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Sasuto Haruno


Chapter 1
Sasuto Haruno


Konohamaru was walking in the village as the Hogake with his wife Moegi. Konohamaru remembers when he was spying on Naruto when Naruto was twelve.
Flash Back to Naruto was using his clones to tease Sakura by poke her and than disappeared before she'd turned around or he just turns into Sasuke before Sasuke the village or somethings he will turns into Jiraiya.
The in of the flash back.
Konohamaru reached the the pole that Naruto after 2 in half years training with Master Jiraiya.
Konohamaru always tearing up when he thinks about Naruto.
Iruka said, "Don't tell me that Konohamaru is thinking about Naruto." Moegi said, "He's always like this when he think about Boss." Iruka said, "Since Ebisu took up Jiraiya's Mantle. I'll treat you to some Ramen."
So all three of them went to Ramen.


At the Ichiraku Ramen. Ayame is the new Owner of Ichiraku Ramen cause Teuchi died from old age. Ayame said, "It been ages since I saw you guys."
Iruka said, "Sorry about that but we're busy." Ayame asked, "The only time you come here to remember Naruto. Right?" Konohamaru nodded his head.
Ayame said, "My dad told me that one day that Naruto was about to eat his Ramen and he disappear in a smoke. Then when two ninjas came in and Naruto reappear on the same stool. That almost gave him a heart attack."
Iruka and Konohamaru said, "That's does sound like Naruto." They all four laugh.

Shikamaru is Konohamaru's aide found Konohamaru and said, "Here you are. You are more troublesome than Naruto himself. I'd never thought that My sensei's nephew would be even worse than the Knuckle-head ninja." Iruka said, "You got a point. I guess Konohamaru-sama took Naruto's mantle."


Yamato asked, "Hogake-sama where is Dajato? Ino wants to see him now." Konohamaru replied, "Where Naruto would be." Yamato said, "I'm losing my mind. I guess it's my old age now." Iruka said, "If you old that means I'm old too."

Dajato was in the training ground. Yamato said, "Here you are." Dajato Haruno, Nakumo Kurama, Nakuto , Nirata Hyuuga, Gurshina Uzumkai, Yanan Namikaze, Nemari, Narumei, Kuruto Yuuhi and Narin training. Now everybody has high standards to Naruto's kids.



Sarin has a crush on Dajato. Dajato has a crush on Sarin. They got married had a son Sasuto. Ino and Sai got married and had a daughter, Sino" married Chouji's and Ayame's son, Choujayame. Temari and Shikamaru's daughter, Shemaru married Kiba's and Isaribi's son, Kibaruto. Rock Lee and Tenten got married and had a daughter, Roxxi Lee.
Neji Hyuuga married Karui and they had a son that married Roxxi Lee. They had a daughter, Roji Hyuuga.
 

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Charpter 2
Ino's secret

Ino was sitting on the Bench where Sakura last saw her comrade Sasuke-kun before Sasuke left the village. Sasuto Haruno came up and asked, "What was my grandparents like? My parents told me that you were my grandmother's best friend? Is that right?" Ino said, "That's true but once we were also a rivals as well as friends." Sasuto had a confused looked on his face. Ino said, "You look like Sasuke-kun but you act like Naruto and you have Naruto's whiskers as well." Sasuto asked, "What's wrong Ino-sama?" Ino answered, "Sakura and I was rivals and Sasuke and Naruto was rivals. I'd wouldn't imagined that their kids would get married to each other. I want to tell you a secret on I know and Naruto knows."
Sasuto said, "Tell me!" Ino said, "This was before Naruto and Sakura got married."

Ino had a flash back:

One time Naruto walking by the bench there was Sakura sitting there like many times. Naruto asked, "Can I sit down next to you Sakura-chan?" Sakura replied, "Sure. We are teammates after all." with simile on her face. Sakura looked at Naruto. Naruto was so nervous that Sakura never seen him like this way at all. He usually was hyper and outgoing but today he was acting strange like he wanted to get something off of his chest. Sakura asked, "Do you want to asked me some thing Naruto?" Naruto nodded his head and gulp. Sakura notice that Naruto's cheeks turning pink. Naruto said, "You don't have any idea that how much I care for you Sakura-chan." Naruto took another gulped and said, "I Love you!" Sakura was shocked cause he came out and said it. Sakura said, "I knew you like me but I'd never thought that you would say it to my face like that. Sorry but I can't love you because." Sakura transform back to Ino. Naruto got upset. Naruto started to complain about it. Ino slapped Naruto to make him snap out of his mood and Ino said, "I'd feel a guilty that you wanted to confession to your crush but I ruined it for you. So I'd made dinner for you and Sakura." Naruto hugged Ino. Ino said, "Okay Naruto! Please I can't breath Naruto." Naruto asked, "Sorry about that but how would you do that?" Ino said, "Like you Sakura told me that she'd wanted me to be her best friend again." Naruto started to cried. Ino said, "Don't start crying on me Naruto." Naruto said, "Sorry." Ino said, "Show me what you have in your closet?"

So Naruto took Ino to his apartment. Ino asked, "Did anyone told you how to clean your apartment?" Naruto said, "Only Iruka-sensei, Kakashi-sensei and Sakura-chan but I'd can't find anytime to clean cause I'm so busy with training." Ino said, "You don't have any extra clothes!" Ino said, "I just got a Idea." Naruto asked, "What it's it?" Ino said, "Come with me to Kurenai-sensei's house."

So they went to Kurenai and Shikamaru answered the door. Shikamaru said, "Hey it's you Naruto and Ino." Ino asked, "Is Kurenai home?" Shikamaru said, "Yes she is. Kurenai-chan! Ino and Naruto wanted to talk to you." Kurenai asked, "How can I help you two?" Ino whispered, "I want to have Naruto's style but with Sakura's older colors Red and white. Where the black is on Naruto's shirt replace it with the white and where the orange replace it as black." Kurenai said, "I'll do it but Shino and Kiba grabbed Naruto and take him to the outfit room." So Shino and Kiba lift Naruto on their shoulders and took him to the room. Hinata, Shizune, Ayame, Tsume and Hana was there in a flash they all was measuring Naruto's body part but Naruto had a confused look on his face. Hinata was there as well. Kurenai said, "Split down Naruto to his undies." Hinata fainted cause she'd saw Naruto in his boxers. Naruto feels uncomfortable. Kiba and Shino was check on Hinata's condition. Naruto likes his new outfit. Ino said, "Now for you hair." Ino change his hairstyle to Sasuke's hairstyle.

Tsunade said, "I'd already set up your date Naruto." Naruto was shocked. Tsunade said, "Now Naruto transform into Black and orange outfit and your old hairstyle cause all of us females like to be surprise." All the females in the room agreed with Tsunade. Ino said, "I'd tell Sakura to meet you at Ichiraku Ramen but act like yourself." Tsunade said, "I'd know where Sakura wanted to spend her first date at. It has a Cherry Blossom Tree. I'll have a ANBU Ninja be there to summoned it for you." Ino said, "Ayame act like normal went Naruto and Sakura get to Ichiraku and also tell you father about this." Ayame said, "My father is always wonder how could he help Naruto. So he'd agreed to it as well."

So that afternoon Ino said, "Sakura!" Sakura said, "It's you Ino!" Ino said, "It's Naruto!" Sakura asked, "Did he over do it again?" Ino started to giggle a bit and said, "In a way yes!"
Ino dragged her to her room but Kurenai said, "You should wear the Orange top with black top with black skirt. " Sakura asked, "Why are you doing this to me?" Ino said, "Naruto has some big to say to you?" Sakura asked, "What are you talking about?" Ino said, "Don't worried about Hinata get in your way." Kurenai said, "The Hyuuga is prepare her to be the leader of the clan." Shizune said, "Naruto is waiting for you Sakura at Ichiraku Ramen. something about Sasuke!" Sakura went running out the door like a dart. The girls giggles a bit when Sakura was out of sight.

Sakura arrives at Ichiraku Ramen. Naruto said, "Maybe Kakashi is a girl cause he's always late like you girls are." with a big grin on his face. Sakura punched him and said, "Let's eat so you can tell me about Sasuke." Behind the Ichiraku is the Ninja that Tsunade picked. Right before Sakura arrived Naruto told the ANBU Ninja when Sakura said Sasuke-kun more then seven times that's your signal to summoned it. The ninja nodded his head.

