming a small (though large enough to fulfill its purpose) opening on the platform. By checking her flight path she is able to create this tunnel in the precise location that she would land. As she begins to fall through her tunnel, she slides down what is effectively a slide through the centre of the risen earth platform, the slide deposits her on the other side of the large earth platform. As she enters her tunnel she begins to feel a slight pull of wind, however the pull is not strong enough to stop her momentum and to suck her out from the tunnel (considering too that the further in the tunnel I fall the less effect the vacuum will have on me.)

(Doton: Ton'neru chika no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Tunneling Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Ram → Dog → Rat → Bird is able to create a wide tunnel in the ground, this cannot travel through rock though or anything with a high density. The large tunnel that is created allows the user to transport others without detection.
Note: The initial entry of the technique is short range

As she slides down the earth she performs a single handseal and charges lighnting chakra through her hands. Still sliding she adjusts her body shape and points her arms up towards the tunnel entrance. With this action she shoots a spear of lightning back up her tunnel, the lightning spear emerges from the tunnel as your dragon would reach it; if you are still travelling toward the tunnel that is.

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

As she emerges from her tunnel Six adjusts the light around her body in effect turning herself invisible. She stands a few feet from the tunnel exit giving herself a clear view above her as well as through the tunnel.

(Meisaigakure no Jutsu) - Hiding with Camouflage Technique
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (-10 per turn active)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a ninja escape technique that allows the user after performing the Tiger hand seal to control how light is reflected around their body with chakra inflections. The technique also erases the user's scent and shadow, and is usable on any terrain, making it ideal not only for covert maneuvers but also offensive strikes. Perceiving the user's position is possible only for ninja who are astute enough to observe minute variations within their surrounding environment, such as distortions of air currents in the immediate vicinity or distinguishing sounds, i.e. footsteps etc. However, the usefulness of this ability can be entirely negated by those with special vision or sensory skills. The Second Tsuchikage, Mū's mastery of this technique helped earn him the moniker "Non-Person" seemingly having neither form nor chakra while the technique was active. Thus, he could not be sensed through traditional means.
Note: Technique lasts a total of 3 turns
 

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*As Kakuzu's earth dragon pass over the tunnel, it is struck by a sudden yet potent bolt of lightning which causes the dragon to break into multiple massive pieces of rubble which fall down the tunnel, hoping to crush you. Without hesitation, as this happens Kakuzu decides to verify whether the downpour of rubble did indeed put an end to his opponent. After performing a moderate sequence of handseals, he channels his suiton chakra into the sky to cause rain clouds infused with his chakra to form, causing a downpour of rain capable of pinpointing multiple entities by distinguishing them by chakra. Immediately as he does this, he locates Maren as her mere presence obstructs the downward path of the rain. However, Kakuzu notices her physical presence is cloaked, undoubtedly by some sort of invisibility technique similar to Lord Mu's.

On detecting Maren, Kakuzu performs a single handseal which causes two identical jaws of earth to erupt from the ground either side of her, their sheer size dwarfing her own. Soon after they rise from the ground, Kakuzu causes the two jaws to move towards each other, severely impaling Maren in the process.

In the very same instant Kakuzu does this, his wind mask breathes in heavily before exhaling multiple blades sharp blades of wind at varying angles towards Maren hoping to slice through her as the jaws crush her completely.*

Kakuzu: Pride yourself with the knowledge that you survived such an offensive. Most would cower with fear at the might of my combination attacks.

Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra after waving the Bird → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Rat → Snake hand seals. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the users own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the users senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone the existence of the target can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it.

(Doton: Musaborudzuchi) – Earth Release: Devouring Earth
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage points: 50
Description: The user performs the Ram → Horse → Tiger → Rabbit → Snake and slams their palm on the ground. Instantly, the ground to the sides of the opponent take the shape of huge jaws and attempt to crush and stab him between them.

