Sasuke and Itachi drawings

[Loome]

Hey, I just discovered an epic style last week, and i thought it would be nice to try it. My first drawing in this style was the one from the right, with Itachi. Today I finished Sasuke.
Q: Am I good enough to participate at the monthly contest on NB? Would I get some votes? xD
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I would like you to give me some advises, or tell me where I did a mistake or how I should get better.
PS: No, Itachi isnt bald.

 

[saaaaaadpanda]

Overall, they're both quite good! If I were to offer some simple advice, you seem to make very hard, bold outlines. I'd recommend you draw your lines lighter and focus more on shading, if you know what I mean.

 

[sasukeMangekyousharingan]

nice

 

[Sasuke eternal sharingan]

Nice bro+rep

 

[Yveltal]

Great work

 

[Lamperouge]

thats nice

 

[GrimReaperoftheHiddenLeaf]

Ur right, itachi isn't bald, it's just shine from a light source

 

[-Logic-]

Looks like Itachi's smoking a cig xd Awesome work though ^^

 

[Nimmy]

I like it ^_^ I would say to go ahead and participate in the contest, what do you have to lose? :3

 

[Loome]

Overall, they're both quite good! If I were to offer some simple advice, you seem to make very hard, bold outlines. I'd recommend you draw your lines lighter and focus more on shading, if you know what I mean.

thx, but it is on A5 paper, so I couldnt find something thinnier to outline these.

 

[Awkward Linguist]

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says +rep

 

[saaaaaadpanda]

thx, but it is on A5 paper, so I couldnt find something thinnier to outline these.

I see. Well, whenever you run out you should get some better paper for what you're doing.

 

[xjimbox]

you doing good that pick of itachi is hard to draw I know I've drawn the same pik

 

[GrimReaperoftheHiddenLeaf]

Plus when itachi fought sasuke, his blood dripped straight down like in my sig, ulquiorra has tear lines dropping down, just fix that somehow and then ur all good plus +rep

 

[Loome]

I see. Well, whenever you run out you should get some better paper for what you're doing.

i had a4 and a3 really good papers.
But I run out of them so I used my old skretchbook paper.
I couldnt get to the shop because it was raining with ice here, in Romania.
The last A3 paper I had is now with another drawing of sasuke from the last chapter. I will finish it soon I hope.

 

[goodro88]

Nice

 

[GrimReaperoftheHiddenLeaf]

U should see some of my drawings I made, I bet my ulquiorra drawing wuld rival urs

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[gordo1]

Maybe lighten up on the outlines a little bit, but they're both REALLY good.

 

[Loome]

U should see some of my drawings I made, I bet my ulquiorra drawing wuld rival urs

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Dunno bro, But your drawing is nice, but different style

I still dont uderstand why you focus on telling me about ulquirrora or whatever.

 

[Hipster Madara]

Nice ones.
just the shading and you can see the lines