[Nin] Rolling paper with Omega

El Alucard

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Thanks for accepting my app, now then, Let's smoke this place up yeah?
My Lisa bio is the one taking this training.
 

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RP or analysis? Choose one, and start by answering my first question. What is Smoke, and how do you plan to utilize it and incorporate it into your fighting style.
 

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Analysis is faster so I'm going with that. In short, smoke is a collection of airborne solid and liquid particulates and also gases emitted when a material undergoes combustion or pyrolysis. Smoke release allows the user to manipulate said particles for different kinds of moves wheter offensive or defensive. As for how I plan on using it, I have yet to find out. This is because when I RP I usually think as the character and not myself, Lisa has yet to use smoke and as such has not yet figured out how she would use it but i'm sure she'll easily be able to adapt to it and use it as best as she can.
 

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Cool, cool. Smoke allows for some cool fight scenarios. Anyway, I will explain the technique then I want you to perform it, and talk a bit about it.


Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a clone made out of smoke from their hands. When it is struck, it turns into a smoke similar to the smokescreen the user creates. The smoke clone is mostly used as a diversion tactic like other clone techniques, however, the user can also turn the clone into a source for smoke ninjutsu at any time.
Note: The clone can only use smoke related jutsu.
Note: Can only be used by smoke bios.



Now, a technique where you will manipulate your Smoke based chakra, and make a clone which comes from your hands. When struck, the clone turns into Smoke, and acts as a Smokescreen. It can also be a source for Smoke techniques, making it pretty cool.
 

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Can we switch the training to RP? I feel like I've lost touch with my bio's so RP would actually help.




After the young man gave me instructions, I confidently and politely told him that I'd try my best and without wasting any more time began my first technique. I began focusing chakra within the palm of my hands whilst simultaneously giving it the properties of smoke. It took me a while to get that part down but once I had it, I went a step further and began releasing smoke from my hands and created a smoke copy of myself, talk about having a smoking body am I right. Not long after creating the clone, I threw a kunai at it causing to burst into a cloud of smoke that would act as a smokescreen, if I had and opponent. I then used a simple wind blast to clear the smoke and began speaking to my sensei.

" Well the technique like you said could work as a distraction, a very good one depending on how the user uses it but one would need to act in a very quick and cunning manner to actually pull it off and deal damage to the opponent whilst using this as a manner of distraction. It's a good technique but there are better. The neat thing about it is that the clone too can use smoke techniques and you can use the clone as a source of smoke although this one most probably will not work in windy conditions. It sucks that it obstructs both our visions but that doesn't really matter because I can sense you anyways so this would only work on people who don't have the ability to see without seeing. My only question is, can I make as many of these as I want? "



Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates a clone made out of smoke from their hands. When it is struck, it turns into a smoke similar to the smokescreen the user creates. The smoke clone is mostly used as a diversion tactic like other clone techniques, however, the user can also turn the clone into a source for smoke ninjutsu at any time.
Note: The clone can only use smoke related jutsu.
Note: Can only be used by smoke bios.

 

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"Very good, and four is the common number. The more you make, the weaker they are though, so I'd advise against it. Nonetheless, let's continue onward."


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their smoke to wrap around the opponent with a minimal level of physical power that will prevent them from moving.
Note: Can only be used by a smoke bios.



"Now, with this technique, you will manipulate any existing smoke or make smoke, to wrap around the opponent. This will aim to restrain them in their place. Very useful, can be used with the aforementioned clone, cause it to burst into smoke, and smother the opponent. Use it against this clone."

I state, as a clone is created which runs towards the girl.
 

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He tells me the next technique I have to perform and hands me another scroll, I read the contents of it whilst he explains the technique which seemed very simple.

"Very useful, can be used with the aforementioned clone, cause it to burst into smoke, and smother the opponent. Use it against this clone."

