[Approved] Ryu "りゅ"

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Hi, I'm Ryu!

Name: Ryu
Nickname: Dragon, The monster of the hidden leaf; Gojira, Monster-kun, the prototype.
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Clan: /

Looks:
[*]Ryu looks like a hybrid of an reptile and human. He has green scaly skin, yellow reptile-like eyes, sharp claws(that he often trim down) and sharp teeth which he hides behind his mask. His main attire consits of tank tops and black shinobi pants, with his Headband tied firmly around his waist. Ryu often carried a Kukiri on his back for using in a steah kill; afterall one chop and the target is finished. Ryu is often barefoot because of his claw-like feet. Ryu is incapable of growing hair and is quite jealous of everyone's hair.


Personality:: in spite of his scary appearance, Ryu is a very warm and loving person. He is often polite to everyone that he meets, and is quick to forgive and slow to anger. Because of his appearance, Ryu often scares anyone who meets him. This had led to him being ostracized by nearly everyone in the hidden leaf village. This leads him into being shy around new people. Another factor of his strange up-bringing is the fact that Ryu is incapable (at the moment) of understanding sarcasm. He simply nods when he confused about a statement. When he is push though, Ryu is capable of being just as scary as his appearance. Ryu greatest desire though, is to have a family.

[Village Info.
Village of Birth: Mother Island of
Village of Alliance: The Hidden Leaf Village

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: /
Elements: Water - needs training
[ ninjutsu[/U]: E rank
(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

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Background Info.
History: The child that would be Ryu, was born to unknown parents in the land of the sea. When he was just three years old, The child was kidnapped and experimented on for two years by a young in an attempt to create the ultimate sub-marine Shinobi. The child survived the experiment but because of the fact he could not morph between human and reptile form, he was deemed a failure. In attempt to get rid of his mistake, Amachi sent the child to the Fire Lord with a note stating, "This child will grow up to be the Dragon that will eat the world. Kill him, and save the world."
The Fire lord instead, sent the deformed child to the village hidden in the leaves. The Hokage ignored the warning and raised the child to the best of his abilities, (He is the Hokage and have other matters to oversee). The child was named Ryu, because of the note.

After a few years, Ryu enter the Ninja Academy at age six, but was soon assigned a private tutor because of his appearance. Never the less, Ryu surpassed the lessons and passed his Genin exam. During the Genin exam, the teacher tested Ryu's elemental affinity and discovered he had an strong affinity for water. Ryu is now simply waiting to be assigned a teacher.

Other

Tools: Ryu mostly sticks with smoke bombs and explosive notes, he also carry senbon needles for long distance takedowns. His greatest tool is his Kukiri, multi-use sword, that he bought from a weapon shop. Ryu hopes to learn how to use the sword.
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Ryu completed 0 official missions in total: 0 D-rank, 0 C-rank, 0 B-rank, 0 A-rank, 0 S-rank.

Theme Song and Background Music: and
Battles:

Won: 0
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Trivia:

  1. Ryu, as you can tell is based off of reptile from the MK series.
    The reason I chose the Kaima form, despite its being firmly rooted in filler is because I simply wanted a character from Narutoverse.
    That, and I wanted a ugly sonovabitch.
    I don't know when I will add more to his backstory, his mother and father are alive with two more children, but other than that, it's up for approval (quite literally in this case).


    All righty, Thanks to Symiote "help" I rounded Ryu off. Here's hoping for the second charm.
~Approved~ I have been doubting this bio for quite a while. Eventually I decided to allow it based on the fact it's possibly within the limits of that filler arc, however you do not get any benefits like breathing under water, healing or deflecting kunai skin. And no your taijutsu is not above average, it's zero. You have no specialties either.
 
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O_O You didn't win any battles, you are Genin, not Chuunin and I don't think you learned anything you posted there.

Also I don't think you can have such hybrids.
 

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Isn't that character from a filler in Naruto?
Yup.

Better than taking someone OUT of Narutoverse. I'm sorry, but bringing in people from Fairytail, Bleach or what have you is kind of silly.