Back inside of Ichiraku Ramen. Sakura asked, "What do you wanted to talk about Sasuke-kun?" In Naruto's mind said that's one. Sakura asked, "Naruto Are you listening to me?" Naruto said, "Sorry about that." Sakura asked the same question to Naruto six more times. At this point Sakura was so frustrated. Naruto asked, "Did I said that I wanted to talk about Sasuke." Sakura yelled, "Yes you did wanted to talk about SASUKE-KUN." Naruto was having a big grin on his face bigger than Sakura ever saw. The ninja behind the Ichiraku Ramen summoned the Landscape that Sakura wanted to her first real date to take place at. Sakura was shocked and turning around while her back was face Naruto. Naruto transform back to his new outfit and new hairstyle. Sakura turned around and was shocked to see Naruto in a different outfit with a different hairstyle. Naruto said, "Sit down I need to tell you something." Sakura sat across from Naruto at a picnic. Naruto whispered into Sakura's ear, "I'd love you so much that I'll died for you and your dreams. That's my other promise of a life-time." Sakura said, "Naruto-kun!" Naruto was shocked to her Kun after his name coming from Sakura's lips. That'd almost melt him. Sakura kissed him on his lips.
Sakura asked, "Naruto-kun would you be my boyfriend?" Naruto replied, "Sakura-Chan you already know my answered but Yes I love to be your boyfriend."

Flash back ended

Ino said, "That was Sakura's and Naruto's first kiss." Sasuto said, "That's how they started dating."

Chapter 3.
Ino's gift



Ino said, "Sasuto coming with me I want to give you something." Sasuto said, "Sure. I'm done with my training today." Ino drag him to her house. Ino told Sasuto to stay there at the her front door and Ino went to her bedroom looking for something. Meanwhile Ino's granddaughter, Choujuto. Choujuto she saw Sasuto and ran up to her grandmother's room and asked, "Why did you bring Sasuto-kun here for?" Ino answered, "I'd brought him here so that I'd can give him a gift that I'd gave his grandmother that she'd return it after she'd found out that I'd had crush on Sasuke." Chojuto said, "that's a close one." Ino said, "I'd might of failed to get Sasuke." Choujuto asked, "What was Sasuto-kun's grandparents were like?" Ino said, "Sasuke was the more skill ninja ever and was the last Survivor of Uchiha Clan. He was the most handsome guy. Naruto was a prankster." Choujuto asked, "Do you think that I'm beautiful?" Ino replied, "OF COUSRE YOU HAVE YAMANAKA BLOOD RUNING THOUGH YOU." Ino just figured that her granddaughter has a crush on Sasuto and said, "You love him don't cha?" Choujuto was shocked and nodded her head. Ino said, "Naruto-sama love Ichiraku Ramen almost as he'd love Sakura." Ino found what she'd was looking for and said, "I'd found it." Choujiuto said, "That's just a ribbon that's all." Ino yelled, "It was my and Sakura's friendship ribbon. I'd didn't have a chance to gave back to her." wrapped her tears off of her face. Ino said, "Take this to Sasuto." Choujuto said, "I'd can't!" Ino said, "Go and do it. He'll be grateful for it. That's how Naruto was. Anything some one did for him. He'd was so happy that he'll give that person a hugged."

After Choujuto left the room. Ino had a little flash back of Sakura, Sasuke and Naruto holding hands with similes on their faces expect for Sasuke of course. flash back ended. Ino mumbled to herself said, "I'd missed you guys. I'd promised that I'd would look after you kids Sakura. In a lifelong promise that what Naruto would say." The spirit of Sakura touched Ino and said, "He would. We both want your granddaughter to married our grandson okay. Remember that Naruto-kun and myself are sealed inside of all the Jinnuuriki' in our family. Also thank you for give me my ribbon back Ino." Naruto's spirit and said, "I'd agreed with Sakura-chan." Then those spirits fading away.

In Sasuto was still standing there. Choujuto said, "Here's the gift my Grandmother told you about." Inside of Sasuto's mind. Naruto, Sakura, Sasuke and Karin was telling Sasuto's inner self to asked Choujuto out on a date. The Inner Sasuto said, "Aright then!" Sasuto asked, "Choujuto.." Naruto hit Sasuto's inner self. Sasuto asked, "Choujuto-chan would you go out with me?" Choujuto said, "Sasuto-KUN I'd loved too." She'd jumped into Sasuto's arms.







Chapter 4
Ino's and Sakura's Promise

Sasuto and Choujuto got to Ayame said, "Hey what's my favorite Customer." She'd looked at her granddaughter and whispered, "I'd see you brought your crush with you this time." Choujuto said, "We are boyfriend and girlfriend now." Shikamaru was walking passed Ichiraku Ramen. He'd notice that Sasuto and Choujuto. Shikamaru asked, "Hey Sasuto can I join you?" Choujuto said, "Sure." Shikamaru whispered Choujuto's ear, "You have the Chouji's cheek markings. You got Ayame's body and her face. You got Ino's hairstyle but your hair color is Sai. You got the Ino's fashion sense." Choujuto said, "Thanks." Ayame whispered into Sasuto's ear, "She's a better cook than me."
Sasuto kissed Choujuto's forehead. She'd was shocked. Ayame and Shikamaru look in aww. So after they got done eating. Choujiuto and Sasuto left.


Now they was by the lake. Sasuto and Choujuto. Sasuto was sleeping and leaning against a tree. Choujuto kissed Sasuto. Sasuto was shocked. They went to Sasuto's house. They locked the door behind them. Then they started kissed each other on their lips.


Meanwhile back at Ino's house. She's was thinking to her self. We kept our promise. Ino had a flash back of Sakura and Ino made a promise that our grandkids will get married to each other. The shake hands in agreement. flash back ended. Ino mumbled to herself, "I'm ready to join you old friends."





Chapter 5
Sakura's and Hinata's secrets


Hanabi Hyuuga was walking down and looking at Naruto's face on the Hogake Monument. Yanan asked, "Hey what's up Hanabi-sama?" Hanabi replied, "I'd just found about the truth about the Pain's attacked."


flash back: (Hanabi was a young )
Hanabi was over heard that Hinata telling her father that Akatsuki just wants Naruto meet his father. Itachi said, "Naruto's family and my family are best friends to each other. " Pain said, "Itachi told us about Naruto's seal technique. Itachi saw Naruto's father. If you join us. Naruto will finally meet his father that Fourth Hogake." Zetsu said, "The Konoha's council members and the other ninjas didn't want us to tell him about his father." Hinata was shocked and sad to hear this and said, "That's awful." Hidan said, "That's why the villages put us in the bingo book." Itachi said, "I'd didn't killed my clan the Root did by the order of Danzou and Orochimaru himself. He'd fame me. I'd use a Illusion to make Sasuke believe that I'd killed our parents. But I'd had to do that cause he didn't know hatred." Sasori said, "A Girl I hate to waiting." Hinata asked, "Is Naruto-kun will be alright?" Konan said, "You have the Byakugan." Itachi said, "You can help Naruto-kun. Sasuke is after me and Naruto-kun is after Sasuke cause the accrues Sakura made Naruto promise to bring my little brother. " Kakuzu said, "I'm the bank teller of the Akatsuki." Deidara said, "When you join us. You'll spend more times with him." Konan said, "I'd need a girlfriend. These guys are rude and doing gross stuff in front of me. Please join us!" Hinata said, "I'll join only if Naruto doesn't get hurt." Kisame said, "Deal." Itachi said, "I'd help out with Naruto." Konan yelled towards a dark hallway, "Hey come out. She'd taking after you gals for sure.' Neji's Mother and Hinata's mother come out and said, "Welcome Hinata!" Itachi talking to Hinata about Naruto's family.
flash back ends

Nirata said, "Yanan-san. You have half sisters from the Akatsuki." Sasuto over heard Nirata and he said, "I'll help you find you sisters that's a promise of a life-long."

Meanwhile, Dajato Haruno's house he find out about his mother's dairy and read it. He'd opened it and to a middle of the book. The title of this page was the Waterfall of Truth.

The dairy reads:

When I was chasing Naruto-kun. He'd asked me to sit in the front of the waterfall and he'd said, "This part was my first step to control the Kyuubi but I'd figured that normal ninjas have hatred as well. So before I'd returned to Konoha. Konoha ninjas and all the villages must come here. Now Sakura-chan close your eyes and focus."

