Sasaki Kojirō (佐々木 小次郎)

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"Poor thing, you've been waiting for me to give you a beautiful end haven't you?"

-Basic Information-​

Name: Sasaki Kojirō
Nickname: The Ruthless Samurai
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Clan: N/A

Looks: He is described by others as a young man with an innocent child like face. He is slightly taller than Musashi.

Personality: His personality is very playful, almost child-like. He is also very sexually active, always bringing different women.

He enjoys duelling against opponents because this would be his way of communicating with people.

-Village Info-​

Village of Birth: Land of Iron .
Village of Alliance:
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-Rank//Chakra Info-​

Ninja Rank: Unofficial Sage
Specialty: N/A
Elements: Kenjutsu (Needs training) , Taijutsu (Needs training)


-Background Info-​

History: Kojiro was the son of Sasaki Sukeyasu who was a former disciple of Kanemaki Jisai. He sent his son and wife to Jisai in 1583 CE.

He once traveled and found himself on the Land Of Iron . There he learned a lot . He got the answer of what a Samurai is , or is the sword really the right thing to do . Later , he decided to leave the small village , and continue his long journey .

Later on , Kojiro became famous swordsman challenging others.

Kojiro was spotted in Kyoto when he read the challenge post that Denshirou put up against Musashi. Kojiro laughed as he notice Musashi's hand ink print on the challenge note.

After a long battle of Musashi and other samurais , the former was treated by a blacksmith in his house , but Kojiro was staying at the same place as Musashi. This resulted to their meeting after many years .

Kojiro saw Musashi's snowman and was instantly amused by it. Kojiro took off the stick of the snowman and tries to cut down the snowman. Here Musashi reunites with Kojiro, although Musashi didn't recognise him but felt he seen him before and Kojiro seems to remember him. Musashi notice Kojiro's movement when he waves the stick around. They had a brief fight with the sticks and each strike was lethal. Kojiro wanted to try use real sword but Musashi stands there, Kojiro notice this and withdraw his blade until they realize that it became dark.

After Musashi left, Kojiro constantly thinks about Musashi. He kept asking where Musashi is or whats he's doing.

-Other-​

Attributes and Abilities

Ittousai has also commented the possibility that Kojirou's eyes have become better developed to compensate for his lack of hearing.

Swordsmanship: Ganryu - Tsubame-Gaeshi (燕返し) Kojiro was renowned for his Tsubame-Gaeshi, or “Swallow Cut” technique, inspired by the movement of a swallow in flight. He used this technique while fighting against Ittosai.


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Theme Song and Background Music

[video=youtube;fw2cV6AO0Sc]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fw2cV6AO0Sc[/video]

-Battles-​

Won: Soon .
Lost: Never .
 
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is this a samurai? or some kinda thing.
 

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If this is your attempt at a samurai bio you have several things wrong:

- Samurai must originate from the Land of Iron or must be stated in your history that you were there at some point
- Samurai can only utilize Kenjutsu (including Samurai Kenjutsu) and Taijutsu. They can't utilize the elements (handseals and molding) other than a specific skill but even then it is only with the use of a blade.
- I assume you are new to the RP and thus you have had no training in Kenjutsu let alone mastered it yet. So you can't have Kenjutsu as a specialty until you have completed training for it.
- Your history seems muddled to me. Did you copy paste from somewhere? You need to fit it to the Narutoverse.

If you wanted to make a regular shinobi then you are fine although still not liking the history. If you wanted a samurai bio, then consider what I mentioned and change it when you get a chance. I hope you were trying to become a samurai, Klad-kun.

If you need additional help you know where to find me. ;3
 

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If this is your attempt at a samurai bio you have several things wrong:

- Samurai must originate from the Land of Iron or must be stated in your history that you were there at some point
- Samurai can only utilize Kenjutsu (including Samurai Kenjutsu) and Taijutsu. They can't utilize the elements (handseals and molding) other than a specific skill but even then it is only with the use of a blade.
- I assume you are new to the RP and thus you have had no training in Kenjutsu let alone mastered it yet. So you can't have Kenjutsu as a specialty until you have completed training for it.
- Your history seems muddled to me. Did you copy paste from somewhere? You need to fit it to the Narutoverse.

If you wanted to make a regular shinobi then you are fine although still not liking the history. If you wanted a samurai bio, then consider what I mentioned and change it when you get a chance. I hope you were trying to become a samurai, Klad-kun.

If you need additional help you know where to find me. ;3

So , thanks for everything . Also for the story , I will change it tomorrow . I rushed a lot , just copied and pasted . I'm gonna fix all the things you mentioned , tomorrow .

Thanks , Deviation-kun ! ;3
 

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So , thanks for everything . Also for the story , I will change it tomorrow . I rushed a lot , just copied and pasted . I'm gonna fix all the things you mentioned , tomorrow .

Thanks , Deviation-kun ! ;3

No problemo. I hope I didn't come off as rude. I was only trying to help you. ( ._.)
 

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Can't wait to kill, I mean, defeat this bio.
 

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Just take out the e-rank ninjutsu spoiler with everything in it and you should be fine. :)
 

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What bio are you dropping...
 

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What bio are you dropping...

None , this is my 2nd bio ...

EDIT : The two other bios I've made , both got declined . I currently have only one approved bio .
 
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