miyako uchiha
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I changed my shorts to actual shorts. Please comment I want to know how I could make them better and such.
Introduction
Sasuke: "Hi everybody I'm Sasuke and I got a camera see." Sasuke shows the camera in the mirror. "Don't ask how I did that it's complicated. First I'm going to show you my brother Itachi A.K.A weasle or nissan." Sasuke walks into the living room and points the camrea to him. "Hiya weasle."
Itachi: gives him a blunt glare. "I told you not to call me that."
Sasuke: "weasle."
Itachi: "Stop it."
Sasuke: "Weasle."
Itachi: getting aggravated "Stop it!"
Sasuke: he takes a pause to make Itachi think he isn't going to say it. then with a sly grin. "Weasle."
Itachi: He jumps off the couch glaring at Sasuke. "Sasuke I'm going to shove my foor up you a..." He was interrupted by a yell.
Mom: "Itachi watch your language!"
Sasuke: giggle "Saved by the yell." He walks into the kitchen where his mom is. "Thanks mom you really saved me back there. Itachi was going to say." he takes a pause and looks around. "The "A" word. By the way this is my mom, don't let her pretty looks fool you she can be mean."
Mom: "Oh Sasuke, be quite."
Sasuke: "Ok, well I'm going to interview dad." He walks out side where his dad is just standing looking around. "Ok this is my dad." Gets the camrea right in his face.
Dad: "Sasuke get that piece of shit out of my face."
Sasuke: "It's not a piece of the "s" word. I spent all my money on this camrea."
Dad: "You spent all your money on that shit?" Sasuke gives his dad the puppy dog eyes. "Ok, I'm sorry."
Sasuke: he gets a rude look on his face. "You better be.:
Dad: narrows his eyes and glares at his son. "What did you say to me boy!?"
Sasuke: Backs away from his dad, but the dad keeps walking towards him. "Uh, see you next time on day two." Father reaches his out his hands to grab him. "If I live!!!!!!" the camrea shuts off.
Please comment I want to know what I can do to make it better.
Sasuke and Itachi Shorts
Introduction
Sasuke: "Hi everybody I'm Sasuke and I got a camera see." Sasuke shows the camera in the mirror. "Don't ask how I did that it's complicated. First I'm going to show you my brother Itachi A.K.A weasle or nissan." Sasuke walks into the living room and points the camrea to him. "Hiya weasle."
Itachi: gives him a blunt glare. "I told you not to call me that."
Sasuke: "weasle."
Itachi: "Stop it."
Sasuke: "Weasle."
Itachi: getting aggravated "Stop it!"
Sasuke: he takes a pause to make Itachi think he isn't going to say it. then with a sly grin. "Weasle."
Itachi: He jumps off the couch glaring at Sasuke. "Sasuke I'm going to shove my foor up you a..." He was interrupted by a yell.
Mom: "Itachi watch your language!"
Sasuke: giggle "Saved by the yell." He walks into the kitchen where his mom is. "Thanks mom you really saved me back there. Itachi was going to say." he takes a pause and looks around. "The "A" word. By the way this is my mom, don't let her pretty looks fool you she can be mean."
Mom: "Oh Sasuke, be quite."
Sasuke: "Ok, well I'm going to interview dad." He walks out side where his dad is just standing looking around. "Ok this is my dad." Gets the camrea right in his face.
Dad: "Sasuke get that piece of shit out of my face."
Sasuke: "It's not a piece of the "s" word. I spent all my money on this camrea."
Dad: "You spent all your money on that shit?" Sasuke gives his dad the puppy dog eyes. "Ok, I'm sorry."
Sasuke: he gets a rude look on his face. "You better be.:
Dad: narrows his eyes and glares at his son. "What did you say to me boy!?"
Sasuke: Backs away from his dad, but the dad keeps walking towards him. "Uh, see you next time on day two." Father reaches his out his hands to grab him. "If I live!!!!!!" the camrea shuts off.
The End
Please comment I want to know what I can do to make it better.