{In the mind of Sakura}
Sakura: Who are you?

Evil Sakura: I'm the real you

Sakura: No you are not.
Evil Sakura: I'm Real you that lies at the bottom of your heart. I'm your hatred. Sasuke-kun Sasuke-kun.

Sakura: stop it stop it.

Evil Sakura: What if Sasuke-kun didn't leave the village but Naruto did? Would you go after Naruto like you did for Sasuke-kun? You are selfish little girl are you?

Sakura: I'd don't what to hear it.

Evil Sakura: You still love Sasuke-kun don't cha?
Sakura: No I'd don't he'd tried to kill me without a thought. I'd love Naruto!
Evil Sakura: Don't make me laugh. That thing you called love towards annoying idiot is actually your guilt by not being there for him at all. You punched him and dare I said? What the heck I'll said it!
Sakura: Don't said please don't said it.
Evil Sakura: Sasuke-kun was the one who always provoke that annoying idiot.
Sakura: Stop called him that.
Evil Sakura: Why would I'd stop? You still called him idiot don't cha?
Sakura: (thinking she's right I'm sorry naruto)
Evil Sakura: How dare you not to care about that annoying idiot until you find out that he's a jinnuuriki and the Akatsuki was coming after him.
Sakura: Naruto told me that ever at his birth the Akatsuki was after him.
Evil Sakura: That's not true love! That's just feeling sad for the annoying Idiot!
Sakura: (giggles)
Evil Sakura: What's so funny?
Sakura: I'd gonna married that annoying idiot! You can't stop me.
Evil Sakura: Since Naruto became Konoha's hero. You have more competition even Hinata is aiming for Naruto's love but only one person probably won't go for him is your old friend no-pig!
Sakura: Don't worry I'd know Naruto loves me that's why
Evil Sakura: That's the girl that I'd like. Now show him you love him.
flash back ends

Sakura gets up and thinking to herself , "You probably have more worse. Then anyone in our village Naruto-kun! "
 

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Chapter 6
The kidnapers

Ino, Sasuto, Yamato and Sai are on a mission together. They heard rumors about how powerful these rogue ninjas are They proclaim themselves as the last survivors of the Whirlpool Country. meanwhile,
Few miles away eight hooded ninjas was attacking the 3 ninjas that has Craftsman Village ninjas' armor, Sky Country ninjas' flying gear, Snow Country ninjas' armor and Moon Country ninjas' armor cause those country are now ruled by a Empire.
The hooded ninjas are wearing Hunter ninja mask. Ino notice that their forehead protector headband had the same symbol of goodwill and friendship of the leaf village ninjas. Ino had a flash back that Sakura told her that Naruto told Sakura that the symbol of
goodwill and friendship was actually the Eddy village of the Whirlpool Country." Flash back ends.

Ino said, "Those guys are from the Whirlpool Country." Yamato said, "I'd guess Naruto couldn't kept his mouth shut. The only other survivors from there was actually the ones that destroyed it. The Eddy Village was known as the Village of Longevity as well as they are specialized in the sealing techniques. They are more faster the the yellow flash that taught Kakashi-senpai." Sasuto said, "That' could mean that they are my relatives. They mite could teach me how do to those seals." Yamato said, "Don't do it." Sasuto said, "My grandpa always want to meet his fellow clansmen." Sai said, "You are define are Naruto's grandson." Sasuto said, "Thanks!" Sai said, "That wasn't a compliment." Sai had a flash back of Naruto saying that same quote to him." flash back ends. Sai send ink mouse to Konoha

Back at Konoha and inside the Hogake's mansion. Konohamaru saw Sai's ink mouse. Konohamaru order Shikamaru to bring him Chouji, Kiba and Shino. Shikamaru mumbled, "What a drag." So he brings them to Hogake and Konohamaru said, "You Shikamaru are the captain of this 4 team until you reached Captain Yamato." They all agreed and they went on their way.

Back at in the forest by the border of spring country that was former know as Snow country.The hooded ninjas too notice of Sasuto's symbol on his back and kidnap him then they throw a smoke bomb to escape to their hideout. Chouji, Kiba and Shino with Shikamaru got there little be late. Kiba asked, "I'd thought Konohamaru-sama told us that Sasuto was with you guys?" Sai said, "He was until the hooded ninjas saw Eddy village symbol on his back that wasn't on a leaf village vest. They snatch him and exscape." Ino said, "We have to find him he's gonna to be my grandson in law! Shikamaru said, "Don't worry!"

They decide not to tell Naruto's kids and the grandkids as well about this Sasuto's kidnap. Then they asked for more back from Konoha. Neji, Tenten and Rock Lee came to help them. Shikamaru talk about the information that Konoha have on Uzumaki clan.

Mean while, In the Uzumkai Ninja's hide out. The Sasuto said, "let me go you scary cats!" The hooded and masked ninjas they took off their masked and took off their hooded cloak now. They said, "We saw you notice our village symbol on out masks and we knew that Uzumkai Kushina had a baby with the Fourth Hogake! We were the elite of the our clan but the evil "

They surprise that Uzumkai member has a Sharingan. So they kept him in a room. These Uzumkai took Naruto's Journal from Sasuto. They found out that he's related to Uchiha Sasuke, Namkaze Minato, Uzumkai Kushina and Naruto as well. They want to know more about Sasuto so they took Naruto's Journal away from him and start to read out loud to him.

One page got their attention was funny.

Naruto: So this is Sakura, mom....dad....
Mom: Ooooh she's quite a looker, honey!
Naruto: MOM!!! (Naruto is blushing)
Dad: Yeah, she might even surpass your mom!
Mom: WHAT DID YOU SAY MINATO DATTEBANE!!!!!!!! *slap punch*
Sakura: Uhh, I think I should say hi, but I think master's calling me...
Naruto: MOM!!! DAD!!! SAKURA-CHAAAAAAAAAAAN!!! DATTEBAYOOOOOO!!!!
Mom: DATTEBANE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Naruto: Mom, stop that! You made Sakura's face uglier!!
Sakura: WHAT DID YOU SAY NARUTO!!!!!! SHANNAROOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
Mom: DATTEBANE!!!!!!! *continues punching Minato*
Naruto: DATTEBAYOOOOOOOOoooo~ *gets punched by Sakura*
Sakura: SHANNAROOOOOOO!!!
Mom: DATTEBANE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Naruto: DATTEBAYOOOoooo......!!! *translates to 'Someone SAVE MEEE!!!'*
Sakura: SHANNARO!!!!!!
Minato: Honeeeyy....


At the dock Ino, Neji, Shikamaru, Rock Lee, Tenten, Neji and Chouji tried to stop them and they all died expect for Yamato and Sai. Sasuto returns to the village with his clones carried the dead bodies of the rest of the Nine Rookies with Rock Lee, Tenten and Neji.
 

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Chapter 7
Hokages' secrets

Kohomaru is retired like his grandfather did and So he picked Sasuto as the new Hogake. After few years Konohamaru died of old age. When Sasuto is the first Uchiha to become the Hogake cause this Uchiha had the Will of the Fire. Sasuto after looking thought the paper work. He find out that Itachi was chosen to be the next Hogake that was before He'd killed his clan. He find out that Madara still out there and he also find a picture of a 20 year old Kurenai and 10 year old Itachi. Itachi had a puppy crush on Kurenai Kurenai was babysitting Itachi and baby 5 years Sasuke. The picture shows Kurenai holding Sasuke. Itachi tricked her and kissed Kurenai on her lips. Kurenai was shocked and her and Itachi's cheeks turn pink. Kurenai got mad and pushed him away. She started yelled at Itachi for kissed her on her lips. Itachi is cried and She was tried to comforted him and told him not to do that. Kurenai kissed Itachi's cheek.
Sasuto find out that Rokushou Aoi is cousins to Touji Mizuki.