"Are you bli-" , the man does not wait for me to finish and sends a clone dashing towards me. I didn't have a smoke clone on the field so I simply waited for the man's clone to come within range and began releasing smoke from the palm of my hands, this time manipulation of this nature came to me more... ... well naturally. As his clone came within short range I manipulated the smoke to wrap around it thus restricting its movement. i then through a kunai through the man's clone causing it to poof away, the kunai kept it's trajectory towards the man's face. I knew he would stop or dodge it with ease so I simply proceeded to give my analysis of the technique.

" Binding Smoke, very simple tech that can be used with very little effort. The user can manipulate his smoke or other smoke to wrap around their opponent and restrict their opponents movements. Not much can be said about this one really but it does give me an idea."



Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their smoke to wrap around the opponent with a minimal level of physical power that will prevent them from moving.
Note: Can only be used by a smoke bios.

 

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A kunai blasts towards me, and with an instantaneous reaction, its whipped away by a chain from my right sleeve.

"Good, it seems you're becoming more natural with this."


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will shoot out small dark bombs from his palms that will then release thick smoke to create a veil of smokescreen that will suffocate the target.
Note: Can only be used by smoke bios.



"Alright, now for this technique, you will just unleash some small dark bombs from your palms (these bombs contain smoke within them). This releases the thick smoke, which creates a veil of smoke, which aims to suffocate the opponent within it. You know what to do."

I state, as a clone is created which runs towards the girl.
 

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The man hands me yet another scroll and begins to explain my next task as I read.

"Hmm, seems simple enough. Come at me."

The man wastes no time and sends another clone dashing towards me. I begin to concentrate smoke chakra within the palms of my hands and swiftly after begin shooting them out as small dark bombs. I aimed the first one at his forehead and it exploded upon impact thus causing him to come to a standstill looking downwards as the thick smoke would surely be in his eyes. I shot more smoke bombs out of my hands aimed at the man's clone, all exploding upon impact with him. Each bomb released a veil of smokescreen that most definately suffocated the clone.

"Another simple tech that allows the user to not only obstruct the opponent's view but also suffocate them in the process. Once again this is another technique that would be cooler if the user could see through the smoke. Other than that, it's pretty neat."



Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will shoot out small dark bombs from his palms that will then release thick smoke to create a veil of smokescreen that will suffocate the target.
Note: Can only be used by smoke bios.

 
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"Good job, it seems that its quite easy for you to do."


Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: After creating a single smoke clone, should it be sufficiently struck, the user will cause the smoke to spread in ordercreate additional multiple smoke clones.
Note: The clones can only use smoke related jutsu and the user can create up to five clones
Note: Can only used by smoke bios



"With this here technique, after creating a single smoke based clone, and its struck then you will cause the smoke to spread out. This allows you to create more clones from that smoke of that clone, making up to 5 clones. Pretty bad ass."

I state, as a clone is created which runs towards the girl.
 

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The man hands me yet another scroll and begins to explain my next task as I read.

"I think I can do this."

He sends another clone dashing towards me. Swiftly I create a smoke clone which begins running towards the man's clone. My clone is struck and turns into smoke. I manipulate the smoke to form five more clones that then proceed to attack the man's clone and suffocate it.

"There's really not much to this one, the user creates a clone out of smoke and then if that clone is struck, he can use that smoke to create more. Simple and quick, I've got no questions, let's proceed."



Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: After creating a single smoke clone, should it be sufficiently struck, the user will cause the smoke to spread in ordercreate additional multiple smoke clones.
Note: The clones can only use smoke related jutsu and the user can create up to five clones
Note: Can only used by smoke bios

 

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"Good, so we shall do."

I state, as we proceed.


Type: Attack
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will release smoke from his wrist launchers and manipulate it into spherical spinning cloud of smoke around their hands. Within the smoke the user will have released multiple small shuriken from their hand. The shuriken will move through the smoke, though this would be unknown to the enemy. As the smoke and shuriken are rotating around the users fist the user will then punch the enemy and the spinning shuriken slice the enemy once contact is made.
Note: Courtesy of Omegā.



