lea as always i am seeing your work improve ^^ and yes i do look at your work but i hardly comment but it seems this one is in need of a comment about the mistakes you have made, because no one has pointed it out U_U
and in my way the only way to improve is for someone to tell you what is wrong with the drawing...
First thing, the hair: okay i like the fact that ur trying with the colouring, but the line art is all wrong.... hai has to flow. not look stiff and rough. try drawing with more free lines then using stiff ones that u take time to draw, just make it sketchy and free.
hand... okay well you did well, hands are hard to draw i have lots of trouble with them. but try not to make the hand too fat... and at least give it some sort of wrist... the fingers also need work. look at pictures of hands... look at your own hands to get them right.
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the eyes, are beautiful, but the only really thing wrong is there a little too far apart... and very female for boys eyes. the crying and shading on his cheeks is very good ... but other parts of skin shading are poor if not there at all.
i hope this helps and im sorry if this makes u mad or upset with me ... but im only trying to help you ^^
Lol, I am aware of the flaws you point out and flaws in general with my pictures. XD I don’t draw and think
‘Oh this is perfect.’ Haha there is always something that could use a bit of work. The wrist however it doesn't look like it has one cause the sleeve is... well covering it. It had one before I drew the sleeve on. XD Hands/feet is what I have a hard time with in general, and I do look at hand tutorials, and such. It is either a hit or somewhat of a miss with me when I draw them.
Lool, for the hair, I know the line art is thick, and it also looks weird because…the hair color is…well yellow. Normally I am pretty good when it comes to hair, but I was too busy fussing over the eyes than the hair when drawing it. If I was doing black hair it would have looked a lot better, or a darker color.(Any color but white/yellow <-<) I could easily fix it the lines and such, but I’m the kind of person …once I finish drawing something it is done. Whether if I could fix something or not. XD -Weird.-
Well the boy is supposed to be feminine looking since this is how I imagine him to look like and it suits his character. So I intended him to have that look, but yes the eyes could be a bit close together.
Oh, I’m not mad/upset. I appreciate your tips, but I am aware with what could use work. xD