(Fūton: Shinkū Renpa) – Wind Release: Serial Waves
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After performing a the required hand seals Rat → Snake → Horse → Dog theuser takes a deep breath and exhales several blades of wind at different angles, by rapidly moving their head in various directions. The power of this technique can be dramatically enhanced when utilised in conjunction with the effects of extreme suction, such as that generated by the Baku, where the augmented attack proved effective enough to even slice through the defences of a complete Susanoo.
 

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As she peers up the tunnel she had previously used to escape her opponent Six watches as the dragon is destroyed by her lightning, the rocks exploding outward with some crashing there way down the tunnel. Peering up the chute like tunnel she notices the sky begin to change, clouds form overhead and the air becomes cooler, she can smell the rain building in the air. The sudden change in the weather is clearly the work of a technique. Moving her eyes away from the tunnel she peers around herself and sees her opponent clearly unaware of her position. As the first drops of rain strike her skin she notices as her opponent turns toward her focused on her position, it is clear from this sudden knowledge that her opponent has used the rain in order to sense her location. With this in mind Six begins to think of a way of getting herself out of the rain, whilst she thinks she watches her opponent intently. As she concentrates she begins to see the earth around her rising up on either side of her body, the two menacing slabs of earth growing to a height taller than her and dwarfing her as they stand to her sides. Before the earth can rise fully Six performs a single handseal and begins to spit out a large amount of water by her feet, the water lifts her up into the air and carries her forwards toward her opponent.

(Suiton: Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs the snake hand seal and creates a large volume of water from their mouth spilling it toward the ground and lifting them up into the air. The user can also ride the wave, allowing him to travel at high speeds and attacking the enemy. The user can create a small ocean worth of water even in barren conditions and can use the water for additional techniques.

As the walls begin to travel inward towards one another in an attempt to crush Six they subsequently squeeze the large amount of water between them, forcing the water upwards extremely quickly thus lifting Six high into the air above the walls and away from danger, much of the water would be forced toward her opponent at high speeds also. Reacing her peek in height Six performs a sequence of handseals before an extremely bright light emanates from her body, the water in the air refracts the light and increases its blinding/disorienting effect. With her opponents view impaired and his eyes stinging she watches on as the water engulfs him and throws his body against the hard, frozen ground.

(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.

With the water spreading and freezing on the snow covered earth the ground would become slippery. As her opponent lies in the remains of the water Six causes the ground around her opponent to transform into a whirlpool like pit, sucking him under the ground. The icey ground combined with her opponents current position (not standing up) would make escape extremely difficult. What remains of the water would also get sucked into the hole with you.

(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the Ram hand seal and causes causes the ground and everything on and around it to be sucked in towards the middle of a large pit, much like the method an antlion uses to catch prey. Upon being dragged to the centre, the victim will then be sucked underground. There the victim, depending on how deep the user makes them sink, will be trapped and/or suffocated. The range of the pit is determined by how much chakra is put into the technique.

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I'm not totally sure on the position of your wind mask, but I'd assume that is swept up also. Providing it doesn't move of course.
 
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The Wind mask is flying to the left to my position. We're both mid-range from your position.




*As Kakuzu watches Maren project herself upwards from the wave of water, he immediately responses by releasing his doton chakra into the ground to cause countless colossal pillars of earth to emerge from the ground beneath and around her. The pillars themselves are arranged in a formation which serves two purposes simultaneously. The first being that they act as a dam-like structure which seek to dissipate the force of the incoming wave, neutralizing the threat posed by it. The second being that each of the pillars angle their pointed tips directly towards Maren herself, impaling her body from multiple angles. Meanwhile, Kakuzu's Wind mask re-enters its owner's body, doing so in the calmest manner possible.

Almost in one smooth motion after erupting the pillars from the ground, Kakuzu opens a portal directly above his opponent's position. From the portal, an immense boar-shaped lid of earth emerges, immediately pushing Maren further into the jagged spikes.

Moments after forming the portal above Maren's position, Kakuzu channels his chakra into sky above his opponent to cause dark storm clouds to form. The clouds unleash a vicious series of lightning bolts which collide directly with the boar-shaped lid, shattering it with utmost ease before incinerating the woman's body in the same manner. Forming the clouds isn't a noticeable act due to the ongoing rainfall.*

Kakuzu: Clinging to your pitiful existence is a futile endeavor. Do you have any last words before you're slain ?