That, and Its going to hurt when the battles come up.

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O_O You didn't win any battles, you are Genin, not Chuunin and I don't think you learned anything you posted there.

Also I don't think you can have such hybrids.
I forgot to change it from Chunin, someone actually told me that, but between the blackouts on the site I forgot to change it.

..Wait, why can't I have a hybird? He's not godmodding, he isn't a Uzumaki, a Uchiha or any clan: fanon, or canon. He isn't outside of canon (Oh, right the reptile picture). I mean, for crying out loud, someone made a (pretty cool) bio for Sonic.
 

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Yup.

Better than taking someone OUT of Narutoverse. I'm sorry, but bringing in people from Fairytail, Bleach or what have you is kind of silly.

That, and Its going to hurt when the battles come up.



I forgot to change it from Chunin, someone actually told me that, but between the blackouts on the site I forgot to change it.

..Wait, why can't I have a hybird? He's not godmodding, he isn't a Uzumaki, a Uchiha or any clan: fanon, or canon. He isn't outside of canon (Oh, right the reptile picture). I mean, for crying out loud, someone made a (pretty cool) bio for Sonic.
That Sonic biography was a human, if I'm not mistaken. But if you say it's from the Narutoverse... meh. And no, Bleach characters are noy silly, since I find them much better drawn and as long as it fits my biography.
 

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That Sonic biography was a human, if I'm not mistaken. But if you say it's from the Narutoverse... meh. And no, Bleach characters are noy silly, since I find them much better drawn and as long as it fits my biography.
I'm not saying Bleach is silly (I used to hate it but I now find my self enjoying it) I'm saying taking characters who dosen't belong in Naruto and turning them into Ninja, or swordsman, or whathaveyou is silly.

Look, I used a filler character, and worked it into my biography because it fits what I like. I like hybird characters (Don't worry, I won't do the human/demon thing: I went through that faze years ago), because I like how they interact with other characters. I don't want to write a mary sue (even though I'm so far in my writings I can actually pull it off and leave none the wiser) who can learn all the Jutsu, get the girl or a (god-forbid) harem, and become a powerful person who everone look up to.

Sure, originally I had Ryu grew up with Epidermolytic hyperkeratosis (Layman terms: a overabundance of scaly skin and, if you used the longer name: Bullous congenital ichthyosiform erythroderma, blisters.) But I'm not too sure how far Naruto world had come into medicine to actually pulled that off.

So, I used the filler and had a field day.
 

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I'm not saying Bleach is silly (I used to hate it but I now find my self enjoying it) I'm saying taking characters who dosen't belong in Naruto and turning them into Ninja, or swordsman, or whathaveyou is silly.

Look, I used a filler character, and worked it into my biography because it fits what I like. I like hybird characters (Don't worry, I won't do the human/demon thing: I went through that faze years ago), because I like how they interact with other characters. I don't want to write a mary sue (even though I'm so far in my writings I can actually pull it off and leave none the wiser) who can learn all the Jutsu, get the girl or a (god-forbid) harem, and become a powerful person who everone look up to.

Sure, originally I had Ryu grew up with Epidermolytic hyperkeratosis (Layman terms: a overabundance of scaly skin and, if you used the longer name: Bullous congenital ichthyosiform erythroderma, blisters.) But I'm not too sure how far Naruto world had come into medicine to actually pulled that off.

So, I used the filler and had a field day.
You actually made me laugh, trying to show off how "intelligent" you are.

Get training, rank up and listen to older RPers' advice, your biography is not valid and it will not be approved unless you take out those techniques that you have NOT learned. Take out your specialties as you have not learned anything yet. Kaima Form is something I've read about, and I'm not sure you can have it, but I won't commentate on that one.

Good luck.
 

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Fine, disabled.


The Flash can get approved but I can't? That's weak.

EDIT: And I'm keeping the Kaima form because to be honest? I like it.
EDITX2: No, keep the bio. I want to edit.
 
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