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i promised a sasuke vs madara after this chapter
so here it is
we see madaraand zetsu on the fingers of the gedo thing sealing away the kin gin bros a susano'o arrow stikes the gedo thing stopping the sealing jutsu
sasuke is seen with his ems active
madara: sasuke what is the meaning of this?
sasuke: you will pay for my clans death.
madara:...
sasuke: itachi told me every thing he told showed me that it was your fault.
madara: so itachi planed this far ahead huh i should have gave him more credit.
sasuke: i'll kill you.
madara: by betarying itachis wishs and trying to kill what he lived for you spat in his face you plannedto threw every thing he worked for into the trash.
sasuke: shut up!
sasuke's susano'o appears around him and it fires 3 arrows madara telports and reppaers
a susano'o appears around madar in a blackish color it weilds the sword itachi had but not the shield
sasuke's suano'o fire 3 arrows sasuke then focaes's on them amateersu appears around the arrows madara makes a wall of amteerasu in front of his susano'o the arrow his it a large explosion insues madaras suano'o then grows a sheild and the sword takes the same shape as sasukes arrows his suano'o throws the chakra blade like a spear sasuke makes his sasuke move its arm side ways the chakra spear hits sasukes suano'o the chakra then implodes causeing sasukes suano'o to go into him a large explosion then happens sasuke is on the ground with his arms and legs bloodly
madara: thats the power of my suano'o when my weapon his it makes the one hits chakra implod on them you probaly can't stand anymore.
sasuke: its thanks to you and your selfish ness that i lost EVERY THING i don't care if i die here as long as i take you with me you bas****.
sasukes susano'o rib cage appears the arm appears aswell the whole skelton appears around sasuke the chakra of the susano'o turns crimson like itachis.the rest of its appears sasuke fire an arrow madara fire a chakra spear they clash a large explosin happens the ground shakes sasuke's susano'o becmes complte and now looks like itachis full version the same weapons as itachis appear madar changes his to his final version which looks the same but back and the same weapons sasuke makes his suano'o swing its blade madara makes his sheild come up and block it his blade then goes right for sasuke a wall of amterasu appears blocking it the black flames start to cover madars blade and covers hsi whole susano'o sasuke focases hsi eyes as hard as he can onto the black flames they turn white and it starts to melt madaras susano'o
sasuke: this is a new power of the sharingan it can only be used by those who have mastered the black flames this flame melts chakra and after it recahs your flash it will melt away all your chakra till your dead.
madara: i know i to can use these flames
sasuke: prepre to die!
the susano'o melts fully and the chakra lands on the ground
sasuke de actives his ems suddenly white flames appear around sasuke madar is behind him
sasuke: dan*
madara: at least in the end you tryed to defend what itachi lived for
sasuke: you
tears fill sasuke's eyes
madara:you will be dead in moments notice sasuke
sasuke: AHH! ( i'm sorry itachi forgive me)
mean while...
naruto: sakura i'm ok i'm going to go back sasuke up
sakura: fine i'm coming
they run forward as fast as the can they arrive to find sasuke on the ground the white flames are gone one of sasukes eyes are closed and bleeding ( madara stole it he used izangi tododge sasuke white flames so he needd a sharingan)
naruto: SASUKE!
sasuke: naruto.
sakura: sasuke.
sasuke: sakura naruto i'm sorry for haveing caused you so much trouble these last 3 years naruto you are my best friend and it toke me till the moment of my death to relize it.
naruto: sasuke...
sasuke: just because i die here today doesnt mean you didnt save me naruto you did you did save me.
naruto: but...
sasuke: naruto you are a strong shinobi you will make a great hokage i know you will if only i get go back in time and change my actions i would i wish i could but this is were it ends naruto perahps we will meet again some day till then promise me one thing.
naruto: what is it sasuke ( tears fill narutos eyes)
sasuke: kill madara if its the last thing you do.