Then Sasuto finds out that Minato, Kushina, Jiraiya, Tsunade and Orochimaru was the ones that truly created Akatsuki was actually Fourth Hogake's elite squad. Orochimaru took charge of the Akatsuki after the Kyuubi until he'd meets Tobi, Pain, Kankuzu, Kisame, Sasori, Konan, Hidan and Zetsu. When Itachi came into the Akatsuki fight Orochimaru. Orochimaru lost to Itachi that's why he left the Organization. Sasuto also find out that the Real Madara saw Minato and Kushina sealed the Kyuubi inside their own son. The Real Madara said to himself, "I'd wish they had a daughter." Sasuto finds out that Itachi refuse to be the Hogake after Jiraiya.
Sasuto said, "So that's the truth about it." Sasuto mediated and talk to his previous Jinnuurikis.
Sasuke, Naruto, Kushina, Sarin and Dajato

Sasuke said, "Fight Dead last!"
Naruto said, "Bring it on! Scary cat!"
Kushina said, "You two knock it off."
Sarin said, "Daddy!"
Dajato said, "Daddy."
Sasuto said, "Mommy and Daddy!"

Sasuto standing in the middle. On the right side is Dajato behind him is Naruto and Sakura behind Naruto are Kushina and a spirit of Minato. On the left side of Sasuto. is Sarin behind her is Sasuke and Karin. Behind Sasuke are Itachi, Fugaku and Mikoto.
Sasuto told them that Uchiha finally made it to become a Hogake. Minato said, "That was my and Fugaku's plan. The masked man mess it up for us." All of his family lift him up. Above them were First Hogake, Second Hogake, Third Hogake, Fifth Hogake, Sixth Hogake, Seven Hogake, Eight Hogake and the Ninth Hogake.

The other villages don't want to mess with the first Uchiha as a Hogake. So they made sure that the All the rogue ninjas are out of the way. The Sasuto's only problem he has is the the Root from the inside and outside the village. Those are the biggest threats to a Uchiha Hogake.
 

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Chapter 8
Karui vs Sakura

While Sasuto was reading Sakura's dairy and he find out that when Nagato revive the village he also his Master Jiraiya and the leaf didn't tell Naruto at all. While Naruto was in recovering for his injuries after the battle with Madara and Sasuke. Sai and Sakura went on their own mission for only two were required. Sai notice ahead that Team Samui is ahead. Sai told Sakura that red hair girl was the one who punched Naruto.
Sakura squeezed her hands tight. Sakura said to herself, "Least I could do for Naruto is to pay this girl name Karui for punching my Naruto."

Karui asked, "You two again? What do you want now?"
Sakura asked, "You are Karui Right?"
Karui asked, "Why Do you have a problem crybaby?"
Sakura said, "I'll tell you one thing about Sasuke!"
Omoi said, "Okay tell us!"
Sakura said, "Only if Karui follows me!"
Omoi said, "You shouldn't do it."
Karui said, "Shut up! Omoi" punches Omoi like Sakura punches Naruto.
Sakura said, "So he's your Naruto right?"
Samui asked, "What do you mean by that?"
Sakura replied, "I'd punches Naruto like that but while I'd was starting to fall in love with the idiot. I'd see that you don't have a fourth member of your team. So some bad mush of happen to him or her or he or she'd left the village."
Karui startes to crying.
Samui said, "What nerve you got!"

Karui said, "Fine I'd hoped you are not like that idiot."
Sakura said, "Sai stay here. Samui and Omoi could you kept a I on him for me he's jutsu style is art base."

Karui said, "Let's go!"
Sakura grabs karui's hand they go into the forest.
After they enter the forest.
Sakura said, "Before you know who Naruto and Sasuke are to me. I'll tell you who I am."
Karui said, "Okay Spill it crybaby."
Sakura said, "I'm Haruno Sakura and the Pupil of Mistress Tsunade. That's right. I'd was trained by Fifth Hogake herself."
Karui said, "Okay then what about Naruto!"
Sakura replied, "That fool loves me. So much that he'll keep thinking of the promise he made to me when we were 12 years old. He never goes back on his words that's he ninja way. He's the son of the Fourth Hogake and he's Kushina's son as well. One day Naruto will become the Hogake."
Karui asked, "What about Sasuke?"
Sakura started to cried and answered, "He was my first crushed and Naruto's first brotherly bond he ever made. Sasuke killed his brother Itachi and Orochimaru."
Karui said, "Thanks! "
Sakura said, "There is some else. Before we enter the woods. You asked me if I had a problem right?"
Karui replied, "Yes I'd did. So what are you gonna do about it?"
Sakura said, "I'd just have one."
Sakura punches her easy at first.
Karui asked, "That's all you got Crybaby?"
Sakura punched her ever hard.
Sakura said, "This one for punching my future Husbands."
Sakura punched her back to her teammates.
Omoi was shocked.
Samui said to herself, "She's strong."
Sakura said, "Naruto master the Sage Techinque like his Master Jiraiya. He' could've killed you in one second. Next time you hit him. I'll personality make sure that you are dead Karui."
Sai said, "Let's go back to the village Sakura."
Sakura said, "If you tell the truth what happen here. I'd will mess you hands up so that you couldn't be call a artist. That's reminds me. I'd own you this."
Sakura punched Sai's belly and said, "That was for tell the truth to Naruto after I'd told you don't do it."
Sai said, "I'm sorry about that."

Sakura put Sai on her back. and head back to the their village.
 

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Chapter 9
Karui's Apology

Sasuto searching his family house and find Naruto's Hogake's jacket and Minato's Hogake's jackets. Sasuto put Naruto's hogake jacket on. Something fell out of that jacket's pocket. It was a letter to Naruto from Karui. The letter reads:

Dear Naruto-sama,

This is my apology letter for hitting you. Sakura told me everything you went throu in your life. I'm sorry for that. Now I'm just want us to be friends. If there is anything the Cloud ninjas could do by the way I'm Jounin now. I also hoped that one day I'll be come Raikage some day.
I'd would've said that you need to need me for what I'd have done to you but I'd think Sakura did it for you.

sign your new friend,
Karui.

That was the end of the letter.

Sasuto find out that Naruto visited Nagato's grave with Konan. "Naruto say thanks to you my fellow pupil. I'd meet my Dad for the first time!"
Konan said, "I'd see the Fourth Hogake reseal it inside you once more." Naruto just nodded his head.

So Sasuto look at the Naruto's missions data right before he became Hogake. Samui came to the Leaf Village to asked for help with a Haunted village. Kakashi picked Sakura and Naruto. Sasuto also find that Hogake's job is to face the hatred of this world. Sasuto said, "I'm a grandson of the Naruto and Sasuke." I have Sharingan and the Will of the Fire. Wait wants this Blast from the Past Modern from amnesia from Beasts no jutsu? Naruto couldn't kept it in tack without the First's necklace? No I'd know I have to do now. Denu-sama give all of Minato's decendants with his ability to transfer his eyes and the Akatsuki's powers to me. So now that Sorry this world is full of hatred and with all my powers. I'm here to stay but I'd transfer it back. The only way to break this one I'm going called it the Moon's Blast from the Past Modern from amnesia from Beasts no jutsu! The End of the Ninja system. All of the people that died came back to life expect those that died in the modern world.
 

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Chapter 10
The Return of the University of Konoha.


While the Tobi was about to grab Naruto's necklace. Right at the moment Sasuke save it from breaking.
Naruto was relief. Sakura asked, "What are you doing here?" Itachi said, "It's you my foolish brother. you never will measure up to Naruto."
Sasuke asked, "Why are you after him brother?" Sakura said, "This guy that has Naruto on his shoulder is Sasuke's older brother?" Itachi said, "Akatsuki is here only for one propose. We'd just want to talk to Naruto about his family."

Zetsu drove up and picked up his fellow Akatsuki member with Naruto. After Itachi knocked Naruto out cold. At the Red Cloud bar.
Zetsu drove up and park in the Akatsuki. The Itachi splash some water on Naruto's face trying to wake up him. So Tobi pulled the chair underneath him. That cause Naruto wake up. Nagato said, "I'm the Leader of this Akatsuki gang but you can called me Pain. We want you to join us. Unlike your friends at that stupid UK. We are made up only of the last members of our family like you are. So I'd hoped you will join us." Tobi said, "It's finally time for me to unmasked myself. I'm Madara." Zetsu said, "I'm Zetsu." Orochimaru said, "I'm Orochimaru." Sasori said, "I'm Sasori." Deidara said, "I'm Deidara." Kisame said, "I'm Kisame." Kakuzu said, "I'm Kakuzu." Hidan said, "I'm Hidan." Konan said, "I'm Konan the only female in this group. Your Guardian Jiraiya was Pains and mine as well." Pain said, "Cause that reason that we wanted you to join us. "


Back at the mall. Sakura asked, "Sasuke to save Naruto." Sasuke said, "Shut up Sakura. I'd was going save him cause my brother killed my family expect for me." Sakura said, "I'd didn't know! Sorry about it." Sasuke said, "That's why Naruto and myself are Best Friends and rival. Our Families we admired each other and we always make them into rivals. Don't tell him that I'd said that. If you do tell him that. I'll just deny it."