"With this technique, you will release smoke from your hands (wrist launchers are part of the old way Smoke was manipulated), and manipulate it around your hands in a spherical clouds of smoke. Within this smoke, you unleash some Shuriken, that move through it and rotate inside it. Through a punch, you will unleash the shuriken and deliver several cuts with the punches. Pretty simple."
 

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Yet another scroll is handed to me and I begin to study it as my sensei explains my next task.

"Interesting." I say smiling for a split second before proceeding to perform the technique.

I began to channel smoke chakra within my hands and released it from my hands as smoke which I then manipulated to form spherical clouds of smoke around each hand. Simultaneous to this I released a number of shuriken into the smoke.

"Hmm no clone huh?" I said dashing towards the man quite swiftly.

Upon reaching close range my I would use my right hand to deliver a powerful blow to the man's face thus slicing his cheek open.

"Why So Serious?" I said with a cheeky smile on my face as I threw the punch.


Type: Attack
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will release smoke from his wrist launchers and manipulate it into spherical spinning cloud of smoke around their hands. Within the smoke the user will have released multiple small shuriken from their hand. The shuriken will move through the smoke, though this would be unknown to the enemy. As the smoke and shuriken are rotating around the users fist the user will then punch the enemy and the spinning shuriken slice the enemy once contact is made.
Note: Courtesy of Omegā.

 
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"Not bad, moving on."

I state, as I bring forth the next technique.


Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user makes a single handseal whilst kneading chakra in either their hands or mouth. With the point of origin wherever the chakra is pooled, they'll then release up to three highly condensed spheres of smoke that are launched with a great, pressurized force not unlike many Fūton techniques. Upon striking a target, each bullet erupts like a smoke bomb and goes on to release a large cloud of smoke around the target.

Note: Only useable by bios that've learned Smoke Ninjutsu.
Note: Courtesy of Nanaki



"With this technique, you will form a single hand seal and kneads your chakra in either your hands or mouth. There where you focused, you can release up to three spheres of smoke, highly condensed. Once striking the area it needs to, it erupts and unleashes a large cloud of smoke. Quite useful, use it against my clone."

I create a clone that runs towards her.
 

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I read through the next scroll as the man explains its contents to me. Once done, I perform a single hand seal and begin to channel smoke chakra into my mouth. I swiftly release three highly condensed spheres of smoke from my mouth towards the man's clone as it charged to me. Upon impact the spheres explode thus releasing a large cloud of smoke that covers the man's clone.

"Alright so there's not really much to this technique either, the user simply shoots three condensed balls of smoke from either their mouth or hands and upon contact with the opponent they erupt into a cloud of smoke. This can be good because it not only deals blunt damage to the opponent but it also obstructs the opponents view and can suffocate them. Good technique."



Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user makes a single handseal whilst kneading chakra in either their hands or mouth. With the point of origin wherever the chakra is pooled, they'll then release up to three highly condensed spheres of smoke that are launched with a great, pressurized force not unlike many Fūton techniques. Upon striking a target, each bullet erupts like a smoke bomb and goes on to release a large cloud of smoke around the target.

Note: Only useable by bios that've learned Smoke Ninjutsu.
Note: Courtesy of Nanaki

 

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"I agree, and it works well with this."

I state, as I reveal the next technique.


Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A (+10 to Smoke Ninjutsu)
Description: When preparing a Smoke technique, the user makes two extra handseals and adjusts the ratio of particulate matter within their initial technique. The increased particulate matter causes the smoke to become much thicker and heavier, giving it a darker gray tone. And due to the increased weight, the user's smoke hits with more force than is typical. In addition, this process will negate Smoke's standard weaknesses to both Water and Wind.

