[Approved] RPG Bio-Konan

[BoiNez]

I can help you with your bio if you want, will fix it so it looks cool, like my Alucard bio:

https://animebase.me/threads/%E3%81%A3%E2%97%94%E2%97%A1%E2%97%94-%E3%81%A3-%E2%99%A5-alucard-%E2%99%A5.769293/

As well as write all the correct tools/ranks etc if you want .

Thanks you very much Mr. @Skorm san. Also I really need help fixing this bio. Can I Discord friend you or something? Anyways thanks.

 

[BoiNez]

? Dude, no reason to be an asshole to the guy. He’s new, chill the hell out.

Thank you for support. You are most supportive person to me besides @Corazon . Both of you really nice.

 

[Anbu Kirito]

Thank you for support. You are most supportive person to me besides @Corazon . Both of you really nice.

Awe thanks. No problem dude; this stuff takes time to get used to.

 

[Skorm]

Thanks you very much Mr. @Skorm san. Also I really need help fixing this bio. Can I Discord friend you or something? Anyways thanks.

Yes you may. Add me at Skorm#7253

 

[BoiNez]

Yes you may. Add me at Skorm#7253

Thanks you Mr. Skorm San.

 

[BoiNez]

Awe thanks. No problem dude; this stuff takes time to get used to.

You very nice. Thanks for being nice.

 

[Mirai]

Alright so there are somethings about the bio that's still a little bit off. The first thing your specialties arent right. In order to have Apex Speed, you need to have some other Taijutsu Related Specialty. Like Combat Specialist, so you need to swap that out.

And

(Kuroki Jushinki) - Black Reciever - This artifact is a specialty of users who have the rinnegan as they are able to produce these to disturb or control another persons chakra. This artifact was given to Konan by Nagato. It is able to disable an enemy's use of chakra for one round, or for ninjas ranked chunin and under, can control their chakra completely. When stabbed deals 10 damage immediately then, if left in, will do 5 damage every 3 turns.

Is not an artifact. You cant even use this in the rp as only Rinnegan users can. Ninja Military Ration Pills are only available to people who has medical ninjutsu, so until you buy it you'll need to remove it.

 

[BoiNez]

Alright so there are somethings about the bio that's still a little bit off. The first thing your specialties arent right. In order to have Apex Speed, you need to have some other Taijutsu Related Specialty. Like Combat Specialist, so you need to swap that out.

And


Is not an artifact. You cant even use this in the rp as only Rinnegan users can. Ninja Military Ration Pills are only available to people who has medical ninjutsu, so until you buy it you'll need to remove it.

Yeah I created this bio before I knew anything about RP. So I've totally and completely just forgot about and given on this bio. Thanks for information though.