(Doton: Kujo Joushou Iwa Chuuseki) - Earth Release: Destructive Rising Rock Pillars
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This jutsu causes gigantic pillars of rock to forcefully emerge from the ground. This is a even greater scaled Earth Release: Rising Spikes and is large enough to impale a summoning technique.

(Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid high in the air that falls on the target, trapping them underneath.

( Raiton: Raiun ) - Lightning Release: Thundercloud
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user generates a cloud above the battlefield kneaded with their chakra and then cause a series of lightning bolts to rain down upon the battlefield causing severe damage.

Timeframe
Destructive Rising Pillars + Wind Mask re-entering my body
Dropping Lid
Lightning strikes
 
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Once in the air above her raging waters she begins to see huge spikes of earth rising from the ground beneath her, the spikes cut easily through her water and stop it in it's path as well as growing toward her, the spikes are clearly a huge threat and Six knows instantly upon seeing them that she must avoid the technique at all costs. In the middle of her sequence of handseals, (for the lightning flash) she halts her hand movements suddenly and releases a jet of wind from her mouth, the stream is powerful enough to move her out the way of the rising rock pillars and into long range of her opponent (thus avoiding the dropping lid and moving out of range of the thundercloud should they still happen.)

(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.

After pushing herself backwards through the air Six finds herself neatly perched on the earth she raised earlier in the battle. Looking down on the mayhem below her she watches her opponent from above. Watching him intently she performs a single handseal and compresses fire chakra throughout her body, she then releases this chakra in the form of 3 dragon shaped fire balls. The first heading straight toward her opponent, the second in an arc to his right and the third in an arc to his left aiming to attack from three different angles.

(Katon: Ryūen Hōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Dragon Flame Release Song Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the hand seal Tiger the user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body, before instead expelling it in the form of a number of dragon head-shaped fireballs. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. The temperature of the created flames is so great that, even with the briefest of contact, they are capable of easily burning human flesh and the fireballs are dense enough to behave almost as solid, being able to deliver impact damage in adition to the fire damage. However, this also means that they can be deflected as a solid projectiles.

After releasing the last dragon ball Six opens a portal in the sky mid range from herself (short range from you). The opening in the sky begins to drip with mud, the mud drops in front of Kakuzu separating his sight from the oncoming fire, the technique is timed so that the last of the mud falls a mere instant before the fire passes by it, therefore leaving the opponent with little time to counter the fire should he wait for the mud to clear.

(Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi) – Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.

I suppose as long as you have this rain there is no point in me staying quiet. You're over confidence will be your downfall, you assume victory after every move... but I assure you, I will not go down easily."
 

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*As Kakuzu watches Maren flawlessly evade his spikes, he takes a new route in dealing with the blonde-haired girl. As she travels, he performs the ram handseal and raises his right arm to the sky, conjuring up his raiton chakra as he does. He then motions the same arm downwards, triggering a violent electrical discharge which moves down towards Maren who is now positioned on the raised platform she raisied earlier in the battle. Knowing full well his attack buys him some time whilst Maren defends, he immediately removes a scroll from his pocket. He quickly scrawls down a messy but sufficient maze, too random and complicated for any shinobi to navigate successfully. In one smooth motion, he slams the scroll onto the ground, channeling his doton chakra into it as he does this to suddenly cause multiple fifty meter tall walls to emerge from the arena. The walls make up Kakuzu's maze, with the sheer height of the walls preventing Maren gaining any sort of advantage with her raised platform which is far dwarfed in comparison.

The maze is designed so Kakuzu knows Maren's position at all times (due to his chakra sensing rain) whilst his opponent undergoes a futile search. As a final measure, Kakuzu creates a single shadow clone who also knows the location of Maren. Kakuzu and his clone have a quick exchange of words before going separate ways, taking two different routes which will ensure they surround Maren from both sides and arrive almost simulateously. All the while, the original Kakuzu keeps the scroll on him in person in the case he needs it for further uses.*

Kakuzu: Who knew I would have to resort to his (mutters) ?

