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Ma neee! Sacemo mi i ovo brzo z.z ne brini se. Samo ti da ne prestanes da odgovaras <_<''

Ok as I am sure you are aware of, I teach one technique per post. I don't really plan to change this for now. Anyhow, I am quite sure you are proficient when it comes to performing technique, seeing your earlier training and the only thing I will need for you to do is analyze each technique for me. I will add whatever needs to be added or in some cases ask you questions as for us both to come with an answer. This is the best way to learn in my opinion. You may ask me as much questions as you want and I will try my best to give you the answer you are so looking for.

So, the next A ranked technique within the list is Hard Whirlpool Water Blade technique which requires from one to use a water source for its performance. Additionally, it can only be used within short range. This is a jutsu from the game and I can't quite find a video of it, but I hope the picture will be sufficient. Basically, what you firstly do is release chakra into the water source upon which your target is standing. With application of basic processes of chakra manipulation you would cause for the water to explode as to launch your target into the air. As you've sent forth that impulse of chakra, you would jump into the air as you simultaneously focus suiton chakra within both of your arms. You would release the said chakra from your arms as you reach the peak of your jump with application of nature manipulation as to generate water and shape a large whirlpool which you would sent forth towards your target causing for a great explosion as to be made.

(Suiton: Kōka Suijin) - Water Release: Hard Whirlpool Water Blade
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user makes the water under the enemy explode, launching them into the air. Then the user jumps above the enemy and creates a large whirlpool around his arm, striking the enemy with it and creating a large water explosion.
Note: Water source required.
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Everything seems good. I like your way of teaching. :)

The first part could be very useful for short-range fights, especially during taijutsu combats. It would be great if the explosion hit your opponent and launched them into the air and thus made them lose concentration and balance, but it would also be good even if the person notices the formation of the explosion and manages to dogde it, considering you're close to each other, you can still have an opening for an attack because it would mess up the person's movement and the splash of water would restrict their vision, and thus you'd be able react quickly. The fact that the technique doesn't require any hand seals, also goes in favour to its swiftness. The second part of technique has lesser chanches of being effective because your opponent should be able to counterattack with a quick technique. But anyway, if it succeeds, it think it would be nice for throwing the person away from you and to even extend the fight range. If you're battling in close range and on water surface, this would be really nice to use!
 

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Amazingly great. Let's get going onto the next technique. This next technique similar to the last one also requires a water source. The technique can reach up to Mid range which is a neat feature. Basically user would release previously gathered suiton chakra from their body into the water source as they perform a sequence of three hand seals. Ram followed by Horse and finished with hand seal Bird. With application of basic processes of chakra manipulation as nature and shape transformation they would generate a water vortex around them. The said vortex can act as a defense against techniques coming their way or user can sent it forth towards their target. The power of the spinning water would be so great as to be able to knock an opponent unconscious.

(Suiton: Mizu no Tatsumaki) - Water Release: Tornado of Water
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After performing the Ram → Horse → Bird the user is able to create a technique that utilizes water to create a spinning water vortex around the user. The water vortex acts both as a barrier and an attack mechanism. The power of the vortex is enough to knock an opponent unconscious.
Note: Requires a nearby water source
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Sorry for being, kmh, a tad late...
Shall we continue the same way, or have you changed your method?



It's great that this technique has both the defensive and offensive use. After you defend yourself from your opponent's attack, you could perhaps stop their next one by dispersing the vortex which is quite powerful. That will especially come in handy when their next attack is in short range and then you could quickly disrupt it (when the distance is mid range, the effects of this counterattack are less productive since it doesn't fall directly on them and they have more time to react). The defense is good because it covers you from all sides, but this also blinds you and makes you vulnerable since it leaves and oppening for them to surprise you. The obvious disadvantages would also be the required water source and hand seals.
 

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Let's get going onto the next technique. Good job by the way. The next technique is an advanced version of (Suiton: Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave. It is a very useful technique which can in mere moments fill up the battlefield with water and one of the more used techniques in our RP. User will perform a single hand seal and release previously gathered suiton chakra from their mouth and gullet as they apply basic processes of nature and shape manipulation and start releasing large amounts of water. The water will within moments cover the battlefield before converging into an orb, differently to the weaker version, it will not be released but rather concentrated in its final form.