Bat the the Akatsuki's hide out. Madara said, "Your parents Naruto was the best people. They died protecting you. I'd was there and trying to some those Legends Beast! That's why we'd kept on pushed you to join us cause we have a feeling that they will becoming after you. "
Naruto asked, "How can I help you?" Madara said, "The only thing we need is nine more girls. You Naruto get two girls of your choosing to yourself. " Nagato said, "If you become one us you will become the Leader of this group!" Naruto said, "Let's see what that jacket looks on me first!" with a smile on his face.

Back at the UK. Sasuke knew that Kakashi was dog breeder so he asked, "Kakashi can I'd borrow one of you Hounds?" Kakashi asked, "Why?"
Sasuke replied, "Naruto been Naruto-naped by Akatsuki." Kakashi said, "This is big then we have to tell Tsunade!" Kakashi ran into Tsunade's office.
 

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Chapter 11
Naruto'd joined


Tsunade was in the office doing paper work. When Kakashi came blasting in. Tsunade asked, "What's wrong?" Kakashi answered, "Sasuke told me that Naruto be Naruto-naped by the Akatsuki!" Tsunade said, "We have to go now called the 911!" 911 Operator asked, "One of my students got kidnaped! He has no parents." 911 Operator asked, "Who took and who are you talking about?" Tsunade replied, "We are talking about Uzumkai Naruto and he got kidnaped by the Akatsuki." 911 Operator said, "AKATSUKI! I'd get on it right now."

The police came to the Caption Yamato asked, "Do you have a picture of him?" Tsunade gave him a picture of Naruto. The Captain Yamato said, "He's the son of the of fourth Headmaster of this school." Tsunade said, "Yes! He is. That's why this we called you. Naruto's father was the most genius of them all in his generation. Even myself didn't want to go up against him."

Back to Sasuke. Sasuke was worry about Naruto so he was running and tripped over Kabuto's foot. Orochimaru asked, "Kabuto why are you being mean to this wonderful boy here?" while Orochimaru was dusty the dirt off of his clothes. Kabuto replied, "I'm sorry Orochimaru." Orochimaru said, "That's okay by the way Sasuke! I know where Naruto-kun and the Akatsuki's hide outs are located. If you will join us that is."

Kabuto said, "You better hurry up and decided cause Naruto mite be dead by now." with a smirk on his face. Orchimaru said, "The only way to be your brother and the Akatsuki is to join with us." Kabuto signal some one to test out Sasuke's skills. Kimimaro came out and attacked Sasuke. Sasuke defeated him with one punched. The Kimimaro said, "Welcome to our team."


Back where the Akatsuki are at. Naruto just said, "Sure!" Madara said, "The only thing you have to do is find this guy name Kimimaro and bring him here. Like us he's the only survivor of his clan." Naruto asked, "Where is this person?" Itachi replied, "He's with Orochimaru that betrayed us. Orochimaru's goal is to get Sasuke to join his gang." So they all head out to find this Kimimaro to join them.

A Hour or so passed. Naruto and Sasuke bumped into each other but this time. Stand beside or behind Sasuke was Kimimaro, Kabuto, Guren, Karin, Suigetsu, Juugo, Temari, Kankurou and Gaara. Behind Naruto was Konan, Pain, Kisame, Hidan, Itachi, Kakuzu, Deidara, Sasori and Madara. Naruto said, "I'd joined them." Sasuke punched him. That lit the gang war between this two gangs.

When Naruto and Sasuke returned to the school. Their friends noticed that this two are not friends anymore. Every time they see each other they want to killed each other. Sasuke grabbed Naruto's necklace and threw it on the ground and broken Naruto's necklace. A piece of the necklaces made Sasuke bleed. The other piece of the necklace made Naruto bleed as well.





Chapter 12
Adults feel Guilty

Naruto in his sage mode facing Sasuke and Naruto is staining on Gamabunta. Sasuke is standing on Itachi's Hawk. Naruto notices Kabuto and he'd could feel his parents chakra coming from two coffins that Kabuto is hiding it. Naruto said, "Kabuto bring my parents back!" Sasuke looked at Kabuto with confused look in his eyes. Naruto said, "That's the least you could do. They were the ones that save you from being killed in a war!" Kabuto said, "You are more stronger than the Legendary Sannin. Yes they did save me like they saved this Leaf Village." Kabuto used the Edo Tensei jutsu. Kabuto said, "Let's see whose the strongest between Naruto vs his parents!" Sasuke said, "Kabuto you should show us dead last's mother. I'd want to see her first. "

Kushina came out of the coffin. Kushina asked, "Naruto whose this guy behind me my son?" Naruto replied, "He's the boy you and my father saved before…" Kushina said, "He's the one. That means he's name is Kabuto and it looks like he's took up Orochimaru's mantle." Sakura and Hinata was getting already to protect Hyuuga Clan stopped Hinata doing so reckless like she did before. Sakura told Yamato her body is moving on it's own. Yamato used his wood element to stopped Sakura's body getting in the way of Naruto and Sasuke. When Sakura saw Kushina. Kushina went to talk to Sakura and whispered, "Made my dying wish come true and married my son he'd truly loves you." Sasuke said, "Stop fooling around we all want to see who is Naruto's father is?" The coffin that reads the Fourth Hogake. Sasuke was shocked to see this. Kakashi was crying to see his sensei moving again. Minato said, "I'd knew some one would do this but put me up against my own son? That's cruel"

Minato thinking to himself but Now I'd could teach him my technique now. Kushina told the villages that this man unleashed the Kyuubi to killed the villages and when Naruto was born he was the one that Madara took hostage cause I'd was the Jinnuuriki before Naruto. We sealed our chakra inside Naruto to help him control the Kyuubi. The Fourth and myself see what Naruto saw. Our dying wish was for you guys to treat Naruto as the Hero and container of a beast." All the villagers and the other ninjas felt guilty. Naruto said, "I'd used to wanted to destroy this village myself cause you guys hatred me with your eyes. When I'd meet Sasuke and Iruka. They were the ones that changed my hatred into loving for this village. That's why I'll never give up on Sasuke or any of your friends."

Kushina asked, "Naruto who are you facing he'd kinda look familiar to me." Naruto replied, "Mikoto's second child." Minato said, "The Masked man he's the cost of both of Uchiha and Uzumkai clans problem. He's the truth Sasuke. I'd choose Itachi could been the seventh Hogake after Kakashi but he'd find out about the Uchiha Revolted and deicide himself that he'd wanted you Sasuke to be the first Uchiha as the Hogake. He'd also wanted you and Naruto to be the first best friends that untiled Uzumkai Clan and a Uchiha Clan. I'd even taught him my yellow flash technique like I'd taught Kakashi."
 

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Family Moments

Kushina said, "Sorry our son. I'd have to kill you cause my body isn't in my control at all." Kabuto said, "How ironic it is this. Sasuke won't be the one who kills Naruto. The ones who'll gonna killed Naruto is the ones who gave birth to him."with a evil laugher and then he'd point than all sudden barricade was formed around Naruto, Minato and Kushina. Kakashi summoned that barrier. Naruto, Fourth Hogake and Kushina sent their clones to act like they are fighting against each other. Minato said, "Your mother and myself taught Kakashi this barrier technique just in case of this happen." Kushina said, "Not even Sharingan, Byakugan or the Rinnegan can't see what's going on in this barrier. This barrier cuts the control of Kabuto's on us. So we could teach you our techniques ourselves."

So they trained their sons while the other people outside their view is that they only see flashes of the light there and everywhere. They even heard the moans and groan of them. Sakura and Hinata started to cry. Kurenai wrap the tears off of Hinata's face. Sakura said to herself, "I'm sorry Naruto. I'd should've love you from the begin." Ino wrap the tears from Sakrua's face. Madara saw Hinata and wants some one with a Byakugan in the Akatsuki. So he tries to kidnaped Hinata but Neji got in the way. Madara accidentally kidnaped Neji. Tenten is crying and Hinata is worry about her cousin.