Note: Only useable by bios that've learned Smoke Ninjutsu.
Note: Only useable four times per battle.
Note: Courtesy of Nanaki



"After using a Smoke technique, you will form two extra hand seals and adjust the ration of particulates in the smoke itself. This makes it thicker and heavier, changing from a pearly white to a darker gray in color smoke. Due to the increase in weight, the smokes hits harder, adding damage to smoke technique in general, and negating the weakness to Water and Wind. Pretty simple. You know what to do."

I say as a clone is created.
 

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After analyzing the scroll I once again perform a single hand seal and begin to channel smoke chakra into my mouth. I swiftly release three highly condensed spheres of smoke from my mouth towards the man's clone as it charged to me, but this time as they approach the clone I weave two extra hand seals and adjust the ratio of particulate matter within the smoke bombs. This time the man's clone poofs away as soon as the first sphere hits him and two the other two continue towards the man

"Okay so this basically makes them more, "Solid".



Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A (+10 to Smoke Ninjutsu)
Description: When preparing a Smoke technique, the user makes two extra handseals and adjusts the ratio of particulate matter within their initial technique. The increased particulate matter causes the smoke to become much thicker and heavier, giving it a darker gray tone. And due to the increased weight, the user's smoke hits with more force than is typical. In addition, this process will negate Smoke's standard weaknesses to both Water and Wind.

Note: Only useable by bios that've learned Smoke Ninjutsu.
Note: Only useable four times per battle.
Note: Courtesy of Nanaki

 

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"Good, let's continue."


Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user or a clone to merge with a source of smoke and move covertly through it. This effectively enables them to conceal their presence and move about in total silence. They can't attack while in merged with the smoke and must reform before their turn ends. The speed they can move while in the smoke is slightly faster than a running ninja.

Note: Only useable by bios that've learned Smoke Ninjutsu and their smoke-based clones.
Note: Only useable thrice per battle.
Note: Only useable in large smoke fields.
Note: Courtesy of Nanaki



"A simple technique where you or a clone will merge with a source of smoke, and move through it covertly. This allows you to conceal your presence, and move in total silence, but you can't attack and must reform before you can attack again. You are slightly faster than a running ninja in the smoke."

I state, as I show the field.

"Use the smoke you just released."
 

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As I dashed towards the cloud of smoke I began concentrating smoke chakra all around my body. Once this was done I jumped into the thick smoke cloud whilst simultaneously releasing said chakra within mt own body thus temporarily allowing me to merge with the smoke. I then jumped out on the other side of the smoke cloud completely back to normal.

"Whew that was fun! A very cool technique if you ask me, but it has one very big disadvantage, should the opponent use a wind technique and you're still within the smoke, that might cause your particles to be scattered and you may die, thus it need to be used very wisely."



Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user or a clone to merge with a source of smoke and move covertly through it. This effectively enables them to conceal their presence and move about in total silence. They can't attack while in merged with the smoke and must reform before their turn ends. The speed they can move while in the smoke is slightly faster than a running ninja.

Note: Only useable by bios that've learned Smoke Ninjutsu and their smoke-based clones.
Note: Only useable thrice per battle.
Note: Only useable in large smoke fields.
Note: Courtesy of Nanaki

 

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"Indeed, smart observation."


Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user makes the Snake handseal, then slams their palms on the ground. This motion can easily be misconstrued as the initiation of a Doton technique, when in fact they're channeling dense smoke into the very earth beneath their target. Once released, the smoke erupts from the ground in a forceful torrent that damages the target's legs, in addition to knocking them high into the air.

Note: Only useable by bios that've learned Smoke Ninjutsu.
Note: Courtesy of Nanaki



"Now this is a simple one, where you will form the Snake hand seal and slam your hands onto the ground. This allows you to release smoke from beneath the opponent, hitting them into the air and damaging their legs. Pretty simple, use it on my clone."

I say, as I create a clone that runs towards my student.
 
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