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(Suiton: Dai Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave
Rank: A
Type: Offensive,Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This technique is a stronger version of exploding water colliding wave technique. The user will first perform the ram hand seal and then spits out a large amount of water that covers an entire area, with massive waves that can crush the opponent. The user then forms the water into a giant orb, instead of releasing like weaker version of the technique.
 

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It's a very powerful, massive Water jutsu. You perform a jutsu of that extent, power and range without requiring a nearby water source, and only with a single hand seal. Much like the "plain" version of this jutsu, after you finish it, you make yourself a water source which can be used for your next Water techniques. That would be very useful for those who prefer using Water. But on the other hand, this could restrict your use of other elements since the entire battlefield gets covered with water and I wouln't prefer having a gigantic bubble all over the place. I suppose that the bubble is not very useful for the performer, unless you are Kisame Hoshigaki who is stronger and faster in water and controls the environment, but if you manage to trap your opponent in it, they should have a hard time escaping. I think I would find myself using the weaker version before that this one.
 

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You can create the "bubble" as you call it, but make it so at the end of it you are standing atop of it. Don't need to be inside of it. However you are certainly correct. Well, which one you use in the end would depend on the situation you are in. Both are similarly performed, just the latter ensuing situation is somewhat different. Next technique will require you to use a water source and by performing a sequence of 4 hand seals (Dog, Horse, Monkey and Ram) and releasing the chakra into preexisting source you'd further manipulation to create a massive beast. This beast will be capable of releasing B ranked streams from its mouth or even swiping the area in front if him with its claws. It will be active for up to 3 turns and to be honest it is pretty neat, especially the ability to form it within a water source even long range distant from you.

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(Suiton: Mizu Shishi) - Water Release: Water Beast
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user after performing the Dog → Horse → Monkey → Ram and by manipulating a pre-existing water source and transforms it into a giant wolf-like beast. The beast can launch powerful streams of water from its mouth equivilant to B rank, or sweep the area with its claws to let a powerful torrent of water to wash away the enemies.
Note: The Water Beast remains active for three turns
 

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Yes, a very useful technique. It reamains active for three turns and serves multiple purposes. It can utilize pretty strong streams, and can also act "hand-to-hand" in swiping the enemy or their clones with its claws. Beacause it lasts as long, it is great for distracting the opponent whilst leaving yourself an opening for conducting an attack. Due to the size of the beast, it could also be used as a defense. It's a like a wall in front of you, but even better beacuse it has the claws which could even reach out for projectiles. I would call this one a bit boring and uncreative since it's so much things in one jutsu, but no doubt useful, especially when having a large water source.

Q: About this B rank streams that it creates, does it spend extra of my chakra every time I use one?
 

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It should use the water from which it was created to release the B ranked stream :p. Keep in mind that for performance of this next technique you will need a water source. Essentially gathering and then releasing suiton chakra into the water source before further manipulating it to form a vortex around your opponent with but a swing of your arm. The vortex should push the target into the air before you perform but another hand gesture and dispel it.

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( Suiton: Arekuruu Hayase ) - Water Release: Raging Rapids
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Using their skills with Water Release, the user generates a powerful vortex of water around their enemy with a swing of their arm that sends them flying upwards and then dispels it with another hand gesture. (Requires a water source).
Note: Tobirama and Mei terumi can perform this without a water source.
 

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It would be good to use it while fighthing on water and the user can surprise their opponent just by swinging their hand and controlling the water beneath them. Without the hand seals and using only hand movements, you're able to catch your opponent unprepared. The whole process of using this is very fast and simple. Once they are in the vortex, it's hard to avoid being thrown in the air which leaves a great oppening for your next move. If one uses a nerby water source, it's not as useful since there's more time to react while the jutsu travels towards the opponent, losing the essence of this one – speed.
 

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Yeah, pretty much. Nice! This next technique uses per advantage ninjas keen precision and observation skils. User would gather chakra within their upper body and then release it from their mouth whilst applying nature and shape manipulation to form few shaped senbons which move at great speeds. Essentially you can aim them at whatever you wish, however the fashion of using this is to aim at the vital points.