Back inside the barrier. Naruto's parents warned him went the barrier is removed they are back in control by Kabuto. Naruto put a contact sealed on both of his parents when they hugged him. Suddenly the barrier wasn't there at all. Naruto acted death. Naruto's parents carrying him and crying. All the villages and Naruto's friends started about to cry. Naruto punched Kabuto's light's out. Naruto said, "Sasuke I'd let you get to killed Orochimaru once me. I'd just sealed the white Snake from not coming back." Sasuke jumps down and killed Kabuto one swoop. Sakura notice that he Madara came back and said, "I'd got the wrong Hyuuga member." Sasuke and Naruto smile at each other. Sakura notice this sneak grin of Naruto's but she'd never saw it on Sasuke's face at all. Naruto send a frog to whispered something to Sakura. Sakura motion to Yamato to come near her and she'd said Naruto and Sasuke had a plan but they needed me for it. Naruto said, "Sasuke You going down right now." Sasuke said, "You always will be the Dead Last to me. Scary Cat!" Naruto's clone pick up Sakura and Sasuke show Sakura what happen between Naruto vs Gaara. Sasuke said, "Sakura I'd want to show you what truly happen. When we first came Team 7." Naruto's clone disappeared. Sakura starting crying and asked, "Naruto-kun." Naruto with a shocked look on his face and interrupted by saying, "That's the first time you called m Naruto-kun." Sakura asked, "Naruto-kun do you know why I'd called you a Idiot for?" Naruto shake his head in a way that says that he'd doesn't know. Sakura said, "Actually I'd was talking about myself cause I'd noticing that I'd be falling in love with you." Naruto said, "It's alright. The reason I'd said that I'd hate people that lies to themselves. Was cause I'd thought that a Jinnuuriki." Sakura said, "I'd understand now that you didn't reject me." Naruto said, "Besides I'd didn't know how to be a father figure." Sakura interrupted by asking, "Naruto will you marry me?"Naruto had the biggest grin he ever had on his face and said, "I'd thought that was prose to be my line Sakura-chan?" Naruto's friends started laughed. Naruto said, "Anyway you know my answered. If you don't know. I'd loved to married you." with a big smirk on his face. Sakura jumped for joy and hugged and kissed Naruto on his lips. Naruto told his fellow ninjas to guard the barrier that Kakashi will recreated trapping Madara, Sasuke, Naruto and Sakura inside the barrier.





Chater 14.
Sasuke's betrayal

In the barrier. Sasuke cut Sakura and Naruto's up a bit. Madara said, "Finished her but leave Naruto partly alive." Sasuke said, "First I'd wanted to play with my old comrades first." Every time Sasuke made contact with Sakura and Naruto bleed. He was also whispered to Sakura about Naruto's and his plan to get rid of this masked man for good. Sakura whispered, "How can I help?" while screaming in pain.

Naruto Whispered, "It's time for our plan to be put in action." Sakura and Naruto tries to hit Sasuke in the back but they both missed. Sasuke said, "I'd never fought Sakura before but I'd fought Naruto many of times." Naruto went into the sage of the six path mode.

Sakura was shocked but Sakura noticed that Zetsu was trying to attacked her but punched him in half. while Sasuke enter the smoke that Naruto threw a smoke bomb. In the smoke Sasuke transformed into Naruto and Naruto transformed into Sasuke. Naruto was disguise as Sasuke came out and grabbed Madara. The real Sasuke was disguise as Naruto used Naruto's rasen shuriken justu in one hand and the other hand has the Chidori hit Madara that caused the masked off of his face. It reveals it wasn't a Uchiha or Uzumkai or a Senju member at all. It was Sakura's grandpa himself.

Sakura asked, "Why Grandpa?" Naruto use the chain that Kushina showed him in the dark barrier to hold down Madara aka Sakura's great great grandpa. Naruto said, "I'll seal him away for you." Sasuke said, "You could sealed him inside Zetsu. After that I'll killed him myself." Naruto looked at Sakura's parents. They agreed to it by nodding their heads but with tears in the ears. Sakura asked, "Sasuke-kun let me. Do the finally blow?" Sasuke said, "Only if you and the other girls agreed to not fellow me around like you girls did in the Academy!"

All of the girls agreed to it. So Naruto sealed Sakura's great great grandpa inside Zetsu. Zetsu couldn't handled it. Sakura did the finally blow after Sasuke tired him out by wrestle him down to the ground. Sasuke fell down at Naruto's and Sakura's feet. Sasuke said, "I'd over used my sharingan." Naruto said, "Let's go home. Just right before Naurto to pick up Sasuke. Sasuke said, "Wait." Sasuke summoned Itachi's coffin and Sasuke said, "First take my brother home first then you could take me back home to Konoha." The barrier disappears. The ANBU oops took care of Itachi's body.

All the ninjas go back to their own hidden villages. In the Konoha Sasuke said, "I'd done being a ninja now." Tsunade over heard it. Tsunade asked, "I'd could sealed the Sharingan if you want me to?" Shizune said, "I'll cost your bloodline to no long have the sharingan any more." Sasuke saw Hinata crying cause she'd won't be Naruto's wife. Sasuke got on his left knee and asked, "Hinata-chan would you revive my clan with me?" All the girls was but Hinata was shocked the most to heard it. Hiashi was shocked as well.

Sasuke asked, "Hiashi-sama could I'd married your daughter Hinata?" Hiashi was thinking and asked, "What's in it for the Hyuuga Clan?" Sasuke answered, "If you let me married Hinata. I'll allow the Hyuuga Clan to mark me with the same mark like Neji has and the Fifth Hogake would also help you with the technique as well." Hiashi and Sasuke shook hands in agreement. After Sasuke went through the operation. Sasuke was the best man at Naruto and Sakura's wedding. Naruto was the best man at Sasuke's and Hinata's wedding. After that Kakashi was died of old age. Tsunade retired and chosen Naruto as the next Hogake.
 

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Naruto's Mandatory

Naruto was sleeping. In his dream , First Hogake, Second Hogake, Kushina, Kakashi, Tsunade, Minato, Jiraiya, Thrid Hogake, Nagato, All the previous Kages from the villages with Naruto sitting at a round table. Minato and Kushina said, "We are proud of you son." Naurto have grin on his face. Naruto asked, "What should I do with the sense the hatred?" Kushina replied, "How about making the ninjas go to face their hatred at the waterfall of truth?" So they all decide that should be a Mandatory deal and the last step to become the Hogake. So they all made a mark that simples all of them in one mark. Naruto woke up and head straight to the Hogake's office.

Naruto was trying to figure out what form to make a law for the Mandatory to become Hogake. Naruto shouted, "Shizune-sama! Where is the Mandatory forms at?" Shizune answered, "Here you are." while she'd gave him the Mandatory forms but there are none about making the Ninjas to face their hatred. Naruto said, "I'd want to asked Raikage to have the permission to use the Waterfall of Truth. A true ninja have to face hatred in themselves before facing the world's hatred. That's the truth. That how from now on that will be a requirement to become a Kage candidate after my generation dies out." then he'd uses the Kages stamp jutsu to show Raikage that he means business.

At the Cloud Raikage's office. The Mandatory form from Hogake just proof infront of him. Raikage said, "He's a tough booger. That's how Naruto-sama works. I'd see." Raikage thinking to himself ,"Myself never went to face my hatred. So if Naruto and my brother could do it. I'd must tried myself." Raikage gulped and then he went to the island. He was there for a while. After the while was up. He went back to agreed to Mandatory form.

The form poof in front of Naruto that cause him tip his chair backwards. Sakura heard it and ran to it and blust in and asked, "Hubby are you okay?" Naruto replied, "I'm sorry to worried you like that but this form poof in front of me that just took me by surprises that's all." Sakura said, "I'd have a surprised for you!" Naruto asked, "What is it?" Sakura whispered, "I'm having your baby." When Naruto heard that he'd wet himself and fainted. Sakura shook his body to wake him up. It finally worked. So Sasuke asked, "What do you wanted to named our Son or Daughter?" Then she'd said, "I'm not sure if is a girl or a boy yet." Naruto thinking about it and said, "If it's a Girl we should name her, Sasukura but if it's a Boy we should named him, Sakuke." Sakura said, "I'd have to think about it."