(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.

(Doton: Uitenpen) - Earth Style: Wheel Of Fortune
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: A form of summoning where the user first takes out a topographical map that they can use to change any earth-based feature of the battlefield.
Note: can only be used once per battle

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(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.




The maze isn't as complicated as the one in the picture (not enough time to scrawl all of that), but you get the idea xD.

Your location is somewhere in the middle of the maze.
 
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Watching her opponent across the long distance Maren notices his arm raise into the sky and averts her eyes above, a crash is heard and she quickly expels a stream of wind from her mouth as the lightning comes down from above, the stream cancelling the lightning before it is able to do any damage.

(Futon: Ressenpū) - Wind Release: Violent Whirlwind
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user gushes a powerful stream of wind from their mouth towards their enemy

Having dealt with the lightning she feels the ground begin to shake Maren peers down from the top of her podium, seeing the walls rising up from the ground around her and unwilling to give up her height advantage Maren leaps from the raised platform that she resides onto the raising wall of what she can now see is a maze. As she lands on the wall and is lifted higher into the air she performs a sequence of handseals adding her own rain to the already existing rain of her opponent, what this results in is a torrential downpour which soaks the two as they contest what is turning out to be a rather heated battle. Pushing herself back to her feet as the wall beneath her reaches its peak she removes her jacket as it begins to absorb the rain water and become extremely heavy on her body, as well as this she removes her shoes believing her bare feet to be the best option on the slippery mud which now rapidly forms below. As she drops her jacket to the ground she is able to sense two chakra signatures making their way through the maze, one of her opponent and the other what she assumes to be a clone.

(Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra after waving the Bird → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Rat → Snake hand seals. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the users own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the users senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone the existence of the target can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it.

With her opponents positions worked out Maren performs a single handseal and releases a spear of lightning from her mouth, the spear instantly splits into two and they travel toward the versions of you. One toward you and the other toward your clone, both are aimed to intercept you as you run through the one way system of the maze. As the bolts travel they rip through the walls of the maze and send large chunks of the fifty food high solid earth structures tumbling to the ground creating obstacles in the way of her opponents. Not only does this create obstacles but as the bolts rip through the final walls they send the walls falling like huge landslides down onto her opponent and his clone crushing them beneath the massive blocks of earth.

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri

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Note that as the bolts are aimed to intercept you you should be in mid range by the time they hit there targets, should you choose to continue moving. If not then this would still happen and would merely be a way of reaffirming my sight of you at long range.
 

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*As the walls of the maze emerge from the floor, Kakuzu senses Maren positioning herself one of its many walls. Acting in response to this, he and his clone stop running towards her previous position and then using the same scroll as before, he draws spikes on top of the walls beneath and around Maren's position, before slamming the doton infused scroll upon the floor once again to cause the alterations to manifest in reality. The spikes emerge directly beneath Maren's feet, skewering through her body whilst uplifting her into the air, leaving her prone to further attacks. Whilst he does this, Kakuzu releases his Fire and Lightning masks from his body for later use. All the while he does this, he keeps the scroll safe from the heavy downpour of rain.

Immediately on doing this, Kakuzu drops the scroll and performs a single handseal in conjunction with his clone. In perfect synchronization, twin dragons composed entirely of rock emerge beneath Kakuzu and his clone's feet respectively, lifting their hosts up into the air in the general direction of the blonde-haired girl. The dragons move towards her in an upward arc-like motion, converging on her position from either side of her (Kakuzu's dragon attacks you from the left, his clone's attacks you from the right). As this happens, Kakuzu's masks fly in the same direction of his dragon, keeping a good distance above their owner and his clone. Both the dragons collide into either side of Maren, crushing her between the two large formations of rock. Moments before the collision, Kakuzu and his clone jump from their respective dragons, dreading the fifty meter fall which awaits them. Shortly after disembarking, Kakuzu's Fire and Lightning masks catch Kakuzu and his clone mid-fall (with their threaded arms/hands), snatching them from the threshold of death.*

Kakuzu: This battle will drag on until I collapse!