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( Suiton: Tenkyū ) - Water Release: Heavenly Weeping
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A technique in which chakra is kneaded in the user's body, transformed into water and then shaped into senbon in the mouth before finally being expelled at a high velocity. The needles are shot in an attempt to catch the enemy off guard, while also aiming at their vitals.
 

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I love this one. It's quick, simple, small, deadly, elegant. It would be great to use this when your opponent is distracted with something else. I could also imagine using this while fighting in close range and combining it with taijutsu to create an opening. Extentive medical knowledge could make this even more useful because one could precisely aim to hit the parts of the body which would paralyze the opponent without killing them or something similar. However, everyone knows where the vital organs are and could aim to kill the opponent, or to simply restrict their movements by piercing a limb. Since you can use multiple senbons to aim more spots, it's even harder to dogde.
 

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For this next technique slam your hands onto the ground as you focus suiton chakra within your hands. Once your hands touch the ground release the chakra using nature manipulation as to generate water and shape manipulation forming a rapid stream of water that will form a large pool of water so to speak beneath your target. Using shape manipulation once again make the pool gush upwards in a burst as to lift your target into the air. As your target is in the air perform a sequence of 4 hand seals, Bird → Dog → Snake → Rat, whilst sending your chakra into the pool of water and using shape manipulation forming up to 8 bullets. Once these bullets pass by your target use shape manipulation on the chakra once again as to form the dragon. Make the dragon attack your target, grabbing it with his jaws before forcefully crushing it into the ground. This is just lol. It can reach long range tho.

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(Suiton: Suiryū Kōbaku ) - Water Release: Water Dragon Biting Explosion
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will clap his hands and slam them on the ground, streaming an incredibly rapid stream of water through it, creating a large pool of water beneath the opponent to form, that gushes upwards in a burst, lifting the opponent high into the air. The user does the Bird → Dog → Snake → Rat hand seals after his opponent is mid air, using the water pool to shoot up to 8 small water bullets, designed to further raise the opponent into the air, disorient him and damage him. The water bullets gather above the opponent after hitting and passing through his position and form into a water dragon which then attacks the target, grabbing it in its jaws and forcefully bringing it crashing into the ground. The dragon comes down from above the target, bites the target and coils down, towards the ground, crushing the target between the ground and the now incredible mass of falling water. Tobirama Senju does this technique with his own specific hand seals, similar to how he does some other water techniques. Despite long and seemingly complex, the technique is quite fast to perform and trigger.
 

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A very complex jutsu, but also extremely powerful if it goes through until the very end, making the most damage out of all Water jutsus. Even though it consists out of several components, the whole performance can be done very quickly. Since you have to be a Water primary specialist, that already means that you can perform it with only one hand seal, makig it even faster. No water source is requires, and you get a pool for your future Water jutsus! Once the first part of the jutsu goes through, and it's very probable since the stream of water is explosive and instant (especially if the opponent is in mid range), and they get thrown into the air, it's hard to defend against the next phases of the attack. If one were to choose mastery of Water, this would definitely be one of the strongest jutus they would have in their basic 5 arsenal.
 

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Exquisite if I may say! This next one is a streaming type of technique. It showcases the cutting capability of water element, although one would thing that something like that wouldn't be present. User would through a single hand seal and release of chakra from their mouth whilst applying nature and shape manipulation form a thin stream of pressurized water. Due to how condensed this stream is, it will easily be able to cut through rocks.

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(Suiton: Suidanha) Water Release: Severing Wave
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
After doing the Tiger hand seal, the user will quickly exhale a very thin stream of pressurized water that will be able to cut even rock. The most noteworthy feature of the technique is how fast the stream is and how sharp it can be. By moving his head, the user can alter the jet's cutting path, creating longer cuts or affecting bigger targets.
 

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I really don't have much to say about this one, it's really simple. Without any serious disadvantages, this is great for what is made for. And that is cutting through Earth jutsus, clones, trees and similar, reaching every part of the battlefield. When you are attacking only one person with it, it's not that hard to defend with a Taijutsu sequence and throwing even simple kunais at the user, making them stop using the jutsu because they can't defend with such a thin stream. However that's not how I would use it and it is indeed a powerful jutsu.
 
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