After Sakura left the Hogake's office. Sasuke came in and said, "I'd over heard Sakura talking to Ino about the dead last and the annoying girl having a baby." Naruto asked, "If anything happens to me or Sakura in the future. I'd wanted you to take care of her or him. I'd also we have a question for you. If that's okay with you?" Naruto was getting nervous about asking this question but Sasuke asked, "What is your question?" Naruto asked, "If my child happens to be a girl. I'd would named her Sasusaku but if my Sakusasu" Sasuke replied, "Only if you will allow me named my kids Naruhina and Hinanaru!" Naruto said, "Deal." they bumped first like the old days.

Naruto went to Shikau wanted to asked him about how should he be a father figure sense he'd had no role model when he was a kid. At the same time. Shikamaru, Sakura, Temari, Tenten, Ino and Hinata reached Kurenai's house. Sakura went into labor. Kurenai yelled, "Shikamaru! Take care of Hiruzen" Shikamaru said, "Okay." Then Kurenai kissed him on his lips. That surprised Shikamaru, Sakura, Temari, Tenten, Ino and Hinata. After Kurenai, Temari, Tenten, Ino and Hinata took Sakura to the hospital. Ino meet up with Chouji. Hinata went back to Hyuuga training ground. Sasuke was watching her training against Neji. When Kurenai returned to her house and she'd forgotten that Shikamaru was there watching her and Asuma's baby. Shikamaru was show the kid how to relax outside. Kurenai took off her clothes to take a shower. Shikamaru had to use the bathroom. When Shikamaru was sitting on the toilet. Kurenai came out of the shower. They both were surprise cause Kurenai caught Shikamaru when he had his pants down and Shikamaru see what Kurenai look like without any clothes on. Kurenai quickly put a towel around her waist. Kurenai said, "I'd forgot that you were watching' my kid." Shikamaru looked away and replied, "No problem. It isn't like when I was baby-sitting Konohamaru." Kurenai and Shikamaru smile. Then Kurenai said, "Well…". Shikamaru's body just moved on it's own and kissed Kurenai on her lips. That cause her to drop her towel around her waist. Then Kurenai leaded him to her bedroom and took his clothes off. Hiruzen came in and sees his sensei with his mother in bed together and cuddling up against each other. Kurenai cover her chest with the covers and yelled, "Get out of my room." Hiruzen yelled, "Why are you betraying daddy for?" and Hiruzen darted out the door. Shikamaru got out of bed and put his clothes back on and said, "I'd have to go to get some mission from Hogake." Kurenai had a worried look on her face. Shikamaru said, "Don't worried about it. I'll let him cool off first then I'd talk to him about it."

Shizune dragging Naruto to the hospital to be there for Sakura before she'd gives birth. On the way. Sasuke said, "You are going to be a Father." Naruto was kinda nervous cause his parents died the same day as he was born. Sasuke said, "Well Well the dead last scary cat is really of afraid of some-thing. I'll be." Shizune said, "Come on!" When Shizune and Naruto got to the hospital. Naruto asked, "What's going why are you dragging me to the hospital? Please don't tell me is my check up again." Shizune yelled, "Sakura is about to give birth to…." Naruto interrupted by saying, "Why are we standing around for?" Naruto'd pick up Shizune and rush towards the hospital. Sasuke and Hinata follow Naruto and Shizune. Sakura said, "You are late. Kakashi Sensei." Naruto yelled, "I'm not always lated like he was." Kaori said, "Congrats you have 12 babies." Sakura and Naruto fainted at the same time. Hinata started to fainted but Sasuke caught her before she'd hit the ground. Sasuke slapped Naruto across the face to wake him up after he kissed Sakura's forehead that cause her to wake her up. Sasuke said, "You to beat Uchiha and Hyuuga record. Hinata and me had ten babies."


Hiruzen was starting to get hungry. Naruto was near by and heard the little Hiruzen's stomach rumbling. Naurto feels something was off with him. So Naruto treated him to ramen. At the Ichiraku Ramen Naruto asked, "What's wrong?" Teuchi said, "Hey Naruto. What have you been up too lately?" Ayame said, "Father he'd just join your circle." Teuchi asked, "Do you mean? This knuckle-head ninja is a father now?" Naruto had a biggest grin on his face and nodded his head while eating. Teuchi asked, "Who is your wife?" Hiruzen said, "Hogake-sama's wife is Sakura-sama." Teuchi said, "Your dream girl huh!" Ayame asked, "Did you guys have one or two how many babies did you two have?" Naruto after he got done eating and said, "Sakura-chan and me had 12 babies." That cause Teuchi and Ayame fainted and drop their dishes. Few seconds later they got back up but the only thing they found was the money and empty bowl.

Hiruzen and Naruto bumped into Shikamaru. Shikamaru said, "There you are. Your mother was looking all over for ay. She's crying right now." Naruto asked, "What happened." Shikamaru said, "Well Naruto-sama. Little Hiruzen saw me with.. uh.." Hiruzen interrupted by yelling, "I'd caught Shikamaru-sensei sleeping with my mommy." Naruto winked at Shikamaru and said, "Hiruzen-san! Listern to me. Shikamaru-sama is just like your daddy! Your daddy trusted Shikamaru with you." Then Hiruzen hugged Naruto. Shikamaru bumped fist. Shikamaru said, "Thanks Naruto! You better be head back right?" Naruto said, "I'd almost forgotten that we need to named our 6 boys and 6 girls." Naruto enter and Sakura said, "What should we name our boys first?"
 

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Time travel Part 1

Sasuke and Hinata with their kids and Neji to kept a short leashed on Sasuke while they were walking around outside the gate. Sasuke felt some one is coming. Neji and Hinata looked with their byakugans. They only notice a silhouette. That they never saw but they knew is wasn't female silhouette. So this silhouette got in the trees next to the Hogake's mansion. Later that night Shizune said to herself"Naruto-sama would be the only Hogake doesn't know how to clean up!" when she'd started to giggled. All sudden the silhouette of a man grabbed her from behind and said, "Where is my foolish nephew?" Shizune asked, "You in the heck are you?" This man said, "After your uncle died. I'd got married to Fifth Hogake. She's was my princess" in a romantic tone voice. Shizune said, "You only could be the Lone Wolf sticks and you are here for Naruto-sama?" The Lone Wolf Sticks replied, "Tsunade and myself got married before you joined her Shizune-san but I'd couldn't share that with anybody not even my family members. The only ones who knew was Third and Danzou. We had a two babies together." Shizune said, "Can I see your babies?" Lone Wolf Sticks motion to the Anbu ninja and a Root ninja.

Meanwhile Sakura, Tsunade and Ino just how Naruto is doing as Hogake. Tsunade asked, "How's the knuckle-head husband of yours doing as Hogake?" Sakura replied, "That only thing he hates of becoming the Hogake is the paperwork." Ino said, "He'd never passed a paper test at all." Tsunade said, "I'd just felt some thing! that. I'd have do go to see whats going on in the Hogake's office." Sakura and Ino said, "We'll come too." By the time they got there they notice the Sasuke, Hinata, Neji with their kids. They all are staring at this man that have Shizune in a hostage hold and they saw the other to ninjas with them.

Back inside the Hogake's office. Denu said, "Meet Fifth Hogake's twins." The Anbu and Root ninja removed their masks. The Anbu Ninja is a female have the same hairstyle as Fifth but her hair color is darkish brown but her face looks like Fourth's face but one whisker on her left cheek. The Root ninja The Root ninja have the same hairstyle as Tsuande's old boyfriend's name Dan but it was Tsunade's hair color. Denu looked towards the window and said in a romantic voice, "Come on down my lovely princess Tsunade-chan." Sakura, Ino, Sasuke, Hinata and Neji was shocked cause they never heard some one called the Fifth Hogake chan before. Tsunade rushed in follow by the Sakura, Ino, Sasuke, Hinata and Neji. Tsunade hugged Denu. Denu said, "I'd knew when you became the Fifth Hogake. You'll find out that you and me had two kids." Denu point to the Anbu ninja and Root ninja.

