[Approved] Satsuki Kiryūin (鬼龍院 皐月)

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"Fear is freedom! Subjugation is liberation! Contradiction is truth! Those are the facts of this world! And you will all surrender to them, you pigs in human clothing!"
-Satsuki


BASIC INFORMATION
Name: Satsuki Kiryuin
Nickname: Lady Satsuki
Gender: Female ♀
Age: 18
Clan: N/A





Looks: Satsuki is a tall slim woman with an angular face similar to her mothers with long dark blue hair and blue eyes. She has rather thick eyebrows and a rather large bust. At the end of the series she cuts her formerly long hair to shoulder length in page boy style.



Personality
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In spite of her behavior at school, Satsuki is not heartless. While very harsh and not very willing to tolerate failures, she does care a great deal for the Elite Four; and is as protective of them (in her own hidden ways) as they are to her. As a child, she would always drink Soroi's tea in order to protect his feelings; despite disliking its bitterness for a long time, she eventually found it delicious. When she reminisces about this to Soroi, Satsuki herself notes that she must have been a kind-hearted girl if she'd gone that far to protect her butler's feelings.

Satsuki genuinely loved her father and her sister, enough to avenge them by attacking the mother who disposed of them. Likewise, despite a bitter, almost hatred-fueled rivalry with Ryuko for most of the series, Satsuki noticeably softens up to her when she learns that Ryuko is the sister she'd long believed to be dead.​


Village Info
Village of Birth: Northern Konohagakure
Village Of Alliance: Konohagakure


Ninja Rank/Chakra Info
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Ninja Rank~ Chuunin
Elements
Katon:Needs Training


Ninjutsu: E-rank


History
Satsuki was the first born child to Ragyō and Sōchirō Kiryūin, and soon became the first failed test subject of being used for a new Kinjutsu which took place in Northern Konohagakure. However, after Sōichirō learned the truth about Ragyō, he knew that he would be punished if he betrayed her. He secretly taught a 5-year-old Satsuki about her mother and the secrets of Ninjutsu.


Trivia/Extra Info: Satsuki's speech about the "facts of this world" are heavily inspired by George Orwell's most famous novel, Nineteen Eighty-Four. In the novel, the Party's slogans—"War is Peace", "Freedom is Slavery", and "Ignorance is Strength", making her a ruthless dictator.



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-My First RPG Bio on this site, I hope you like it-

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Angelofchaos179

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I already fcking love i should do a ryuko matoi just to mess with you lmao you getz rep
#kill la kill
 

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You need to actually go through training in the 'Training Grounds' and learn all the techniques of a release to actually master it. And at a Chuunin you can only have two elements available for learning. You're new though, so it's no biggie but edit the training stats, ninja rank, and specialty.
 

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Ninja rank: Chuunin only please.
No specialties.
YOU HAVE NO ELEMENTS. Put "needs training"
An example of a bio without training? In my sig. (Hiccup And Alluka
 
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Cauzing

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You surely didn't learn all those elements. Put "needs training" in
Ninja rank should be your rank underneath your NB avatar
No speciality whatsoever
And she can't have superhuman strength and speed :|
Your history must be adapted to the NV and not from Kill la kill
And everything ing red isn't really good looking :|
 

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You surely didn't learn all those elements. Put "needs training" in
Ninja rank should be your rank underneath your NB avatar
No speciality whatsoever
And she can't have superhuman strength and speed :|
Your history must be adapted to the NV and not from Kill la kill
And everything ing red isn't really good looking :|

This is harsh but true.
 

Keyboard Uchiha

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I didn't know you needed training in order to do a bio. I guess I need to do some editing.
Sorry.
 

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I didn't know you needed training in order to do a bio. I guess I need to do some editing.
Sorry.

You don't. You just can't say you have mastered all these elements. Just put "needs training" in.
 

Leathercandle

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Looks cool but you can't have a speciality yet.
 

Zanithe

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Remove the specialty, afflitation, and the weapons just for sure. The history, please connect it with Naruto. Fix it, and it might get approved.
 
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