(Sakura) is my hero

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  • it's ok ... not bad , not good

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kooko

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hello guys , it's me kooko & i am huge sakura & tsunade fan in NB :hey:​


i made this poem about my
fav character (sakura) & i hope u like it <3




sakura is the best
she is better than all the rest
sakura doesn’t like to admit
That she is my hero when she dose her little bit

sakura has love and respect
Even she is my prime subject
sakura is always on my mind
Even though she is smart and kind
sakura has a special name
But I can’t tell you it cause it would put her in shame

sakura loves to pull a trick
she is not smart no is she very thick?
sakura makes me smile even though I feel crying
sakura says 'I will always love you even though I am dyeing'​



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next time i will make another poem to my other fav character,
lady tsunade as well so don't worry & thanks for reading guys :hint:
 

Summer

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Fan fic section is all I'm saying
 

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"Sakura has a special name but I can't tell you it cause it would put her in shame"
That's my favorite part.
 

Anakin Skywalker

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there is a separate section for it

and

..... sakura is a he??? o_O xd
so sakura is heroine not hero..... however small/non existent her chest is xd
 

KGB Kakuzu

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Nicely done! Poetic justice!!!!!
 

kooko

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Oh kooko strikes again!
i am loyal sakura & tsunade fan in NB :hint:
Nicely done! Poetic justice!!!!!
yes i know :eek:
there is a separate section for it

and

..... sakura is a he??? o_O xd
so sakura is heroine not hero..... however small/non existent her chest is xd
what was that :rag:
argh will you shut up?

i will never shut up as long as i like sakura chan & lady tsunade :izuna:
 

Anakin Skywalker

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what was that :rag:

i was just pointing out the flaw i.e you mentioned her as a hero

one more thing i noticed

dyeing: present participle of dye (Verb)

Add a color to or change the color of (something) by soaking it in a solution impregnated with a dye.
Take color well or badly during such a process. xd

i think you meant this
dying: (Adjective)
On the point of death.
Occurring at or connected with the time that someone dies.

other that that its not bad actually
 
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i am loyal sakura & tsunade fan in NB :hint:

yes i know :eek:

what was that :rag:


i will never shut up as long as i like sakura chan & lady tsunade :izuna:

woaw. that's impressive. You now have my respect.
 

REX Lex

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nice poem though sakura is annoying me xD
 

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I have seen alot members made Poem on there favorite character nothing wrong with that but I think this is in wrong section here you will get bashed alot
ps: for me it was good but I am not into poem


sakura is the best
she is better than all the rest :)
 
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