Tsunade said, "I'd was shocked!" Naruto heard some noise from Hogake's office so he'd busted and notices the Denu still have Shizune in a Hostage hold. Naruto yelled, "Let go of Shizune-sama now! Or you'll dead!" Denu said, "I'd love to see what master Jiraiya, Yamato and Kakashi taught you so far first hand." Denu stick his tongue at him that made Naruto more angry and they both head up on the roof. Denu said, "You never face me kind by the way Naruto-sama. My clan was the one who destroy the Whirlpool Country." Naruto and Denu started to fight. Right at the point of Naruto's final blow. Denu said, "I'm your Step-adoted!" That frozen him in his tracks. Tsunade yelled, "He's awesome my husband." Sakura, Ino, Sasuke, Hinata and Neji was shocked once again.

Denu told him them about he's a time travel but he was born in the same decade as Jiraiya, Tsunade and Orochimaru. He's show them his belt of time travel. Sakura had a good Idea when she saw the belt and think to herself that she'd could change the past. I'll tell my younger-self to not be Sasuke-obsessed girl. After Denu got done tell his tales of mission. That night Sakura said to her self I'm going steal the time travel belt from the Fifth's Hogake's house. The only thing I'll make sure that I will stop my younger-self before I'd made Naruto promise me to bring back Sasuke. That was my biggest mistake ever. I'll have to take a picture of my family with Naruto as my husband and our kids to show my younger-self. I'll tell her Naruto will become strong.

Few Hours later. Sakura put on the robbing. She'd grabbed the belt and took back to her house. She'd locked the door behind her and closed the blind to the windows. She was trying to figuring out how the belt works. A time wrap appeared behind her. Sasuke hear her screaming so him and Neji to see what's have happen they knock down the Sakura's bedroom's door and got suck into the wrap time as well like Sakura did. Sasuke and Neji few moments later they figure out that they we're time travel. Sasuke said to himself I'd better get the belt from Sakura and stop Itachi before he'd killed my clan but I'll get my Sharingan user Sasuke before I'd killed Itachi. Neji said, "We have to see what Sakura is up to." Sasuke said, "I'll go but we have to kept our distant from her." Neji said, "Yeah she'd has the strength of Fifth Hogake herself." They notice seeing 12 year old Naruto agreed starting to cry but when she felt the tears coming on she'd hided behind the tree. She transform jutsu into a Jounin. Then she notice Naruto sitting on the water tower. The 30 year old year Sakura noticed that her 12 year old self was coming to the bench. Then the 30 year old Sakura grabbed her younger-self. In a flash both Sakura was in Sakura's room with the pictures of Sasuke with the lipstick lips on those pictures. The younger Sakura asked, "How do you have a key to my house you stalker."

The Older Sakura said, "I'm you from the future."Then the Older Sakura tare down those Sasuke's posters. The younger Sakura asked, "What are you doing do you still love Sasuke." The older Sakura said, "I'd still love him but just as a friend." The younger Sakura was shocked to heard this and asked, "Who do you love now?" The older Sakura said, "You won't believe me so here's a picture of your future family." The Older Sakura gave the picture of her with 30 year-old Hogake Naruto in his Kyuubi and Sage mode with their 12 kids. The Older Sakura also said, "You better be nice to Naruto he'd have more rough ninjas sense he was born." The younger Sakura said, "You are lying." The older Sakura punched her younger self and said, "The only mistake I'd made in my life and your future life was making Naruto-kun promise me to bring Sasuke back." Sakura said, "Sasuke I'd know you and Neji was following me coming here." The 30 year old Sasuke and Neji appeared. Sakura looks at Sasuke with he's a criminal eyes.

The younger Sakura was scary to death. The older Sasuke tries to killed the younger Sakura but the older Sakura got in his way. The younger Sakura screamed so loud that the Third Hogake was near by with Konohamaru. Ebisu was with him. Neji and Sasuke use a barrier jutsu to blocked the windows the the floor. The older Sasuke pushed the wounded older Sakura to the aside and grabbed the younger Sakura by the neck. He'd said, "I'd only love one girl in the academy and her name is Hinata." Then the older Sasuke slapped the younger Sakura. The younger Sakura still won't believe them. Then Older Sakura said, "Fine I'll show you how rough Naurto hasn't it." She'd tired up the Neji, Sasuke, Herself and her younger-self as well.

The time travel back at when Fourth Hogake said, "Uchiha Madara!" Sasuke said to himself, "This was the Uchiha's problem the fourth Hogake mention."
Madara tried to run away but older Sasuke killed him. Madara asked, "Who are you?" The older Sasuke said, "I'm Sasuke Uchiha from the future that you ruined!"
 

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time travel part 2


The older Sakura showing younger Sakura by pointing at the Fourth Hogake and Kushina. The older Sakura said, "those two are more powerful duo. Even the Legendary Sannin was afraid to go up against them." The younger Sakura asked, "Whose the baby they are protecting?" Sakura said, "That's baby Naruto." All of them watched the Fourth sealed himself and his wife inside Naurto. The older Sakura then sent the older version of Neji and Sasuke back to their time after be drug in their drinks like Tsunade drug Jiraiya to meet Orochimaru. Sakura took her younger-self to her biggest mistake ever made. When she made Naruto promised to bring Sasuke back. The older Sakura starts to ball out.

Older Sakura said, "Little Sakura-san. Only two people love us but only one loves us and our foreheads." Then the older Sakura took the younger Sakura to the battle against the fake Itachi next Kyuubi Naruto mode vs Orochimaru after that was battle with pain. After that The older Sakura took her younger self back to younger Sakura's time and place her back at the bench. The Older Sakura said, "Watch out for Rock Lee and Naruto-kun soon coming as the disguise as Sasuke-kun. But Sasuke think you are annoying. I'm was idiot can't tell a fake Sasuke."

The Younger Sakura asked, "How can I'd tell if he's the real deal or Naruto is disguised as Sasuke-kun?" The Older Sakura put her head on her forehead and said, "Here's how you can tell Naruto. He'll look right at you with his warm eyes and you'll feel like he's looking into your heart. Also one thing you need to know is that Sasuke provokes Naurto not the other way around."

The older Sakura was hiding behind the tree that the fake Sasuke was staring at her younger-self. The younger Sakura is sitting there on the bench thinking what her older-self told her.


Back to the older Sasuke and Neji went and tell Naruto want Sakura is doing. So in a rush he'd transformed back in his younger self then time space jutsu and he's show up next to the Older Sakura at the time. The older Naruto disguise as the younger Naurto asked, "Why are you here Sakura-chan?" Sakura replied, "Cause I'd cost you more pain then the real pain did. He'd even got you up to the 8 tails and you find out the Fourth Hogake is your father."

The older version of Naruto in disguise as his 12-year-old prankster self said, "Sakura-chan I'm sorry!" Then he's grabbed his younger-self that was disguise as Sasuke. Then he'd turned into 12 year-older Sasuke and kissed the 12 year-older Sakura's forehead and show the 12 year-old his true age in his kyuubi mode and his sage mode at once while he was kissing the younger Sakura's forehead. He'll made the younger sakura forget about what she saw. He's said, "This will be only be dream now." 30 year-old Naruto and Sakura went back to their own time.

Naruto and Sakura divorced. Later the villagers from a other village told Konoha that Naruto is dead by the hands of a bounty hunters that they wanted Kyuubi and they poisoned the Ramen. Sakura became the Tsunade before Tsunade become Fifth Hogake and after Sai took over the Root. Ino joined Sakura on her journey. After Hinata died Sasuke the left the village again. Konohamaru gave up on him and every one else. They knew Naruto isn't around.
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Dude you need to go over your spelling and Grammar then you need to come up with a decent Layout.

Your layout right now is wall after wall after wall of text.

Do something like this.

Sakura: "<dialogue>"
Naruto: "<dialogue>"

Just a suggestion.

It seperates the Dialogue to the descriptive parts. Makes it easier on the eyes and on the story.
 

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Dude you need to go over your spelling and Grammar then you need to come up with a decent Layout.

Your layout right now is wall after wall after wall of text.

Do something like this.

Sakura: "<dialogue>"
Naruto: "<dialogue>"

Just a suggestion.

It seperates the Dialogue to the descriptive parts. Makes it easier on the eyes and on the story.

I'm not sure what to say that's the problem I always have with the Dialogues when it comes to writing stories. That's why I need some help.
 
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