(Dimenshon Fuudo Shihai) - Dimension Topography Control
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description:This jutsu is used after Earth Style:Wheel of Fortune.The user can change the landscape of wheel of fortune 3 time each time this jutsu is used.The user must have the topography scroll used to summon wheel of fortune for this jutsu to work.

(Doton: Dosenkiryū) – Earth Release: Earth and Stone Dragon Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Horse → Dog → Bird → Ox → Snake will create a large dragon of earth erupt from the ground and direct it towards the enemy with devastating force. This technique much resembles the Water Release: Water Dragon technique.

(Doton: Dosenkiryū) – Earth Release: Earth and Stone Dragon Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long (Made short range of the user with a long range reach)
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Horse → Dog → Bird → Ox → Snake will create a large dragon of earth erupt from the ground and direct it towards the enemy with devastating force. This technique much resembles the Water Release: Water Dragon technique.



Timeframe
Dimension Topography Control + Kakuzu's masks released
Earth Stone Dragon + Earth Stone Dragon

Kakuzu's Lightning mask catches his clone
Kakuzu's Fire mask catches his real body

We're still long-range from eachother since Kakuzu and his clone stopped moving the moment you positioned yourself on the maze's wall.
 
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Standing atop the giant maze walls Maren feels as her feet begin to become unsteady, like something from below rising up and driving into her, before it is able to pierce her shoes significantly enough to damage her feet she merges her body with the spikes as they rise. By doing so her opponent would sense no movement with his rain and would assume his attack had connected perfectly. Once the spikes reach their maximum height Maren (infusing chakra into her feet) jumps straight upwards and by concentrating on the spikes beneath her lands with her feet between them and her hands on the sides, thus preveting herself from being stabbed.

(Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hiding in Rock Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a technique that allows its user to blend into rocks and then move in and out of other rocks undetected.
Note: Can only blend through on B rank and below Earth Techniques

Wary of her positioning and unable to fight cleanly on such harsh terrain shapes Maren notices her opponents chakra signatures rising from the maze. Knowing that her opponent has a huge distance to cover before it reaches her she pulls out a scroll of her own and quickly draws two lines, with these lines she slams the scroll against the earth and causes a roof to form over the whole of the maze, the roof is thick enough to weaken the dragin as it crashes through from below. She does this using the earth that formed the fifty meter tall walls. The roof to the maze forms over your escape route and leaves you to crash through the newly formed ceiling, thus creating two dragon sized holes. As the dragons emerge from the roof Maren re-positions herself on the now flat surface beneath her.

(Doton: Uitenpen) - Earth Style: Wheel Of Fortune
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: A form of summoning where the user first takes out a topographical map that they can use to change any earth-based feature of the battlefield.
Note: can only be used once per battle

As her opponent crashes through the newly formed ceiling/floor Maren performs a sequence of handseals and releases a net like gust of wind, the wind travels quickly through the air and cuts through the remains of both dragons with ease, as well as ripping her opponent and his clone apart.

(Fūton: Kakeami no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Cast Net Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user using a giant folding fan or giant fan will swing it towards the enemy summoning a gust of wind that then takes the form of a net and slices through the opponent. A standard user can perform this technique by using a sequence of 5 hand seals.
 
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As agreed, the two earth dragons are coming from the same angle since Kakuzu and his clone didn't reach a far enough distance between eachother when running through the maze.




*As the two S-Rank Earth dragon burst through the wall with relative ease, Kakuzu and his clone notice Maren sending a fairly powerful stream of wind in their direction. In response to this, his clone releases a truly devastating stream of flames in her direction, the fire reaching both an expansive vertical and horizontal reach. On coming into contact with the wind, the fire overpowers the technique entirely, barely being hindered in the process. At the very same time, Kakuzu himself releases his wind mask from his back and causes his three released masks to surround Maren from above in a triangular formation, being careful to be well above the stream of flames. Each of the masks is a mid-range horizontal distance from Maren, making them safe from any of her offensives.