naruto: i will sasuke
the end
in my oringal the sasukes last words they were much more touching and sad
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so here it is
we see madaraand zetsu on the fingers of the gedo thing sealing away the kin gin bros a susano'o arrow stikes the gedo thing stopping the sealing jutsu
sasuke is seen with his ems active
madara: sasuke what is the meaning of this?
sasuke: you will pay for my clans death.
madara:...
sasuke: itachi told me every thing he told showed me that it was your fault.
madara: so itachi planed this far ahead huh i should have gave him more credit.
sasuke: i'll kill you.
madara: by betarying itachis wishs and trying to kill what he lived for you spat in his face you plannedto threw every thing he worked for into the trash.
sasuke: shut up!
sasuke's susano'o appears around him and it fires 3 arrows madara telports and reppaers
a susano'o appears around madar in a blackish color it weilds the sword itachi had but not the shield
sasuke's suano'o fire 3 arrows sasuke then focaes's on them amateersu appears around the arrows madara makes a wall of amteerasu in front of his susano'o the arrow his it a large explosion insues madaras suano'o then grows a sheild and the sword takes the same shape as sasukes arrows his suano'o throws the chakra blade like a spear sasuke makes his sasuke move its arm side ways the chakra spear hits sasukes suano'o the chakra then implodes causeing sasukes suano'o to go into him a large explosion then happens sasuke is on the ground with his arms and legs bloodly
madara: thats the power of my suano'o when my weapon his it makes the one hits chakra implod on them you probaly can't stand anymore.
sasuke: its thanks to you and your selfish ness that i lost EVERY THING i don't care if i die here as long as i take you with me you bas****.
sasukes susano'o rib cage appears the arm appears aswell the whole skelton appears around sasuke the chakra of the susano'o turns crimson like itachis.the rest of its appears sasuke fire an arrow madara fire a chakra spear they clash a large explosin happens the ground shakes sasuke's susano'o becmes complte and now looks like itachis full version the same weapons as itachis appear madar changes his to his final version which looks the same but back and the same weapons sasuke makes his suano'o swing its blade madara makes his sheild come up and block it his blade then goes right for sasuke a wall of amterasu appears blocking it the black flames start to cover madars blade and covers hsi whole susano'o sasuke focases hsi eyes as hard as he can onto the black flames they turn white and it starts to melt madaras susano'o
sasuke: this is a new power of the sharingan it can only be used by those who have mastered the black flames this flame melts chakra and after it recahs your flash it will melt away all your chakra till your dead.
madara: i know i to can use these flames
sasuke: prepre to die!
the susano'o melts fully and the chakra lands on the ground
sasuke de actives his ems suddenly white flames appear around sasuke madar is behind him
sasuke: dan*
madara: at least in the end you tryed to defend what itachi lived for
sasuke: you
tears fill sasuke's eyes
madara:you will be dead in moments notice sasuke
sasuke: AHH! ( i'm sorry itachi forgive me)
mean while...
naruto: sakura i'm ok i'm going to go back sasuke up
sakura: fine i'm coming
they run forward as fast as the can they arrive to find sasuke on the ground the white flames are gone one of sasukes eyes are closed and bleeding ( madara stole it he used izangi tododge sasuke white flames so he needd a sharingan)
naruto: SASUKE!
sasuke: naruto.
sakura: sasuke.
sasuke: sakura naruto i'm sorry for haveing caused you so much trouble these last 3 years naruto you are my best friend and it toke me till the moment of my death to relize it.
naruto: sasuke...
sasuke: just because i die here today doesnt mean you didnt save me naruto you did you did save me.
naruto: but...
sasuke: naruto you are a strong shinobi you will make a great hokage i know you will if only i get go back in time and change my actions i would i wish i could but this is were it ends naruto perahps we will meet again some day till then promise me one thing.
naruto: what is it sasuke ( tears fill narutos eyes)
sasuke: kill madara if its the last thing you do.
naruto: i will sasuke
the end
in my oringal the sasukes last words they were much more touching and sad