On creating this triangular formation, the three masks all emit powerful A-Rank blasts of their respective element towards her position, the three separate attacks fusing into an immense atomic blast on colliding. The blast is truly devastating and completely eradicates the blonde-haired girl from existence.

All the while the two Earth dragons continue towards her, should by some miracle she survive the attack, attacking as extra reassurance. Noticing the masks charging up their attacks, Kakuzu disembarks from the dragon and falls through the sky, before being caught by his Wind mask.*

Kakuzu: Begone...

(Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then kneads chakra inside his body which is then converted into fire and expelled from the mouth as a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.

(Kongukan) The Elder's Folly
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 90
Damage: 80
Description:
After releasing his masks out of his body, Kakuzu's makes use Fire Release: Intelligent Hard Work, Lightning Release: False Darkness and Wind Release: Pressure Damage all at the same time to create a massive elemental barrage that obliterates everything in front of them. The unique aspect of this technique is its scale and the fact that the 3 techniques actually combine into one gigantic tripe element blast. However, due to the elemental interactions, although its the use of 3 A-Rank techniques, the end result is equivalent to an S-Rank technique, although composed of 3 elemental natures. Off course, to use this technique, the user must have gained access to a Fire, Lightning and Wind hearts.
Note: Usable twice per battle.

[video=youtube;ejljumeSLJE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ejljumeSLJE[/video]​




Watch from 0:59 to see the technique. It doesn't specify the masks must be standing together, so I assume it can be used in a triangular formation, so long as the final attack has the same destination.
 
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I think this has gone on for long enough, thanks for an incredibly enjoyable battle and I hope that the readers enjoyed this as much as we did. And hopefully this will show you that winning isn't everything. There are better ways to end a fight than: "Quoted, checking something" Argue, Argue, Argue! Mods opinion. Sadness.
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With the flames coming toward her Maren's eyes cannot help but be drawn to the masks in the sky above her, as she frantically flicks her gaze from side to side her brain becomes flustered and in a blind panic she throws together a series of handseals. Gradually slowing her handseals down as it dawns on her that she must accept her fate Maren drops to her knees and throws her arms out to her sides making a cross with her body, she closes her eyes and faces up to the skies allowing the torrential downpour of rain to wash away any thoughts flowing through her head. The touch of the cold rain in the darkness behind her eyelids is enough to soothe her of the thoughts of what is to come. Drowning out all other sounds apart from the trickling and the splashing of the raindrops around her Maren feels at one with the waters, truly settled for the first time.

Then the all too calming silence is broken, she screams as the myriad of techniques drives through her chest, the wind ripping her clothes and tearing through the outer layers of her flesh. Then the intense heat as her body is engulfed with the relentless roar of the flames, then, as the sound of her voice echoes through the air all around she collapses, her cheek hits the dirt as her heart is penetrated by the flash of lightning from above.

No time for a last word she finds herself, high in the sky, overlooking the chaos below. Her body, almost unrecognizable from the pristine beauty it once possessed is changing from the deepest of black to the purest of whites as the rain washes the ash from her now cold skin. Her back, almost bare is covered only by the few strands of material that survived the assault is covered in ruby, a glistening substance glimmers under the light of the remaining flames, however, as fond as she was of rubies in her prime, this was not so comforting, the ruby she saw now was a puddle of her own blood, spread over her back as it seeped out from the hole in her chest. The last place she looked was down, to the man that had defeated her, through the black mask and hood not much was visible, although she saw no remorse in his eyes. Unphased he looked on as the flames eventually dissipated into the air leaving the harsh smell of smoke lingering amongst the even more harsh scent of the girls burning flesh. Then a drop hit the mans cheek, a drop different to the rest of the rain drops which clattered against his body from above, this drop fell from the eyes of his victim, fallen from her face as she made her way to her new home in the clouds. The tear was not that of sadness, or regret. Instead the tear was one of forgiveness. The new world she had found was beyond peaceful, beauty was her virtue, and there is no beauty greater than paradise. And in paradise, she now resides.
 
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